Rebirth in 2004, I Reunited with the Immortal

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Tell a cold joke: How do you evaluate this book? High emotional intelligence: There are many invalid descriptions. Low EQ: Too watery. 😂😂😂

It's really not as good as the previous one. I just think you are a bit literary. Although I haven't seen the later stage, this book has a lot of descriptions of the protagonist's character and background. In my opinion, it's all about points reduction (full debuff), fear of cars, different surnames, blah blah blah, which reader cares about this. Judging from what the author wrote, he should have absorbed the opinions of readers, but what he has absorbed is the opinion of "anti-fans who don't read Shan Liu". I'm very naughty and afraid of being said to be a dog licker or something. The readability is too poor, there are no ups and downs, there is no progress in the main line, and there is a lot of writing in trivial places. I've clicked in three times but I can't make it through the charging process. I can't convince myself. In my opinion, what you wrote is not an online article, but a diary-type prose. It uses the single heroine Sissi as the core selling point. As a result, it cannot attract core readers. This is your problem. Do you have an outline? It is not as interesting as some pendant-type heroines. I feel like you are a bit similar to a bottle of red wine. You want to write something different from others, but the result is that it is really abstract and "non-mainstream". He can still sell a setting. I don't know what your selling point is?

It's almost 600,000 words, and I only made one movie. The main plot is not discernible at all. The male and female protagonists didn't interact much at all. I can't stand it anymore!

Keep writing about Xiao Liu, it's okay, just write your love and everyone will support it.

The first one is from 2009, this one is from 2004, will the next one be from 1999? You have to make arrangements in advance to go to the United States, international students or second generation Chinese. Then you can go a little earlier, it's not impossible for the fairy mother to do it.

To choose Liu for a movie, you have to audition! I want to pretend to be 13, but I'm afraid of losing Liu's fans! He wants to eat from Liu Fan, but he pretends to be aloof! Totally useless! I am not a Liu fan, and I read entertainment articles just for fun. Your writing style is not pleasing to both sides, and will make Liu fans and passers-by who read entertainment articles feel uncomfortable! The title of the book has been decided. Don't you, the author, feel that there is a conflict? If you want this mouthful of vermicelli rice, just lick it openly, don't hold your pipa and half-cover your face, pretending to be 13!

Personally, I feel that the author should not write so many series about female supporting characters, which can easily make people alienate (this refers to detailed descriptions). Of course, this is my personal opinion. I also hope that the author will get better and better. Also, if the author plans to update for a long time, the detailed descriptions are very good. But if there are many, there is no need to write so detailedly and just go over them in one stroke. Just like the previous book, there is no need to write so much about Yang Mi. Wang Sicong does not need to write so much, which is easy to make people laugh. After all, the protagonist is Liu. Who says you can't lick it? The accuracy is good. And since it's a novel, it's normal to have a rich imagination. You have to be bold. Many people actually read the comments before reading the novel. Do you think that since you read the comments and see so many things you don't like, will you still have the desire to read it? Also, I hope the author can listen more to the readers' opinions. Sometimes the supporting characters are really not that important. It may cause disgust when reading. Personal opinion, for reference only! Thanks!

Write more, and the content of Cixi is higher. Also, your reward of a bowl of chicken soup is too fragmented. You can just say that the protagonist has always liked Cixi. What are you doing with a bowl of chicken soup?

The biggest problem is that the daily and business aspects of the male protagonist are a bit too cumbersome. It seems that there have been so many updates, but not much has been done. The writing of the female protagonist feels pretty good, and it is still different from other books. However, after the first movie was filmed, the male and female protagonists interacted too little. There were so many words updated every day, but there was not much progress, and it was too uncomfortable to follow up. 😅

Damn it, I looked at the time in 2015 and Liu was in 1987. This is someone who likes big sisters.

Update once a day. It doesn't matter if the amount is small. Your progress is still so slow. You can only feed it. You don't know when it will die.

Reading this book now is a tasteless thing and a pity to throw away! All I can do is wait to see the updated introduction and jump to read it! The author is obviously clumsy and procrastinating, and he is too self-centered. It feels like he is trying to force readers to read. The quality has dropped a lot compared to Rebirth 2009!

Don't you want to write any more? Xiao Liu, I'm still waiting for you to write. Cheer up 😭

Actually, I think the author's description of Liu Yifei is quite good. It's not as stereotyped as many articles. You can feel that she has a soul and her own thinking. . The author must stick to his own outline. I think it is really good. As for many people saying that the author is young and has too much unnecessary space, emmm, I think it is okay. If I read too many fast food articles, I like to read detailed ones, but there are too few and not enough to read. More soon! ! I'll definitely support you with the monthly pass next month! Come on

That's it, why don't we write 1999? Shouldn't we say 09, 04, 99 backwards?

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Ten thousand yuan? Um, you are here to be funny. It costs thousands of dollars to film an episode of a TV series. Can you give me ten thousand yuan?

After reading the first few chapters, the character of the main character is well developed. It makes me blush without licking. I have read about twenty chapters. As for the main plot, this is a director's article in the entertainment industry. If I don't have a career, I will write dozens of chapters on someone else's crew.

This. . A bolt from the blue belongs to yes, is the author Quanqin gone?

How come the book is finished with only 670,000 words? He also said that there are so many words and is ready to be slaughtered, and he still slaughtered them for nothing!

Author, I like your writing style very much, but I really want to know what it would be like to write with multiple female protagonists in your writing style. If you don't want to give out sweets to a single heroine now, get more heroines to come out and see what the result will be. Or there is no heroine. Your writing style seems to be a good way to concentrate on writing without a heroine.

Has the author published a new book? Please

It's too confusing. After reading it for a long time, I couldn't understand what the author wrote?

Good guy, are you finished?

The author didn't check anything except film and television information. He used 1 million to make a movie in 2004. I'm really convinced. Did he use DV to shoot it? You also want to spend thousands of dollars to hire Liu Yifei, who has completed the trilogy, to play the heroine. I'm not saying that it's a dream, but the main reason is that you specifically made the protagonist a second-generation rich man or a Zhejiang businessman. Why are you so generous? In 2005, Ning Hao spent more than 3 million to shoot Crazy Stone. He was still a brand new artist and the production quality was average.

Please help, I have a novel that I can't find. The female protagonist is Liu Yifei, and the male protagonist sets up a stall to read the script in the beginning. The male protagonist's teacher is Huang Lei. His first work is an adaptation of Mao Liang. He filmed the novel "The First Chaos" in which Jiang Wen played Yu Ji and Liang Guanhua played Qin Shihuang. If anyone has any impressions, please let me know. Thank you!

We should learn from the successful experience of the previous book instead of blindly opening up wasteland! I was originally just a fan of Liu Tianxian, but recently I became interested in novels about him. I have read three of them in a row (one for China Entertainment, one for Acting, and one for Your 09). Your strength is that you did not write Liu Tianxian as a pendant. No matter what Liu Tianxian's reality is, yours is written with flesh and blood. That year of China Entertainment was purely pendant, and the acting director later had some pendants. Yours is the best in emotional drama. , You haven't read this book, but reading the comments it seems that the emotional drama is quite good... Why do you maximize your strengths and avoid weaknesses? It's the same as the acting director's question. He didn't summarize his own successful experience. It's really about exploiting his weaknesses and avoiding his strengths 😅. Sister Baoer's success lies in the fact that although she continues to show her ambitions, her basic emotional drama is stable. If you order a new book with a fairy heroine and stable emotional drama, it will be fully booked. As for the business war article you mentioned... Judging from 09, you still need to work hard. Come on, I'm waiting for your next heavenly article. Make use of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses.