Chinese Medicine Missionary at the Priest's Monastery

The medical master of urban literature is finally dissatisfied with human beings? Heading to the World of Sword and Sorcery?

Author, you write well. Your plot makes me feel ten years younger.

The author of Rubik's Cube Enchantment... The soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles.... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Over the mountains and singing... Return... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Singing high and triumphant... And sharing the same robe with all its glory... 𓀋𓀠 𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

How should I put it, I've seen the latest one, so let's evaluate it. The problem now is that the intelligence level of the NPC is set too low. Take the heresy judge for example. The task they were given was to kill the heretics and rescue the clergy. According to the language of the troops on the other side of the forest, the proportion of rescuing the clergy was a bit larger. In this case, when faced with a person who is suspected of being the mastermind, he chooses to go directly to the person with whom he can communicate. Moreover, he still chooses to act recklessly even when the person keeps trying and communicates with him repeatedly. Even if that B. Ferguson spoke out in public through communication means, he still pretended not to hear and continued to act recklessly. He had to kill the protagonist, even if he couldn't beat him at all, even if the protagonist only needed to commit murder, none of the 15 people had the ability to resist. In this situation, anyone with any intelligence, no matter how extreme it is, should think about whether he has misunderstood. After all, if someone with such strength wants to do bad things, he doesn't need a conspiracy to just stop eating beef. But heresy judges shouldn't be reckless. If you don't beat me to death, I will beat you to death. You ask me why I beat you to death? Is it because I heard that you are a bad person and you dare to resist me and beat you to death? If the judges are just brainless and stupid, then it makes sense. But if the judges have no brains and are just sand dollars, then why would they be individually entrusted with a typical task that requires investigation, such as rescuing the clergy? Why did he also show the judge's ability to think independently in the middle of the game: "We have to kill Xie Chong to save more people." No, buddy, what have you done if you have such a brain? In summary, it is recommended to apply a patch to characters or groups that behave very stupidly and add stupid settings. For example, when entering a combat state, the intelligence plummets, the acuity of combat increases, and the acceptance of external information decreases. This can solve the reason why communication is impossible, because it treats you as an enemy and passively and automatically ignores information irrelevant to combat. In addition, the setting of extraordinary power is very vague. Before the chapter of leaving the city, a team was formed to defeat Fingel. Fingel is a species that can kill dragons. Even if it is a seriously injured dragon, judging from the strength of the team, it is impossible to see that it has the ability to kill it. Otherwise, Fingel is too good. How can he be worthy of the title of "natural disaster level" monster? It seems a bit casual. Furthermore, it can be seen that the identity of the protagonist allows him to use the skills and moves of multiple sects. What about the control? Forced control to come to the rescue. Wouldn't it be over if you just use a set of forceful controls to break all the bones of the sand coins and control them so that these brainless people have to listen to your opinions? Has such a powerful protagonist never encountered medical trouble? When the doctor makes trouble, just use force to force him to move and that's it. If you really can't bear it, seeing blood is not an unbearable thing. The Clay Bodhisattva also has a temper. So, in my opinion, the protagonist's current problems are: 1. He doesn't know how to use his power, and he can control it or not. I don't believe how he can cooperate when he kicks those judges hundreds of kilometers away. He breaks all the bones. I don't believe he can put them together in an instant. Is it possible that a judge is stronger than Fingel of the Bull Demon? 2. He has a good temper but has no bottom line or limit. He seems to have been bullied. Even Jesse, who has been rescued by the protagonist, dares to be angry at the protagonist. He also puts aside the questioning and asks first whether he is worthy and then whether he is worthy. There are relatively few problems in character creation. Most of the characters created by the author are quite likable, but there is one character who is very unlikable: Jesse: I don't comment on the aspect of the male protagonist's apprentice who has unrequited love. The introduction of getting into trouble left only one person in the Four Knights, leading Eve away so that the protagonist failed to save the scene in time, and finally had to have his butt wiped. The protagonist, Kuhaha, had to get a blank stare after wiping his butt. Later, the protagonist recruits Jesse to ask about the whereabouts of the witch. He just doesn't know whether the nose is a nose or the eyes are not eyes. This is to show off to the protagonist and ignore the life-saving grace. Good guy, he saved a white-eyed wolf. NPC shaping: Some NPCs are quite contrasting and lovable, such as the mentor Lucas. On the surface, he seems to be grumpy and looks down on the original owner, but in fact, he is more delicate and notices the uniqueness of the original owner. When the protagonist encounters danger, the first thing he thinks of is to take away the shelter. The adventurers in the early stage are all well-shaped, and each one can see its characteristics. They are not just trying to show off, which is also a feature of this book. But when it comes to describing group NPCs in large situations, I make mistakes. It gives me the feeling of writing a group of people as one person. Let's talk about heretics judges. There shouldn't be a single person in your group who has the sense to realize that something bad has happened. It's been so long and there's still no news from the priests. Isn't anyone worried? All in all, let's revise it again. The novel is quite interesting, and it's not the usual show-off style, but I still hope to polish it more, so it's just a practice.

The waist is the home of the kidneys! Wonderful, wonderful! I learned it, make a fist

The sauce is here, bubbling here

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The settings from many years ago are too retro, right?

Good looking

The male protagonist's name is Zoe. Sorry, I only think of Papaya Star Spirit all the time.

Is it a trumpet? It doesn't read like a newbie, it's quite nice.

You... Medical student transcribed the book?

Why is there no one? Isn't it nice?