Pokemon: Who Told Him to Enter the ZA Summit Battle?

One problem with ZA is that it is a timeline five years after the main line of the XY game. At this time, Dan Emperor has been defeated by one of the two winners. Basically, during the ZA plot, all the game plots from Red and Green to Noble were all over. There is no animation, after all, the journey is about sword and shield, and the Prism Tower is still Citron's gym. It can only be said that the follow-up is not easy to write innately, unlike Chuan A is the past.

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Let's take a look at za. Is your Thunder King Kong Deer legal?

The plot and writing are both excellent. The characters are a little OOC but the descriptions are very three-dimensional (please apologize to Principal Clavell, the old airplane guy is not the kind of person who would kick students out of school because they are different), but there are also many other problems. First of all, the progress is too slow. It took 300,000 words to reach level W. Crocodile didn't even reach level 18. You can't think of Horizon as the main pet or one level of evolution. Lucario has already developed and punched one. At this rate, the protagonist will not be able to reach A level when Fenglang is released next year. Although the plot is not good, there is no need to write everything. Hurry up and level up and then go straight to K level like the original plot of Za. Then the setting is too game-like. The protagonist's setting is essentially a collision between animation battles and game battles. However, it would not be appropriate to directly copy the battles between level 50 and 100 level elves of the same level. Moreover, the existence of level 100 elves and experience candies is very unreasonable. You must know that top champions like Dan Emperor will fight the Promise. Both the animation line and the game line are all 5 in a row, and even the giant is not forced to come out. If there is a level 100 elf, it can beat Wuji Tai Na into a pulp. Even if there is a level 100 elf, it can only be the pinnacle of settings such as xyz, Wu Ji Tai Na, and Pillar King. The limit of the champion is only over eighty levels. There are also some small mistakes that often appear. Even if the Little Crocodile evolves, it can't learn the Thunder Fang. It has only the Water type to learn the Electric type skills. It only has the Electric Crystal Burst, Nature's Grace and Awakening Power. Also, if the little arrow sparrow doesn't evolve, it will be normal + flying, but if it evolves, it will have fire + flying and be defeated by water. The worst thing is that damn mega butterfly chrysalis. There must be a limit to the self-configuration. Can't you just make a huge energy storage device? You have to make a mess of settings.

After writing for so long, there is still only Crocodile, Blue Crocodile has not arrived, and there are no other Pokémon companions. Although the plot is not very smooth, you are too slow.

The writing style and character plot design are all excellent, and they fit well with the Pokémon worldview. It is a pity that the author has added things that did not appear in the original work (referring to the skills that Pokémon should not learn, and the mega white butterfly chrysalis), which is too bold, and this will be obviously irritating to experienced Pokémon players. If the author hadn't written really well, I couldn't help but close the book when I saw the mega white butterfly chrysalis. The explanation I can accept is that the person actually uses Dynamax, and there is a different reason for calling it mega.

I now seriously suspect that the author fell into this trap because of za, and I am even a little unsure whether I have ever played Pokémon. It is said that the Centipede King with 112 Sumeng Special Speed ​​is not good at speed. Didn't he even check the illustration before writing it? Or is your understanding of Centipede King limited to the 62-speed after the mega? In Chapter 54, it is written that the water super power can resist ghosts after the starfish evolves. In Chapter 58, it is written that the evolved form of the crocodile can learn the lightning fang. In Chapter 86, it is written that the little arrow bird is capable of fire and flying. The picture book is not even checked, and even the restraint relationship can be wrong. It's almost 500,000 words, and the book friends are only just over 3,000. Are you really not in a hurry?

It still feels a bit too gamified

In fact, this book has two shortcomings. One is that the progress is too slow. It is ridiculously slow. To be honest, if you keep your partner at a low level and not evolve, it will only make people feel that the progress is a little worse; and then there is the inexplicable original mega butterfly chrysalis. I don't know what to think. There are so many new megas, so I have to choose an "unevolved" mega. People have lost the ability to evolve. If you make a white butterfly chrysalis, you will directly disrespect the original work. This is a fatal problem. As for new skills and things you can't learn, it's okay to have one or two occasionally, but you can't rely too much on them.

The pace is too slow. It's almost 100 chapters and 200,000 words and there are only two baby pkms. Up to now, the Yu Sanjia has not even evolved to the second stage, and it's outrageous. Don't worry about the short za plot flow, because the main character is only Y level now. At this pace, it is estimated that more than 1 million words can be used to complete the za plot flow, and this does not include DLC and other regions.