Film and TV: from a Sunny Day

I can't write about Sunny Days without any experience

If you write about a movie and don't even have pictures, how can you make people want to watch it?

What is written! Did you check the information before writing? Another brainless text

Generally speaking, the author's writing style is okay, but there are flaws in the plot setting. Still looking at the first copy. Come on✊

The first story ends in an anticlimax, let's put it this way, it's a sunny day, and there's actually nothing to write about. It's just about fighting, fighting, playing, negotiating with someone, photographing girls, and so on.

I've read two stories, and both of them have inexplicable endings? There was a lot of foreshadowing, and then it ended in a hurry... I looked confused.

Thank you all for your suggestions and criticisms.

The context of your book doesn't match up, so what did you write? The plot is obviously wrong. Did you write it yourself? No, you can use AI

Actually, the writing is okay, but the speed is not very good.

Are these days related to youth?