China Entertainment's My Dreamland with Heavenly Immortals

When crowdfunding to write a book, my imagination is still too limited. If anyone has any ideas or ideas in their own minds and don't write novels, they can post them in the comment area and I will add them to the book if they feel appropriate. Let's see what we can all write in the end. This is also my first time writing a book! Don't be shy.

It's too fast. It's only been four or five years since it's been published. Liu Yifei will have to turn into an 80-year-old woman before it's released 😁

Are there so few people? I think it's okay

No wonder it's not popular, it's full-screen al, the conflict is so illogical.

Single Liu Qianqian, or multiple women, please make it clear and don't waste my time

There is a lot of nonsense, and each paragraph requires a lot of foreshadowing, but there is only so much practical information. I have read several books written in this way, but I couldn't listen to them for a long time. If I couldn't stand them, I stopped listening.

I just read Chapter 6, I want to ask you how old the protagonist was before he was reborn, 30 or 40 How old is he now about 14 after rebirth? Chapter 6 made me feel that the protagonist is so childish, In my mind, my age is not more than 18 before rebirth I feel like a little yellow hair who has never been involved in social practice activities, Underage thoughts, the protagonist you described is currently showing two words, , childish