Thirteen Islands

Overall, the plot is remarkable, but some parts could be cut appropriately, such as some unsubtle environmental descriptions, which are a bit hard on the eyes. The author may consider speeding up the plot. Anyway, the third chapter is about to come, so he might as well try to speed up the plot in the future. To put it bluntly, push it directly in the direction of opening a harem. After all, the author's writing style is indeed good and he has great potential in this area. To summarize the first four chapters, I scored 3/5, with 1 point deducted because the plot was a bit draggy, and 1 point deducted because I didn't see the selling point I wanted to see.