Hogwarts: Master Daolong

I don't like it very much. It relies on the world's number one wizard Daolong, but the protagonist has to be tortured and brainwashed by Dumbledore's personality guidance and education, and is forcibly assigned to Gryffindor. It was originally a deal, Daolon wanted the Sorcerer's Stone, and Dumbledore wanted to kill Voldemort. It would be inappropriate for Lao Deng to guide and control the protagonist in various ways, especially since the protagonist and Daolong still have this kind of relationship as both master and father. In this situation, Snape still dares to dance in front of the protagonist?

The idea is very novel, but I am not optimistic about the integration of the two worlds. The worldview and performance of Jackie Chan's Adventures and what Harry Potter is like have nothing to do with the writing level. Unless the worldview of Jackie Chan's Adventures is downplayed and erased, I don't think any author can write this book well and harmoniously. If the results are not good, the author can use it to practice writing. I think the author can try to write a book in which the protagonist travels from the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures to the world of Harry Potter. Then the protagonist was originally Daolon's apprentice, and he has a lot of knowledge about qi magic. I recently read a book about Escape from Famine to Harry Potter. The writing style of that book is very suitable for this kind of setting. If the author plans to write, you can refer to it.

Um, how is this written? Do you write what comes to mind? In Chapter 13, the protagonist and Hermione are in the car and arrive at Hogwarts immediately. In Chapter 14, they go to the station again in the morning. They have characters and ideas.

The sauce is here, bubbling here

Doesn't the author plan to change the order of the chapters? Such low-level errors can also occur

Has Daolong become the most powerful dark wizard on earth?