Wizard: I Have a System for Cultivating Immortality and Immortality

Die Jia: My personal language expression skills are very poor, please forgive me. I personally like this book very much. The author's writing style makes people feel comfortable (at least I think so), and the character creation is also consistent with their roles. The protagonist is shaped to have the characteristics of an immortal cultivator without making people feel separated from the world. The progress of this book is relatively slow. At present, I see that although the protagonist is standing at the top of a world, he has not yet established a foundation. Hope the author keeps it.

It looks good, but the problem is that the process is too slow. The wizard has not been released yet. If it is used as a physical book, the design is okay. But as a relatively fast-paced web article, it is a bit slow. Because I want to see the combination of wizards and cultivators, knights and the like can be used as a transition. Too much effort will appear to be procrastinating (maybe I am impatient). Besides, even if it is on the shelves, you may only subscribe to one or two chapters to show your support. Subsequent subscriptions will consider maintaining the continuity of chapter reading, or the level of interest in the plot. For example, most of the plots before the wizard practices (the mortal period) will not be considered. For example, in a novel about cultivating immortals, there is a martial arts world in the early stage. It is difficult for me to read about 80 chapters of Jianghu grievances. The novel is now updated to chapter 82, about 200,000 words. If you are writing more than 5 million words, there is no problem in transitioning from 200,000 to 350,000 words. After all, there will be about 4.8 Million words in the follow-up. And looking at the momentum and rhythm, there is a high probability that I will write more than 3 million words 3 million words, calculated at 6k per day, theoretically takes 500 days, but in reality it should take about two to three years. If it is about 350,000 words to The Wizard (Apprentice), then you will only be able to see it at the end of November. Of course, this is just my opinion. I hope the author will keep his own pace and not speed up the process because of this matter. Slow-warmers have fans of slow-warmers. If you do this, you may not please both parties.

The writing is okay, but it still feels a bit slow. Among many wizarding novels, the time span is quite large. It has been almost fifty years and I have not yet reached the level of an official wizard. Are you still waiting for foundation building?

I have one thing to say, the upper limit for wizards seems to be higher, but each setting is different, and it's acceptable.

Nice looking, but too slow to heat up.

I was a little confused and just turned the golden elixir into a god and joined the Tao? In the early stage, a breakthrough in Qi training and foundation building was a matter of life and death, but now he is riding a rocket?

It's a pity that the book "Cultivation of Immortality" started from scratching the computer, and then it collapsed. I really enjoyed reading what was written earlier.

The writing is beautiful, but what about Aurora? If you want to write a cool article, don't write a tragic drama to sublimate it.

Is it so slow to warm up? Are you still wandering around the castle until it's released?

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Very good, I like this one instead of the wizard one

The skin of Western fantasy and the bones of immortality, but we were all wrong, completely wrong. He was playing with science... As I looked at it, I realized that what I saw was science. I will look at it later.

I've been living in the New Territories for two months and it's about to end? It was quite good at the beginning, but it changed so much after arriving in the New Territories that it can be said to be a different book.

Existing members, I don't know if it's okay to generalize

The plot is not bad It works with or without a female protagonist, but don't use that mechanical witch. Currently there is no female protagonist, but it is written in the article that the protagonist does not want to get married because he is surrounded by village girls and wants to be on the level of a witch. I hope it is only used to refer to the level of beauty, rather than the subsequent role as a heroine. Mainly because as the heroine, the protagonist who is determined to retaliate is very abstract. (In order to reduce spoilers, I will say it as briefly as possible)

I said why one second I was being led into the nightmare world by the old woman and the little wizard who had accepted her The next second I was back to the original starting point It turned out to be a big change What does it mean?

The underlying description and rhythm control don't look like a newcomer, so who is the reincarnation of an old guy?

I was worried that there would be a female protagonist coming out of nowhere, but she probably won't be there. The aristocratic retinue is so high-ranking, isn't it just because of their status as a noble, that the aristocratic class should be exterminated as revenge. When she appeared on the scene, I wanted to kill her because she was a duke. Fortunately, her subsequent performance lived up to my expectations and I could kill her with peace of mind.

Why are there less and less 😰. You're not going to run away.

The author's writing skills are still not very good. Before changing the world, he was good. But once he changed the world, he couldn't grasp it and kept changing it again and again.

It seems that the Void Refining Period has been skipped directly...

It looked good in the early stage, but what kind of reforms and equality were there in the mid-term? There were too many things like they were miserable, miserable, miserable, etc. I wrote it over and over again, but my cultivation kept getting stuck.

It feels very realistic, I hope it will be updated more often.

I also have a monthly pass, do you understand me?🙂

Great, but there are too few updates

The author's previous new book, Zhan Xian, was renamed after it was removed from the shelves.

Does the author still write? If you don't write it, at least say it.

It won't work after changing the map.

Something went wrong with the setup architecture at the end.

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