Reborn in 2004: Reunited with the Celestial Fairy

Fairy

Tell a cold joke: How do you evaluate this book? High emotional intelligence: There are many invalid descriptions. Low EQ: Too watery. 😂😂😂

It's really not as good as the previous one. I just think you are a bit literary. Although I haven't seen the later stage, this book has a lot of descriptions of the protagonist's character and background. In my opinion, it's all about points reduction (full debuff), fear of cars, different surnames, blah blah blah, which reader cares about this. Judging from what the author wrote, he should have absorbed the opinions of readers, but what he has absorbed is the opinion of "anti-fans who don't read Shan Liu". I'm very naughty and afraid of being said to be a dog licker or something. The readability is too poor, there are no ups and downs, there is no progress in the main line, and there is a lot of writing in trivial places. I've clicked in three times but I can't make it through the charging process. I can't convince myself. In my opinion, what you wrote is not an online article, but a diary-type prose. It uses the single heroine Sissi as the core selling point. As a result, it cannot attract core readers. This is your problem. Do you have an outline? It is not as interesting as some pendant-type heroines. I feel like you are a bit similar to a bottle of red wine. You want to write something different from others, but the result is that it is really abstract and "non-mainstream". He can still sell a setting. I don't know what your selling point is?

It's almost 600,000 words, and I only made one movie. The main plot is not discernible at all. The male and female protagonists didn't interact much at all. I can't stand it anymore!

Keep writing about Xiao Liu, it's okay, just write your love and everyone will support it.

To choose Liu for a movie, you have to audition! I want to pretend to be 13, but I'm afraid of losing Liu's fans! He wants to eat from Liu Fan, but he pretends to be aloof! Totally useless! I am not a Liu fan, and I read entertainment articles just for fun. Your writing style is not pleasing to both sides, and will make Liu fans and passers-by who read entertainment articles feel uncomfortable! The title of the book has been decided. Don't you, the author, feel that there is a conflict? If you want this mouthful of vermicelli rice, just lick it openly, don't hold your pipa and half-cover your face, pretending to be 13!

The first one is from 2009, this one is from 2004, will the next one be from 1999? You have to make arrangements in advance to go to the United States, international students or second generation Chinese. Then you can go a little earlier, it's not impossible for the fairy mother to do it.

The biggest problem is that the daily and business aspects of the male protagonist are a bit too cumbersome. It seems that there have been so many updates, but not much has been done. The writing of the female protagonist feels pretty good, and it is still different from other books. However, after the first movie was filmed, the male and female protagonists interacted too little. There were so many words updated every day, but there was not much progress, and it was too uncomfortable to follow up. 😅

Personally, I feel that the author should not write so many series about female supporting characters, which can easily make people alienate (this refers to detailed descriptions). Of course, this is my personal opinion. I also hope that the author will get better and better. Also, if the author plans to update for a long time, the detailed descriptions are very good. But if there are many, there is no need to write so detailedly and just go over them in one stroke. Just like the previous book, there is no need to write so much about Yang Mi. Wang Sicong does not need to write so much, which is easy to make people laugh. After all, the protagonist is Liu. Who says you can't lick it? The accuracy is good. And since it's a novel, it's normal to have a rich imagination. You have to be bold. Many people actually read the comments before reading the novel. Do you think that since you read the comments and see so many things you don't like, will you still have the desire to read it? Also, I hope the author can listen more to the readers' opinions. Sometimes the supporting characters are really not that important. It may cause disgust when reading. Personal opinion, for reference only! Thanks!

Write more, and the content of Cixi is higher. Also, your reward of a bowl of chicken soup is too fragmented. You can just say that the protagonist has always liked Cixi. What are you doing with a bowl of chicken soup?