Pokémon: The Slacker of the Ghost-Taming Clan

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You are already a trainer, and you take the initiative to go to the gym to get badges to participate in the league competition. If you are talking about old enemies, is this still considered salty? Isn't it good to do your job? It's time to drive away ghosts (ghost Pokémon), explore ruins, rescue Pokémon, tame your favorite Pokémon, and live a happy life with Pokémon. Why don't you go out and show off again? Salted fish are like salted fish. I just read Chapter 83 and you wrote it like this, and my desire to read on was instantly reduced. Because of your process, you can already guess the follow-up: traveling + playing gyms, conquering Pokémon, participating in league competitions, and showing off. You know the sequel to other people's Pokémon stories, but what gives you the motivation to continue watching them? It is the warm daily interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon. What is the picture? The lightheartedness of a utopian world. Why is it so popular to ride a bicycle? The daily Pokémon books are so wonderful and so healing. Author: You can't go to the gym to participate in the competition, but also have a warm daily life with Pokémon. The degree between the two is not so easy to grasp. If there is more of one, there will be less of the other. If the two are equal, they are neither fish nor fowl. If you want results, focus on one aspect. You can make money by doing both, but not much. After all, you have to pursue something.

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Personal comment: The daily characterization and plot advancement are at least above medium level, and there is the possibility of improvement in the future, but the first-person perspective battle writing is a bit... Mechanical? Anyway, the battle with Dan Emperor was very boring to watch. It is recommended that the author reduce the length of the battle, or not put key plot points in the battle Overall, it is a good idea that remains to be seen.

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I feel that the ghost-controlling clan is a bit out of place. In the Pokémon world view, it is changed to a medium like King Furong who guards the entrance to the spirit world, and there is more than one entrance to the spirit world in the setting.

It's very dry. I'm a master of dry literature. There are a lot of meaningless dialogues and descriptions that are meant to be fun and refreshing. Apart from being a bit childish, you can only skip reading this book. Except for the core plot of conquering Pokémon and fighting, the rest is dry, but the core plot is only 20%. If you make an age-appropriate match for this book, it might be 6 to 12 years old.

Can the author change the picture of the heroine? This one doesn't look good.

In Chapter 16, the amulet in the safe on the smuggling ship is obviously stolen goods, but the official does not take it away. The protagonist still thinks it is reasonable. What kind of logic is this 😅

You can vote for some characters of your own creation, and the author will intersperse them into the novel according to the situation The format is as follows Name: Gender: Age: Birthplace: Appearance: Special identity: (such as someone from an organization) Pokémon: (Try not to exceed three, but more is okay, mainly mark your favorite, not mythical beasts)