Reborn in 2004: Reunited with the Celestial Fairy

Celestial Fairy

Here's a corny joke: How would you rate this book? High EQ: Lots of ineffective descriptions. Low EQ: Too weak. 😂😂😂

Honestly, it's not as good as the previous book. In the previous book, I just thought you were a bit of a literary youth, although I didn't see the later part. In this book, the main character's background description is too much, which I think is a detriment (full of debuffs). Afraid that the car is different from the surname, blah blah blah, what reader cares about this?

The movie is almost 600,000 words long, but it only covers one main storyline, and the plot is completely unclear. The male and female leads barely interact; the whole thing is just bland and uninteresting. I can't watch it anymore!

Keep writing about Xiao Liu, it's okay. Just express your love, everyone will support you.

The movie casting call for Liu requires auditions! They want to act sophisticated, but are afraid of losing Liu's fans! They want to profit from Liu's fans, yet pretend to be aloof! It's a complete waste of time! I'm not a Liu fan; I read entertainment articles purely for fun. Your writing style pleases neither side, making both Liu fans and casual readers feel uncomfortable!

The first one was in 2009, this one in 2004, will the next one be in 1999? We need to arrange it in advance in the US, either as an international student or a second-generation Chinese American. Then we could go even earlier, maybe even a supermodel mother would be an option.

The biggest problem is that the male protagonist's daily life and business dealings feel overly detailed; despite so many updates, he hasn't accomplished much. The female protagonist is well-written, quite different from other books, but there's been too little interaction between the male and female leads after the first movie shoot. Seeing so many words updated daily with so little progress makes following the story frustrating. 😅

Personally, I feel the author shouldn't write so much about female supporting characters; it's jarring (I'm referring to detailed descriptions). Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I also hope the author continues to improve. Also, if the author plans to continue for a long time, detailed descriptions are good, but there's no need to write so much about every single one; just gloss over…

Write more, and make sure it has a higher proportion of Qianqian. Also, your "chicken soup for the soul" reward is too disjointed. You could just say the protagonist always liked Qianqian, why make it so sentimental?