One Hexagram Every Day, I Will Cultivate Immortality in the Year of Disaster

I don't like fools the most. They should think that they can't understand.

How should I put it? The author has sophisticated writing skills and rich social experience, but he is obviously a traditional writer who writes serious novels in the shell of online novels. If the author wants to support his family or even make a fortune through online writing, there are too many things that need to be changed. Long-winded, 100,000 words of intrigue in a small puddle, 100,000 words of dragging the family and supporting various aunts and uncles plus psychological activities. The Holy Mother's heart attacks at every turn. The protagonist is so busy that he uses his own opportunities to help others. There are too many questions, too many, and they are all poisonous. I skipped reading later when I subscribed, and I couldn't stand it any longer. This is because the author has some writing skills, so I say so much. I don't even think the author can change it. In the end, my fate is nothing more than a waste of time and energy, and not much money to be made. I lament that I have learned a lot but am depressed and frustrated. Die!

Rubbish. After writing more than 20 pieces, a special power appeared. Other times it was: I came to be a nanny, I came to show off my IQ, I came to show off my emotional intelligence. How could I write such an imbecile?

How should I put it? You have so many relatives who are so kind to you, but you don't teach others to practice martial arts. Outsiders just say a few words for you, so you teach outsiders to practice martial arts. To be honest, I don't like it very much. Moreover, you have paid to practice martial arts. Why should you teach others for free? It is unreasonable.

Read your book title clearly and then think about what you should write. Otherwise, you should abandon the fantasy skin and invest in history and the city. If you want to write fantasy, write it well. I catch game and fish here all day long. For martial arts, just briefly describe what others taught you, and then the protagonist finds something with spiritual energy, refines it and improves it in an instant. . I'm all convinced, buddy.

I read a small part of it before it was put on the shelves and summarized a few points. Please don't criticize: 1. In the year of great disaster, evil people are around. As soon as my family has eaten a bite of food, the protagonist's sister wants to send food to others, and the protagonist actually agrees. 2. If there are too many relatives, they all need help. 3. The presence of the golden finger is not strong. It is like writing a long article, then it pops up and then disappears (the first time is to increase strength, the second time is copper skin, the third time is rock flesh, and the fourth time is it a tendon or a vein). 4The biggest shortcoming is that Su Hui is a modern person. If he is an aboriginal, forget it, just pretend that he has never been exposed to anything. The biggest advantage of modern people is that there are many sources of information. You should know that a gentleman does not stand behind a dangerous wall and his wealth should not be exposed. You should also know this in daily TV dramas and communicating with others. In summary, it's all about playing house, all supported by the author's hand. (If there is something wrong, you can delete the comment, please do not curse, it is against the law)

Are you cooking at noon every day for fear that others will not see or smell the smoke and the smell of meat? Do you want to hide some of the meat and stew it in broad daylight?😥

The bandits are always asking for food. After reading so many chapters, they have no livestock or crops, so they can only eat, drink, sleep and wait to die. How did this family survive for so many years? How can we maintain so much order and occupation?

Is the author a human machine from a female channel? Sure enough, daily detoxification

It's right to have bad grades. Based on my experience of reading books for many years, this book will be a eunuch sooner or later. Look at the title of your book and then look at the content you wrote. To be honest, there are not many books that can make me jump in the early stage. Yours is like this one. It's a little cool but not a little cool. It has no content. You write trivial things every day. Do you think the grades will be good?

It was awkward to watch, with too many trivial details and too long. The protagonist broke the legs of his second uncle's cousin when his second uncle snatched his own badger seeds. The neighbor was burned by someone and had no money to buy badger seed oil for medicine, but the protagonist refused to give it. It looks boring, like it was written by a woman

If you are really good at hydrology, you can write a chapter while eating. There are several chapters like this. If you write so much about the kindness to relatives, how can you pay it back later? Is it a brief summary or a detailed description? Is it also descriptive? When will the protagonist leave the mini-map, and will he take his relatives with him?

The 50 or so chapters are still short for parents, and you have no experience of living in poor rural areas. You might as well change the title of the book to "Time Travel Fortune Telling: Pretending to Experience the Life of Poor Parents"

You should submit to the romance section, which focuses on describing rural life in the 1970s and 1980s. You are in the wrong place to write about fantasy.

I just saw the subscription now, and the first subscription was given to the author, but I really can't stand it anymore, and I died from the poison I was born in the late 1990s, and I still have very clear memories of the countryside, especially when I was a child and lived a hard life, so it seems very fragmented. Let me talk about a few logical points 1. The elder brother of a scholar was asked to get his money back overnight after he failed in the examination You must know that you are a boy first and then a scholar, and then you pass the examination and become an official in the court So the protagonist is the brother-in-law of the scholar. Although the status of the family is not that high, it is impossible to have that kind of situation in the village. Of course, This is a small poison, you can skip it 2. Chinese medicinal materials and badgers, dig a large piece emmm, this is, whether it is a pig badger or a wolverine, there is no more than ten kilograms. If you dig it in normal winter, six or seven kilograms is already very big, and generally speaking, badgers are two big badgers and a few small badgers, no There are those like the author who dig up seven or eight animals at a time, and then those like Dihuang Chonglou, who dig out one sack at a time. The resources on the mountain are really not that great. They are relatively scattered. Normally driving the mountain people, soaking in the mountain for one day, only digs out six or seven kilograms, which is already a lot. Moreover, raw Chinese medicine cannot be sold at a high price. It needs to be processed, such as dried in the sun. Slices, etc., The author has the feeling that he can directly sell them to individuals after digging them up. This aspect is mainly because he did not make it clear. I don't blame the author. What if what he robs after killing is a prepared one? Expensive means of transportation are usually marked, especially military horses. Military horses have special marks. If you enter the city, the officers and soldiers at the city gate will see that you are riding a military horse and you are not a military household, and they will be embarrassed to detain it directly for you 4. The most poisonous point: let beggars help sell medicine. And the money was left in the hands of the beggar, and he sold it for more than four taels a day What is the concept? You found a beggar, and the beggar was a woman, with a bunch of little beggars. There was no gang to manage them, and no villains to help them. They smelled bad and went to the drug store, and the doctor at the drug store examined them. , He was given a prescription but there was no medicine. When he went out, he met a beggar and told him that he had medicine. A medicine was equivalent to hundreds or thousands of yuan. He did not hesitate to go to the beggar to buy the medicine. The beggar sold him the medicine in one day, which is equivalent to more than 40,000 yuan or nearly 50,000 yuan. Then he went back to take medicine? Is that what you mean? It's not that beggars can't escape, but in that era, no matter how simple the boss's surname was, he couldn't do it, right? Let's not talk about it anymore. Just read it as an imaginary fantasy novel about troubled times. Just don't use your brain to kill time. This is what happens when you read it with your brain

I've read thirty or forty chapters, but it's so long and boring, and the plot doesn't advance at all. It's better to call it "The Story of Parents" 😰

Fantasy novels, written like this, six hundred and sixty-six, fantasy, warmth, family life, nonsense, nonsense, etc.

The writing style is there, and the heart of the Holy Mother is there. When I have the strength, I call it affectionate and righteous, but when I don't, I call it stupid.

When I saw Chapter 290, I felt like I was falling apart. A few chapters later, I got the Golden Elixir, and a few chapters met the Transformation God again. Then I felt that the message settings were not enough, so I started to add simulation settings. . . Collapsed

Chapter 5: Drink porridge and write a chapter, you are awesome too

I listened to a book last night and said that the field mouse I caught weighed a pound. I apologize for my lack of knowledge, but I have never seen a field mouse weighing more than a pound

I stopped reading after reading a few chapters. The reading experience is very poor, as if it was written with AI. The reading is not coherent at all. It feels like playing a game and the frame is stuck. It is very laborious to read.

It's quite silly. I've never seen or heard of wild vegetables in winter, and pheasants can even nest in their nests 😅

Author, why don't you get a penny to comment? They just publish some messy chapter reviews, which interferes with the reading of the book. Readers who originally wanted to read the book have no intention of reading further after seeing this kind of chapter review. Even though the threshold is only one penny, it can definitely filter out most of the people who only know how to get high.

The novel is good and suits my taste. I just finished reading the updated chapter 57😋

It's good to keep this pace - there's so much fast pace these days.

The emotional descriptions and actions don't match up. Is the Qidian editor blind? Can this be signed?

The more I read this book, the more I want to laugh. This crappy book always mentions what to eat next month. Nima, it seems like someone will pay them wages next month.

The original book was okay, but the plot was too fast.

After reading five chapters, I didn't feel any fantasy flavor, and I felt the flavor of the Great Famine era.