
Douluo Dalu: Just Awakened, Qian Renxue Binds to My Simulator
斗罗:刚觉醒,千仞雪绑定模拟器
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 360k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
159Chapters
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What the hell are you writing? These dozen or so chapters are all about Qian Renxue. Who is the protagonist? It's so ridiculous that she must be an eunuch.
Qian Renxue has simulated it many times! Why is there still no progress and vigilance? ! ! In a certain simulation, the protagonist had already reminded him once, but when he was decisive in killing, he didn't listen at all Then in another simulation, he relented several times, but didn't he feel that something was wrong? You should be vigilant. When a lion fights a rabbit, he must use all his strength. In the last simulation, after a lot of hard work, you finally became the emperor. You have finished writing. Have you completed the great cause of unification? Also, doesn't Qian Renxue intend to imitate her mother and her grandfather? I have simulated it several times! Finally, come on, the author🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓[ fn=32]🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 Updated every day, every 10,000 words.
The theme is quite fresh
Come on, also, after Qian Renxue has simulated too many times, you will know from the male protagonist's behavior when he encounters her that he knows part of the future. After all, in the description of the simulator, the male protagonist's reaction was quite obvious several times.
The three women in Wuhun Palace are all idiots. If you travel through time, either ignore them or kill them all.
You should refer to this book
"I Really Didn't Want to Be Simulated by the Empress", although this book is not very well written, there is no problem with the idea! The biggest problem with your book is that the main point of view is not the protagonist, and there are too few scenes of the protagonist outside the simulation and within the simulation! The protagonist should change the world, not Qian Renxue.
The latest two chapters are a bit less rigorous. When Tang San fought Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong, the three of them had just broken through to the god level. With the power of the artifact, at best, their combat power was above that of a priest (101-110) and below that of a third-level god (111-120). This alone is enough to crush a bunch of quasi-gods. As for the protagonist, who has not yet fully become a god, it is ridiculous to be able to hurt the god king.
A million-year soul ring cannot only be upgraded to three levels, and it is not a titled Douluo after level 94.
The time span is too big. You might as well write that the system has been updated too much. Did the author just write whatever comes to mind?
Why is that simulator in Qian Renxue? Shouldn't the simulator be there for the protagonist?
Um, I remember that the twin martial souls are both innately full of soul power? Did I remember it wrong?