Have All the Employees I Recruited Become World Bosses?

The overall reading is very interesting, especially the setting of "the protagonist assigns occupations and skills to the female characters". I have never seen it before and it is very novel. However, there are still several problems at present: first, the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine lacks ups and downs, and there is no emotional advancement, which seems dull; second, the protagonist seems to be "following the future script" and forcibly helps the heroine find events to advance, without letting readers clearly see the actual benefits of doing so to the two of them; Come on, author, as long as you update ten times a day, these are not problems.

2 Days ago, gone? ………………

Pulling weeds, the starting point is probably not to expel me, the method is too blunt and the plot link is not smooth.

Does the protagonist have to maintain the plot at that time? Do you think you are Yi Xiaochuan? Is it still like this?

The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!

Are some places too sharp? Is that okay?

It's not bad, but it requires a little understanding, and there are many professions in the article to fill out the background. If you write one or two hundred chapters, you can have two creations

I have been reading it for a long time, and I feel it is pretty good. I feel that the author should gradually get better and find a good feeling, but it still feels a bit slow.

It's very well written, and it becomes more and more fluent later on.

Really? No update for two days

I have a complete collection of butter skills!

Qingmei, who really spent so many chapters writing it, is really dead.

In fact, there is a problem with the settings.