Hogwarts: My Master Is Merlin

The writing is almost meaningless. There are too many names of the protagonists in one chapter. It's like trying to make up the number of words. Otherwise, the author, try listening to what you wrote yourself. For example, when fighting a unicorn, why does the protagonist's various operations pause time? The protagonist is given such a long time to flirt with the female character or perform actions, while the unicorn just stands there blankly for such a long time. The description at that time was very dramatic. If you describe Scamander's introversion, it wouldn't be that he didn't dare to stare into other people's eyes and look around. It was either the four saplings or something, I forgot. You can write this, but I wrote it several times in a row. Even when Steinmander knocked on the door, he was describing it. He didn't dare to look at people, so how could he look at people when they knocked on the door. I really want to complain, the author also set up a fan value for speaking, but you didn't list it, brother. Fans who are more into Harry Potter these days can also read it. But I still hope that the author will think more and write better and better. The first few chapters are really full of flaws. Another thing is that I have been studying with Merlin for two years, but I still can't see what I have learned. Think about it again when doing the fight scene, and formulate it in your mind

Another 11-year-old kid who grew up in the UK and has a British face. He can speak fluent Chinese, likes to eat and cook Chinese food, and also likes to share it with others. Almost every HP fan likes to write like this 😅

Care too much about Hermione😰

Where is my book review? Where is the endless Shennong?