Bleach: It Begins When I Enter Rukia's Body

With so many people, don't think about being alone. If you don't have matching power in the world of Death, it will be easy to be overthrown Moreover, there are only a few readers of Death in Dian Niang. If you are a young person in the literary field, it will be easy to run away.

There are too many secondary settings. It's not like Death, it's like a fanfic wearing Death. There are also a lot of awkward plots. I don't know what's the use of adding them. Moreover, the abilities of the protagonist are also vague and confusing. Moreover, Death wants literature and art, not literary youth.

To be honest, if you write a normal plot, the results won't be that bad, but if you have to add a secondary boss like Tsunayashiro Ai, I don't know what to say.

But you need to polish the plot and don't get too immersed in emotional output. It is necessary to master the plot foreshadowing, logic and rhythm. Now I'm a bit overexerting myself for the sake of emotional output and neglecting other things.

It smells like a literary youth, is this Mary Su Wen?🙂

I don't know if this book about Death with multiple female protagonists can be as good-looking as the one with multiple female protagonists named Death.

Beautiful pictures of Lucia, please vote

Just the title of the book got me excited. This is still the first one.

The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!

The pace is not fast, and the protagonist may slowly change from a cold and lonely person to a warm person. At present, there are not many chapters, but it is readable.