One Piece: Kaido of the Beasts Plays House

After reading the Wano Country chapter, I felt sick to death. My original enthusiasm had turned into cheating and destiny, and my favorable impression of the protagonist group was greatly reduced. On the contrary, Kaido wanted strength, brains, structure, and dreams. Later, I chatted in a friend's book club and proposed this idea. The more I chatted, the more excited I was, so I decided to write it myself. Because I didn't want to write about Kaido as a time traveler (I think Kaido as a time traveler is not the original Kaido), so I designed the character Lily (thank you Oda for not drawing Kaido's wife), hoping to write a different beast. I hope you can support me. If there are any shortcomings, please correct me. The author will humbly accept it.

Yamato welcomes new mother after Mrs. Al😄😄😄

The Navy is really in a bad state now. Every three years, the Tianlong people will massacre a non-franchised country to cheer up, and they have massacred 288 so far. The navy also sent a large number of people to participate in the Celestial Dragon carnival. Valley of the Gods was one of those times.

Is this a male channel or a female channel? Why is it that the female protagonist is the main point of view? Damn it.

Why is Kaido a native? I thought he was a time traveler.

Kaido and Yamato (young)

It seems awkward to describe the pirates as the People's Liberation Army. The author might as well write a new book in which the protagonist becomes the leader of the revolutionary army, and then write about the revolutionary army like this. It's pleasing to the eye. Do pirates deserve to be described as the People's Liberation Army?

From the current point of view, there are no explosive points. The three golden chapters are not attractive. There are too many originals, but the beginning is not interesting enough. In terms of genre, it feels very similar to Impel Down. There are a lot of originals, but the writing is very good and interesting enough to make people want to read. However, this one is too slow and not attractive enough. You want to know what readers who read fanfiction want to see? Isn't it just an interaction with the original work? Funny painting style, realistic painting style, and brainless cool writing are all acceptable. The key point is to bring a sense of the original work. Otherwise, why would you read a fanfic? According to the current plot, although there is nothing wrong with it, it is not interesting enough. It belongs to the kind of book that is on the bookshelf and will not be read without deleting it. The book is exhausted and I don't want to find a new one without clicking it, but it will not delete it. The number of words is still too small at the moment. I hope it will become interesting in the future.

I have read more than 400 chapters, and in summary, it is boring. There are too many original characters, so it doesn't look like Pirates, and I have no desire to read.

Kaido's description is too positive.