I'm in Mondstadt, I Really Don't Want to Become a God

The writing felt a bit immature at the beginning, but it's getting better and better now. Emmmm, it's like a baby that has grown up (bushi) within ten days of birth.

The writing and plot are pretty good, but at first glance, I feel melancholy The following scenes include the fierce battle with Ossel, the tough defense of Bache and Shenhe, and the angry and thunderous movie (there may also be main or branch plots such as saving the soldier Hua Sanli, petitioning the Kamisato family for the people), and then the coup at the Wisdom Palace, whoever loses is the rebel. Then there is You Are Not Alone, Funina... Although, I suddenly have no desire to read. It's not that it's not good, it's just that I want to see new life

It's all written like this. It's better not to write this book without fully understanding Youla. Of course, it would be even better to take Youla with you on the trip.

From the perspective of an ordinary player who started the server, this character was a bad guy when he first came out (killing countless people). He wanted to kill the protagonist as soon as they met, but Mona gave up the killing intention after running away with the protagonist. Then the background of the story was completely messed up and forced three betrayals and then started to go dark (killing people). Then he learned (the truth) at the Sumeru World Tree, creating an image of being deceived and then turning dark. Then started to regret. The way to regret is to want to delete yourself at the World Tree. As you can imagine, the result was that everyone's memories were simply changed (the person was still killed, but everyone's memories were modified). Then most of the people in Xumi slowly began to accept him, understand him, and enlighten him (oh my god, what kind of ghost fandom is intruding). What is the difference between this and revising history books in my childhood? The most outrageous thing is to forgive him like this. As of now, the opinions of players are already very loud. Most players don't buy it and the turnover is not good. I guess the planner also knew that this character was very poorly whitened, and then in order to whitewash Cannon again during the summer vacation (probably in order to expand the player base and cater to some fans, or maybe this planner is just a fan), he force-fed old players. At the beginning, he created the hero mysteriously so that the players "unauthorized" thought that Huang Mao was the hero, but in the end the hero was Cannon. Hhh Huang Mao became a clown, and completely transformed from sleeping on his head to a camera. And Nelu became a fairy and had many scenes with the Cannon Hero. At this point, the character of Cannon has completely failed, causing a large number of male players to abandon the game (it has indeed catered to and attracted a large number of fandom players to join). At this point, Genshin Impact has turned from prosperity to decline and has begun to decline. Even if the subsequent plots are also exciting, it has indeed begun to become lonely.

It didn't overwhelm the protagonist, but it was too small

There should be many official forces in various countries that can extinguish the Eyes of God. If the doctor hangs the marrow for three months, you can hang the Eyes of Seven Gods, and you will be the God of the Seven Elements 🙂

He just promised Yula to help him with his family, and now he teams up with Ying to do a mission. Isn't it a bit 😥

I want to know how many times the protagonist was beaten almost to death. It's all boring.

The writing is good and the plot is smooth. Two small questions. First, what impact will the arrival of the protagonist have on the subsequent abyss? The abyss is the unchosen possibility. The abyss before the protagonist came, it can be said that I didn't hate the protagonist because it didn't contain it (it doesn't make sense logically, because the past, present and future of the Teyvat universe exist together), but after the protagonist comes, the abyss does contain the protagonist. He will [hate] the protagonist. I don't know how the author set it up, but this involves the underlying world view. Second, the symbolism of the protagonist. Tevat strictly adheres to the idolatry of occultism, Rene's occultism, and the four elements can create the sword of truth and imitate the four shadows of heaven, so the traveler is heaven at that moment. Everyone speaks of gold, and the species created by dreams and fantasies are nobler in character than ordinary creatures, so the elemental alien species sublimate towards fantasy. In the same way, when the descendant comes to Teyvat, his personality is beyond humans, beyond gods, and beyond destiny. Dulin's deeds imitate the Dragon of Origin, and Albedo's deeds imitate the laws of heaven, so they become transcendants. Who does the protagonist's personality correspond to?

I haven't ordered a Genshin Impact fanfic for a long time because there are too many eunuchs. The free period of this book seems to be okay, but it has become more and more popular since it was released. You can't be afraid to finish writing the plot and just lay out the facts. You can accumulate fans even if you write good content for 800,000 yuan, but if you write good content for 500,000 yuan, you may die in the middle.

Genshin Impact

Power does not come out of thin air. It is so easy to obtain, but who is behind it?

Don't let the main plot become a harem. The characters in it also have their own personalities, and they can't be accepted by just saying a few words. Moreover, it is a harem, so how many can be accepted is a problem.

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Who is the heroine? Or anyone?

Happy Children's Day

Can you please stop being so thorough in the comment section?😰😰😰