
Douluo: Traveling Through the Holy Lord, Remaining in Douluo as a Shadow
斗罗:穿越圣主,苟在斗罗做暗影
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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10.4kFans
452Chapters
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Ji Dao Shura
He obviously has invincible fighting power, but he ends up being written like a child.
How to say it? It feels completely like a primary school student. It feels like you want to write behind the scenes, but you feel like a clown when you write. Who is older, you or Mr. Ye? It's yours, you were just reborn, it's not that you have no memory. As for the awakening of the martial soul, you didn't say anything, but you wanted others to worry about this and that for you, and then you also knew that you just didn't care. You acted like you were touched again.
Are you lying down like this? He used the Horse Talisman every now and then to help others heal, and even set up a stall on the roadside to cure the disease in a few seconds. Later he said that he knew that several people were watching his house. You have this strange ability and you don't need a soul ring. Isn't this the research material that comes to your door?
To be honest, you're so cool. Don't try to trick the Holy Master. He's really not worthy of him.
I have been feeling deflated. After time travel, I plan to lie down 😂
Fans of Holy Lord have read a lot and talked about their thoughts.
1. After time travel, the combat power of the first world view is not significantly higher than that of the dragon, but if the status of the Holy Lord is written very poorly, the combat power will be suppressed for a long time 2. The moral quality of the Holy Lord can be referred to the Pluto method, so that this pitiful person cannot actually restore the true charm of the demon wizard 3. The Holy Lord is nicknamed the Talisman Shelf. Many fans actually write the Holy Lord just to write the second set plus The twelve powerful talismans would look great if written 4. The Eight Immortals are just mechanical monster backgrounds in the original work. Adding drama to them, especially conspiracy theories, will destroy the tone of the story Finally, I think the real charm of the Holy Lord is [a mobile treasure house that can return forever as long as people's desires are not quenched]. The Holy Lord is not important, the changes in people's minds evoked by the spells and magic are the most important.
Difficult to understand
He builds up a lot of power secretly and hides it from his relatives. Then his relatives think there is something wrong with him and use the relationship to even make a promise. He looks for solutions from all over the place. What a bad person.
It's not in dragon form. It's boring. Humans are boring. Now I think my gutter oil writing is better than yours. At least what I wrote is really fun.
Endless Shennong, come out! ! !
The sea, you are all water
No one can win more than 10 chapters from a shabby dance party.
Before that, click on the first one. We shouldn't let Uncle Fu, who was just writing about the family, pretend to be a little adult at first. He also said that his martial soul had not been successfully fused. This immediately lowers the quality of this book. You might as well just say that you are a god who has traveled from another world. At the beginning, you knocked your strength to the ground. I can think of something to write later if I think about it.
To put it bluntly behind the scenes, it is to evaluate the brain, IQ, crush the evaluation layout, and get what you want. But her mother's premise is that such things must be unobtainable or difficult to obtain based on your strength, have strength, and be fun. These are just like Langya Bang. Mei Changsu is a complete fool and is not even as good as ordinary people.
Not just private facilities. It also beautifies Qian Xunji. What Qian Xunji did was to give birth properly. The character of Qian Daoliu was also changed into a ruthless ruler. You are basically writing your own book under false pretenses.
The protagonist is too strong, so he has been stuck in daily life. Otherwise, God Realm with Two Swords and Machetes is really not interesting. You can wait until it reaches about 100 chapters before reading it.
Nonsense introduction, it is difficult to write a long paragraph that can be said in one sentence.
Obscene articles
When I saw that Qian Renxue was younger than him, I knew what he wanted to write next.
Author, there must be more female protagonists
Single and more than nothing? If you don't reply, you will default to being an ambiguous eunuch.
I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. It smells like ancient urban literature.
I didn't want to read the introduction. What the hell?
Well, it's okay, updates are a bit lacking.
Writing like this has a better sense of storytelling, and I don't want other mindless and cool articles to narrate like a fool.
I just started reading a little bit, and I always felt that it was a little bit emmm. In the original work, there was no description of Bibi Dong being tortured by an evil soul master and then being rescued by Qian Xunji. Even Douluo Yi himself had no concept of an evil soul master. In the original work, Qianxunji simply accepted Bibi Dong as his disciple because of his talent. So to be honest, the description of Bibi Dong in the book is quite unfair... After all, the original book never said that Wuhundian and Qianxunji had any life-saving grace for Bibi Dong. They were just teachers and students.
Book Description
Regarding the comments from readers, the author has received them, and I understand everyone's complaints and dissatisfaction. There are indeed many problems, and I accept this, so I won't force readers who don't like this book. After all, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage. But let me explain here. The male protagonist is definitely invincible, just like the introduction said, and because he suffered too much in the world of Longxian, he has been more of a calm mentality in this life. He can do his best and is unlikely to take the initiative to conflict with others. The tone of the story is also more about daily life and relatively slow-burning, so some readers find it boring, but the author understands. But please also understand that the tone of this book from the beginning cannot be as exciting as other novels, or that you can gain experience by defeating monsters and leveling up, because the male protagonist is already close to full level. Another issue is the female protagonist, because the introduction is rather long-winded in order to fully explain the background of the male protagonist's time travel and his state of mind after being defeated continuously, and the word limit is only 500 so I didn't include it. So I want to explain here that there are multiple female protagonists, not eunuchs, and the female protagonists are not just gold coins. After all, the holy master has a son, and the male protagonist cannot be without a wife. That's about all the introduction, I still hope you can continue reading, the author is here to please.