What Should I Do If I Don't Want to Become an Immortal?

I have caught up to the latest chapter and have been reading it for so long, so I will make a mid-term review. First of all, I severely criticize Xue Fan's naming taste. The names of this book are always strings, and the overall style is colloquial and casual. It is too straightforward and has no characteristics. It neither reflects the core style of integrating urban monsters and cultivating immortals. It also lacks memorability and recognition. It is relatively weak in its appeal to casual readers. Similarly, the names of the elite writers who became gods are also not good. In comparison, the names of the martial arts series are very handsome, and the heroes of the generation are even more exquisite. The frost on the clogs is also good. I can only say that this point needs to be strengthened, even if the title is written in the introduction, it cannot be pulled. Back to this book, as an urban immortal novel, although there is no hierarchy, Xiao Han's setting as a top powerhouse is enough to support the reading of the novel. He is calm and unhurried when encountering problems, handles things cleanly and neatly without being sloppy, and feels comfortable and not aggrieved. This is worthy of encouragement. This is much better than the elite writer. Even without Xiaotong, his character is quite likable. The heroine Meng Qingtong has an eye-catching portrayal. Among similar Fang Tongtong-type characters, she not only inherits the lively and enthusiastic traits, but is also more independent and self-reliant, with a more unified character logic and a more fitting personality. At the same time, she is excellent in studies and can graduate smoothly. She is responsible in actual combat and has better abilities than Xu Ting. Among all the heroines in Xue Fan's works, her overall evaluation is considered to be very high. Secondly, the creation of the worldview is reasonable and logical, and it is well integrated with the common settings of similar works. The whole is self-consistent and not inconsistent. It has a sense of suspense and is fascinating, and it can also arouse my interest. The book also features guest appearances by characters from many other stories such as "The Love Locking Spell" and "The Urban Incense Thief". It is very friendly to old readers and satisfies the feelings and expectations of Xue Fan fans. From the author's point of view, the narrative mode of the unit drama with the main line is also in line with Xue Fan's writing comfort zone. The rhythm is stable, the case advances naturally, and the foreshadowing of the main line is also steadily laid out. It can be regarded as a rhythm that is comfortable for the author and readers. Taken together, although there are many shortcomings, it is still a mature work that reflects Xue Fan's excellent creative skills. The overall writing style is stable, the characters are stand-alone, and there are no obvious shortcomings. The reading experience is coherent and engaging. It can be regarded as an excellent and readable work by Xue Fan.

Before, due to financial constraints, I had been reading pirated books by Xueda. I am grateful that Xueda's works have accompanied me through so many years. When I heard that Xueda released a new book, I specially downloaded the Qidian app. Because of my financial ability, I uninstalled it by giving small rewards to show my appreciation.

Let's first talk about why Xueda University needs an operations officer. This book is new, but the author is not new. This book will have a loud brand name and a group of very sticky book friends, but there will definitely be a lot of controversy and ill will. This is not obvious yet, but there are already signs. And it is impossible for Xue Da to spend a lot of energy on this. What the operations officer can do is to try his best to handle every post and comment in the book circle, so that friends who like Xueda and this book can have a healthy and harmonious discussion environment, and also allow the author to devote himself more to creation without distraction. So why did you choose me? There is a simple reason: love. I love Xue Fan's writing and the heroines who interpret the beauty of the world. I believe that one day his name will be known to more people as an online writer and he will become famous. I want to help Xueda pave this difficult road, and I will devote myself to running this book well. (I actually want to apply directly, but there are restrictions on the starting point operation, and I need to be active in the book circle. If Xueda agrees, I might as well improve this post so that I can reach the threshold faster. If you have no plans for the time being, you can reply below the post. I am very happy to be able to take a group photo, haha)

There are so many people who have mentioned it, it's so tiring to answer them one by one. See below: This book is purely about a single female protagonist, a single female protagonist, a single female protagonist (I'll say the important things three times) Don't speculate in stocks, don't speculate in stocks, don't speculate in the stock market (I'll say the important things three times) What the female partner originally liked was that the other person was not the male protagonist, and the male protagonist didn't like it either (it's too long if I didn't say this three times)

I have been thinking about these these past few days except for my child's graduation ceremony. After finishing the preliminary arrangement, I will take them out and discuss them with everyone. Of course, which book you can write in the end depends on whether the editor will sign it. Now let's discuss the priority of an attempt. 1. "Lord of Divine Luck" (tentative, it may also be "Lord of Divine Luck") Multiple female protagonists, multiple world travels. The advantage is that you can go to Xinshou Village to see the current life of the Aliang people, and indirectly give you an idea of ​​what to do in the future. There are many types of worlds involved, which can fully satisfy my personal pleasure. The main world can be regarded as a micro-alternative reality, with a medium-level Shura field. Because the various settings are relatively stable, the possibility of me getting sick is slightly lower. So it's listed first. 2. "Information Dominator" I have long thought about this long novel with multiple female protagonists. An alternate future post-war setting. If I have to say an advantage, it is that the protagonist's system is actually Han Xinluo who was exiled after being upgraded. But because I originally planned to write it there when I was imagining it, the background setting was rather arbitrary, and the style was quite dark and severe, with a high-intensity Shura field. It is a single main line of world conquest, not too long, and has a relatively small number of female characters. 3. "The Drifting Prison Room" There is no female protagonist, but many female supporting characters. A multi-world team adventure with missions. Many of the prototype characters are friends I met during this special experience. Therefore, there are no female characters in the main plot line, and female supporting characters will be arranged in each mission. The emotional line probably won't hold much, so it's a huge disadvantage. 4. "Heroes in the Thorns" Various stories about boys and girls with super powers. It is a setting with a cheerful tone but a heavy background in the main storyline. It can be said to be my personal preference... It can be considered as having multiple female protagonists, but because the hidden setting does not allow for many in the end, I think it is unlikely to be a priority in the current environment. Consider it (sigh 5. "Howl of the Frostwolf" The second part of a series of my personal western fantasy addiction. The advantages are almost none in the current environment, and there are a lot of disadvantages. But for a writer like me, whose main driving force is interest, I dare to force myself to start writing XD So, before the book "I Don't Want to Become a Immortal" is finished, this post is just for collecting opinions I originally planned to start it. Vote, go to the APP and see if you can't figure it out, so let's discuss it here This is also the forum method I am most familiar with. Anyway, thank you for your continued support, Minggan Wunei<(＿＿)>

It will be changed into a green hat version with added materials by the author's old colleagues 😢

(The previous post seems to have been blocked by the system. It is reposted here with the same content.) There are often book friends in the comment area who are concerned about the previous work, and it is inevitable to repeat the questions. In order for you to quickly find the information you need, I will compile Xueda's answers to these questions in this post. The project is relatively large, and there will inevitably be some omissions in the arrangement. Everyone is welcome to leave a message and point out any areas that have not been taken into account. Xueda is also welcome to correct mistakes XD. This post will post the original follow-up (unfinished), writing plan, main character endings, and explanations and foreshadowing of specific plots (to be added by book friends) in the order of the works. And may include some answers to separate small questions. 1. "Love Locking Spell". The book itself is relatively complete, both in terms of structure and characters. We are not currently considering writing a sequel, and the same goes for the clean version. The current problem is focused on the extras. In "Princess Charming", Yang Nan and Jin He will experience many social ups and downs in the future, but they will usher in the ending of breaking through the obstacles and being together. Jin He became a cartoonist, Yang Nan resigned and opened an online store, it was he. "Walking on Frost" has been completed, so there is no need to say more. Zhang Xingyu's extra story was not well conceived, and the character's personality was extreme, making it difficult to find happiness. His future destination may be to make a cameo appearance in a certain book and arrange the ending. Other characters without extras or cameos will live normal lives, including people like Xiao Meng and Jin Lin. 2. "Goddess". The follow-up trend of the original article is that after the Elf Sword Master wins, he will be promoted to a new guardian. The relative price is that he can no longer follow him around, and then he will travel and conquer one territory after another. The original ending of the goddess was he, and the male protagonist opened up his harem to dominate the world and rule the world of gods, and lived a happy life sometimes two hundred times and sometimes three hundred times. The Demonic Dragon and the Rainbow Dragon are reliable in the East and West palaces (the Seven-color Rainbow Dragon is the boss of the harem), and the dragons are actually the aborigines; Su Lin will get a chance to turn around after the Fertility Goddess reveals her true purpose, but her specific position in the harem has not yet been decided; the Fertility Goddess is essentially an intruder, but she has her own justice. The main plot line is that two foreign goddesses seize the Dragon Clan's territory. The protagonist eventually subdues the goddess on behalf of the Dragon Clan and becomes the God Emperor. Many other questions have not yet been resolved. Judging from the current situation, it is basically impossible to continue the goddess, and the second best clean version remake is also a considerable project, which may require a complete redo of the setting. Infatuated goddess book friends, you may have to wait another lifetime. 3. "City". The city is huge, so it needs to be broken down in detail. Affected by force majeure, the old computer used for writing before Xueda has been lost along with many manuscript settings, including the city. The new book also requires energy investment, so the outline and detailed follow-up of the city are currently unavailable. What is certain at present is that the city will continue the previous style, which is the happy life of Lao Han and the harem, giving birth to a lot of children. Regarding the follow-up treatment of the city, Xueda's current idea is to try not to end the outline, and may show the living conditions of the Han family through future guest appearances, and use the city as a novice village world in a multi-world story. The city may consider a clean version, but many settings and plot lines will have to be significantly changed in the clean version. Like Goddess, it is a lifetime series. However, Xueda explains more about the urban characters, which can quench his thirst.       ，， Tingting has the same status as Doctor Ye. Yuqing Sanren didn't find out much about the follow-up, and she hoped that Lao Han could honor what he promised her. Fairy Lu should be happily screwing Lily and occasionally communicating with Lao Han. No one seems to care about Wei Zhuyu, and no one has asked about it. As a descendant of Yuan Daxia, Miss Yuan once pretended to be the Prime Minister's daughter and almost sent Old Han away. She was the penultimate boss in the original plan. She would eventually become Old Han's partner and would not enter the harem. She would also occasionally communicate with Old Han. Izayoi believed that Lao Han was the only person who gave her the desire to have children. Because she hated the inconvenient living conditions after pregnancy, she used super powers to speed up whenever she had the opportunity. It took much less time to give birth to a child than others, so she gave birth to the most children and was the least able to take care of them. She was tortured by her children and had to squat at home with her head in her arms every day. The enemy camp (mainly the Overlord) means that the Overlord has not appeared directly, but it is not important. The leader here is Han Xinluo himself (the original minaret). She used means to let Lust, who was also a person with mental abilities, be imprisoned on her behalf. The goal was to become a high-dimensional creature with space-time capabilities. In the end, she basically succeeded and evolved into a complete information life form. In the end, Lao Han cooperated with Christine and found an opportunity to use the ten-fold Xuantian Jue to banish her. The city is probably like this. 4. "Blazing Flame". Blazing itself is finished, the problem is the sequel. Blazing Flame and Goddess share the world line of Tra Air, and the framework itself is very good. Xueda also said that he will continue to write Western fantasy in the future, and he speculates that he may continue to use Tra Air. And Frostwolf's Howl is already in the alternate outline, so it's worth looking forward to. Next is the Ruyilou martial arts series. I have never read most of the books in this series and don't know much about them. I welcome your corrections and additions. The Ruyilou series will be continued in the general direction. If conditions permit, it will be posted at the starting point and will be notified at that time. There may be a clean version overhaul, but I dare not promise it. The timeline of the world of Ruyi Tower is the Yuan Daxia period (prequel) → the main period of Ruyi Tower → the urban (little bell) period. Let's talk about them one by one in this chronological order. 5. "Heroes". Taking into account the special nature of Heroes, Xueda's reply was relatively clear: there will be no continuation and there will be no clean version. We can't see Yuan Daxia's new story. The ending of Yuan Daxia has a lot of ink and is relatively clear. He eventually cooperated with Miss Tang, established a new dynasty, and became a national advisor. It is said that he was still in high spirits even when he was eighty years old. In the city, Lao Han entered the Hidden Dragon Treasure House he built, learned martial arts such as Xuantian Jue, and learned the true face of Yuan Daxia. Miss Yuan also came to Lao Han because of this. The endings of several other female supporting characters are unknown. There is a high probability that the important female supporting characters will survive until the later stages of the plot. After all, it is not easy for Xue Dahua to create characters, isn't it... 6. Ruying. I will not consider it for the time being. 7. Nangongxing protagonist series. Basically, I will accept several female characters in the Nangong Xing series, including the Su sisters, Yaoyao and Ah Huang. Miss Yong is still alive. In future resets, we may need to consider how to connect the main line of Nangong to Wanhuang Palace. 8. Ye Piaoling protagonist series. Little is said about this aspect, except that it was Yan Zhuxue who took the initiative to pursue Ye Piaoling. Looking forward to Zhuxue~ 9. Pos and other series. This series is mostly short and medium-sized novels, and there are basically no shortcomings. It is worth mentioning that the original ending of Dodder is be, which is quite stomach-ache for the literary youth. However, it has been redeemed by the devil in the new book. There are other little easter eggs in the new book such as Dream Eater, so I won't list them all here. It's not easy to organize, but it's very satisfying. Both the renovation and the continuation of previous books required a lot of energy and were quite a challenge. Snow, come on~ (And can you send me a Dr. Xiaoye? I like Chunying the best) 3.13 Supplement: The goddess and Blazing Flame do not have the same world view. The Blazing Flame is the angel system under the Lord God, and the Goddess is the angel sister in Hades who fled to other worlds to occupy the magpie's nest at the end of reincarnation. There are similarities between the two, but they are not the same thing.

Xueda felt relieved to write, Jian Yisi Jian originally wanted to write a single female protagonist, but now that I can't control myself, I can let myself go.

Because readers who have seen Qidian in other places have said that they don't want to see the author always popping up in the posts, which is easy to cause drama. So I usually stay in the book club circle. I just recently saw a lot of posts asking questions about me. I thought about it and made a rough reply here. If you missed any friends, you can ask again here. You can ask questions related to old novels in another high-quality post. This is mainly the chat part XD 1. Fan Da is still in the recovery period, and the matter of writing a book has been seriously considered. Once he gets used to the rhythm of life, there should be accurate information. Please don't worry, Fan Da's book friends. 2. I have watched Hell Teacher and I liked it very much. The snow girl is especially to my liking. There are also natural mermaids in it. Basically in every fantasy novel, I have to write about the mermaid race because of that comic. That encyclopedia of monsters back then can also be said to be the inspiration prototype for the encyclopedia of evil spirits in this story. 3. I am actually not a fan of virtual anchors. I only followed Dodo for a while when I was playing Dota. I was a card pusher who fell into the trap in my sixth year of issuing cards, so of course I wasted the whole group. The person I felt most regretful about back then is now reborn, making me feel for the first time that this live broadcast model is very valuable and meaningful. So Niu Mo Yin Mo and other things must be paying attention... Even if I don't play the second game, I can still understand 233 4. If I hadn't counted on the lag, I would have used the lyrics of the Mermaid song... I feel that it is really well written. But I'm afraid of growing whiskers on my head, so forget it... XD

I have always believed that Xueda's writing style is always first-rate.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             but only in terms of storytelling and plot conception, characterization and detailed description, few online writers can achieve such a first-class level at the same time. I will not give examples of specific books. After all, since you, as Xue Gaizhi, are back, there is no need to mention the past.        ，，， Nothing else but to let you know that by wearing those clothes, you will only have more readers. Congratulations to you, Xue Gaizhi, the returning Bai Yueguang.

It's a joy to be able to maintain my passion for writing. I recall that my brother encouraged me to write something. Unfortunately, life is hard and I can only write some code to make a living, but I can't write any more books. But being able to use the scraps of money earned from writing code to help Brother Xian develop his ambitions is a life-long comfort.

I went to celebrate my birthday on the first watch of the pigeon, sorry <(＿＿)>

Congratulations to Xue Da for opening a new book! The positioning of the single heroine is exciting. However, seeing the setting of "a defeated dog with a female partner", as an old reader, I was a little worried about causing unnecessary controversy. A core minefield in male videos is that "the male protagonist appears to be a scumbag or a coward when dealing with relationships" - once the female partner is too involved and cannot get results, it is easy for readers to feel aggrieved. Instead of creating a "lost dog" that makes readers feel uneasy, it is better to refer to the "free and easy assisting" female supporting role of Rimi Aya-senpai in "Hanayou": there is a story but not entanglement, and all interactions and behaviors with the male protagonist are to catalyze the relationship between the male and female protagonists. This not only enriches the plot, but also stabilizes the main storyline of the single female protagonist, and can also avoid "partisanship" in the comment area, killing multiple birds with one stone. This is just a little suggestion I hope to avoid lightning perfectly. I will continue to update it no matter what! ​ ​In fact, there are some small suggestions that Xueda brought from other books. For example, although the setting of Old Han in The Incense Thief is very strong, the actual actions always give people a false feeling (except for that aspect), so I hope Xueda can give more highlight scenes to the male protagonist in the new book.

Some of my ideas have come up since the serialization period, but I never wanted to say something depressing that would affect Xue Da's writing of the book. Now that it's over, it's time to talk. I didn't re-read the old article before writing this. I just wrote my own thoughts based on my impressions. Please forgive me if there are any discrepancies. 1. Having a single female protagonist is not a problem, but the love brain cannot support a single female protagonist It turns out that before Xueda left the industry, I had the impression that she was good at portraying female characters. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have their own character arcs. Like my favorite Cindy, even if it doesn't have its own chapter, it can still leave a mark in my heart. But the female characters in this film are quite weak. Maybe it's because Xueda can no longer use the paid plot that she's best at to advance the characterization (this is quite a pity, few people in the industry can do it), or maybe it's because the length has been reduced in order to finish it earlier. Starting from the middle, the only impression Qingtong gave me was that of a love-minded person who only wants to get married and have children. The love brain can be an attribute of the character, but it cannot be the whole character. I can say that Qingtong's life story before meeting Han Jie is much more interesting than after meeting Han Jie. In other words, Qingtong occupies such an important position and takes up so much space as the single heroine, but fails to show the interesting side of the character. A character who has lost his own motivations and independence as a character naturally becomes Han Jie's background and a tool to advance the plot. So I can understand why other readers frequently ask for more female protagonists, but multiple female protagonists are not the antidote. The only thing is that the characters are interesting and can stand up without the male protagonist. According to Qingtong, it is definitely not enough to change to female videos to establish a foothold as some netizens said. Of course I have to state that I have never been interested in female love-minded characters, so this part is only for Xueda's reference. But no matter how much Xueda and the readers have feelings for Tongtong, I think it's time to let go. 2. The emotional foundation is weak Another point of Aikanxue's Big Book is that, except for the setting of some strange powers and deities, the emotional advancement is often more reasonable. I was a little disappointed with this one. The little thief is frivolous by nature and is like duckweed in the first half of his life, so the warmth of Chunying's home can make up for his shortcomings, and Xu Ting can tie him up with food. But Han Jie is different. He is filled with hatred and is a murderer who forged nine heart swords out of negative emotions. I don't understand why the same expansion is still used. Is Qingtong really what he needs to cook for him? Even if it is, the relationship should not progress so quickly, and the hatred in Han Jie's heart should not melt away so quickly. It seems that all the Heart Swords can exit together when Desolation exits, but they are still forced to stay until the end of the story due to plot needs. I would say that it would be more appropriate for Han Jie to open up his heart in the middle and later stages of the story, and let Qingtong lead Han Jie to slowly find the beauty of the world, but it is likely that it will be too late to advance the development of the setting by then. So this is a bit of a pity. 3. The whole book is full of tool feeling I have mentioned before that this book lacks supporting supporting characters, but they are not the only tool people. Han Jie is not a tool person. After finishing it, my impression of this book was that it was a transitional book to fill in the settings. I haven't read any of Xueda's previous books on the surface world. This book adds settings such as time bubbles, information life, and alien systems, which should facilitate Xueda's subsequent creations. Therefore, I have no dissatisfaction with this book. I hope that Xueda can continue to create in the future without being influenced by the brats who appear from nowhere, pour cold water on just a few keywords, and have no expressive ability except bad mouth. Thank you Xueda for your company!

Why did Xueda start writing about single girls? Who can help me with my young harem😭

Let's get straight to the conclusion. I feel that the level of snow is only a small part at most. There is a strong sense of restraint. This is not the first time. I had the same feeling when I watched the fine review (except for the ones I shouldn't have watched, this is the only Xueda's work that I have finished.) Of course, it may be entirely a matter of my personal preference. I generally don't like to comment on unfinished works, especially since this is an author who I think is very creative. I am afraid that because I am not objective enough to evaluate, it will affect people's mentality. But a truly harmonious book review area cannot be all singing and dancing. (If a coin has only one side, it must be a counterfeit coin) As a storyteller, I have witnessed how amazing Xueda's works were at his peak. That's why I feel that today's works lack the enthusiasm to dive in headfirst. I have come to the conclusion that the online writing model itself greatly squeezes the creative enthusiasm of creators, especially Xueda himself is a creator who pays great attention to craftsmanship and has high requirements for himself. I have always thought that he is more suitable for the creative method of seizing inspiration and concentrating on creation, rather than pressing on a chair and forcing yourself to be productive. The appeal of writing has always been Xueda's strength. Whether it is the protagonist who is good at layout and plotting, or the ups and downs of adventures in various death games, or there are always reversals that surprise readers, and more characters who support each other to achieve success, what is conveyed in the details is always those simple and beautiful yearnings that are still a little cruel. It can be said that the high-quality, small and beautiful way of writing created Xue Fan who amazed me in those years. What you write is like what you write is the evaluation of Xue Fan by most of the book friends I have contact with. The biggest obstacle to the invincible flow is actually the character itself. The locked upper limit of force will give him the calmness to deal with everything, and will also deprive him of his sensitivity to certain things. There is a high probability that this person will dilute the ability to love a certain individual. So the tacit understanding developed between the male and female protagonists is particularly precious. But this is also the hardest place to write. Experience is the story itself. Appropriate crisis, appropriate opportunity, unbalanced weight. In this era where you have to decide whether to stay or leave after reading the free chapters, this platform and Xueda's style, which requires readers to be patient and appreciate it, are destined to suffer. A true old book lover not only hopes that he enjoys reading it, but also hopes that more people will stay when he tweets. As I said before, I really want to see Xue Fan write for a few more years, but relying on the group of old book friends is full of uncertainty. So, what I want to say. I hope Xue Fan can find his own rhythm, adjust his condition, and go further with his old friends.

I would like to give Xueda a suggestion. You can go to places like Qidian. Com, Bilibili. Com, and NGA to chat and chat. These places are the main gathering areas for the audience of men's online videos. Understanding their preferences and key points can largely avoid stepping on some pitfalls.

Hibernate for a while, you have to finish writing my Han Yuliang for me. A little thought is not worth mentioning

When I was in college, I was lucky enough to read Xueda's books. I thought about my work and gave my full support. My book friend said that Xueda is back, so I must give my full support and make up for the past. I hope it will get better and better

I want to laugh when I think that future readers will ask which extraterrestrial demon this is.

I support a single female protagonist and a defeated dog. It is best to find a passerby for the defeated dog to get married and have children, and then meet the male protagonist and say, "I am very happy now!" Wow! It's exactly the same as Japanese animation

There is currently no official group for this book, and Xue Da has not established one. In view of this, I have established a QQ group, and friends who like this book and Snow Dare can come in and read it.

I didn't know until the beginning of the month that Xue Dalongchang had returned, so I quickly came over to read the masterpiece. It is said that Luo Zixue, a great sensual god, was really destined to be born at the wrong time. . . . Shengxian is obviously a trial work, with strong personal characteristics and high degree of completion. It also takes care of old readers (Xue Da is as gentle as ever). Accordingly, we can also notice that Xueda has three strengths: character portrayal (the sun is like Meng Qingtong, the darkness is like Yuan Zhongyi, he is worthy of being an elite author), daily life (this is difficult to be regarded as a pure advantage, but it can be used in daily works, and the CG can also be triggered by the way. But putting too much daily scenes will inevitably lead to the suspicion of too many words), suspense reasoning (well, I am talking about Gu Long's detective style of stealing jade). There are also three relative weaknesses: description of big scenes (for reference, the various catastrophes in Alibuda 🤫), big conspiracy layout (the grass holding grass when the Black Dragon King appears), and the double speed at the end (essentially the upgrade is too linear, so that the proportion of the space of the 100-level BOSS is not significantly different from that of the previous mobs, thus diluting the presence of the boss). Back to Shengxian, the fighting scenes do not have a strong visual sense, the plot layout does not contain unexpected surprises, and the final battle with the Demon Emperor is too sloppy, which are all manifestations of these points. Combining these, plus the premise that Rifan is sealed. If Xueda just wants to maximize its strengths and avoid weaknesses without considering the change of writing style, I personally think Xueda can try a daily unit suspense theater similar to Conan. The all-purpose house model of Fragrance Thief is actually Xueda's comfort zone (the clean version of Jade Stealer and Dream Eater should be arranged quickly). The grass snake gray line layout (constantly digging holes and only serving Lawson) is unlikely to be improved in the short term (regularly visit Luo Da in Longchang to learn from the experience 😏), but the speed increase problem at the end can actually be dealt with by referring to the Japanese comics, where the protagonists form a group and have a branch meeting with the boss team, and then influence each other and entangle each other to increase suspense and tension (like pirates, soldiers will fight against each other). In this way, at least the length will be worthy of the weight of the boss. Or you can stay in a large class like the Six Dynasties for a while, but this will affect the so-called refreshing feeling 🙄. It might also be a good idea to set up a base or a system with a farming flow that can be upgraded in stages along with the units. Check out some popular RPG settings to find inspiration. The essence of sensual novels is male romance, so Xueda is also a romance author. It's a pity that the female channel is too crazy, otherwise it would actually be quite interesting to go there and test the waters of Ruyilou, which is a pure love of ancient dragon style. From this point of view, purely from the perspective of livelihood, it may be a quick way to realize the profit by publishing the previous works in batches. However, a certain young man with advanced cancer must have his own plans. The above fragmentary thoughts are all self-righteous and humble opinions, and they are just for self-pleasure. Finally, the disaster has passed and everything is prosperous. I wish Xueda better and better.

Xue Fan's works have two common problems: one is bloated, and the other is the ending is rushed. Take the example of the love-locking spell that everyone is familiar with. Although the meat is the highlight of the love-locking spell, the meat in some places is too long and affects the perception of the plot. When I was working on the script for the love-locking spell gal, I clearly felt that Yang Nan's meat was too long in the early days of her freshman year, and rarely promoted the plot, making it a bit boring to watch. The plot of Su Xiangzi's sophomore chapter was too high, but the shock of the one-time detonation of the landmine diluted this shortcoming. Back to "Ascension", these two problems also exist, but they are relatively less serious. For example, meat was brought over with various hints when it could not be written at the starting point. This not only improved the perception, but also prevented Xiao Han from appearing to be as pure Yang Wei as in "The School Beauty's Personal Expert". The final battle at the end did take a lot of time. For example, the Death Knight could obviously be written a little more to create an apocalyptic feeling, but it doesn't feel as good as the God of Shura Field. The fight against the Demon Emperor also seems very urgent. Moreover, it is a world war, and there is no sense of unity around the world. It is still not as good as God of Shura Field. But then again, the main point of this movie for readers is not just to watch the fighting. The good ending of Fang Tongtong, Yu Bei, and Zhang Xingyu is the key. The Demon King can just be beaten to death by shouting about love and courage. The wedding scene is what everyone likes to watch if it is well written. So in general, the shortcomings of this work are not particularly outstanding. It is a simple story about the heroine walking towards happiness. It serves as the basis of the Xuefan universe and provides a good introduction to the endings of works such as "The Goddess" and "The Fragrance Thief" and an explanation for Xuefan's readers. As for the advantages, I have already mentioned them in the previous post, so I won't repeat them again. Generally speaking, it is considered one of the better ones among Xue Fan's works. You can take a look at it, because there are indeed many unfinished works by Xue Fan...

Finally found the author of the Love Locking Spell. Alas, it took nearly half a month to recover after reading this book. This book was called the Modern Jin Ping Mei by the up owner on Beep, which shows how highly rated it is. This book has a strong sense of character destiny, and the fate of the protagonist Zhao Tao can be foreseen from the beginning. To be honest, the setting of the "Love Locking Spell" is not new, and is even a bit disgusting to say the least. Jy can only be considered a good thing if it is put into a woman's body. Otherwise, it should not appear anywhere. After all, I am disgusted by looking at this thing, let alone making it. I reflected on why this work attracted me so much that when I saw the ending, even with the restraint of an adult, I was still panicking. Apart from the extremely concrete love that lasts until death, it was probably a campus love, because if I closed my eyes and tried to imagine that the background of the story happened in society instead of on campus, I would find that the impact on me was greatly weakened. First love on campus is still too powerful for those of us who are just beginning to fall in love. Let's talk about the meaty scenes. Xueda is probably the best one I've ever seen written by Liu Bei. I'm not a first brother, so I can clearly grasp the details of the meaty scenes. It's so real. Of course, it's still somewhat artistically processed, so there's nothing wrong with it. I won't talk about the early stage, but the two girls who moved me the most in the later stage were Zhang Xingyu and Meng Xiaohan. I won't mention why Zhang Xingyu moved me here. Meng Xiaohan, there is a plot in the original work. When Meng Xiaohan was teaching in the countryside, Meng Xiaohan, who was under a love-locking spell, was having an emotional struggle with Zhao Tao in the classroom. There was a sudden power outage, and the two children had a conflict. , A boy threw a girl's schoolbag out of the window with lightning and thunder, and the girl cried loudly, because the schoolbag was sewn for her by a dazzled grandma (look at this effort, one stroke brought out the childhood of us left-behind children born in the 90s) Meng Xiaohan, a weak and thin female college student, raised I picked up my skirt and walked resolutely outside the dark door, waded through knee-deep dirty muddy water, and retrieved the little girl's schoolbag, saving her grandma's love for the young girl. From then on, I rarely paid attention to erotic dramas. The author Xue Fan walked into my heart in a different way. To be honest, Mr. Xue Fan, Meng Xiaohan is a character in your novel, one of the dumplings you made for a meal of vinegar, but don't you think it's a little too cruel to Bai Yueguang when you were a student?

Maybe when I look back on my high school life in my forties, I will still remember the spring cherry blossoms in "The City". I have been reading for nine years. During the three years from the second year of junior high school to the second year of high school, I could often read for more than 16 hours a day during holidays. I also often stayed up late on weekdays to catch up on reading. I enjoy it to this day. Fortunately, unlike Abin (laughing), my high school grades were pretty good, and I also got 985 in Jiangxi. Reading online articles is my life habit, and online articles have accounted for a large proportion in my life for nine years; the city is my life book. When talking about the city, we have to mention Chunying's tolerant love and Xu Ting's lively, straightforward and jealous love. Yuqing Sanren Yi Linling's sixteen nights of blood wine, everyone is alive, three-dimensional, flesh and blood, sentimental and meaningful. As for Ye Chunying, in my opinion, it is Zhuang Yan and Luo Ji. Of course, most book friends may love Chunying the most (Xue Da wrote it so well). I don't know how many times I have read "The City" today, and I will always shed tears for such sincere feelings (envy and blessings, so beautiful!). Of course, the psalm part is also a very good part that I have to appreciate (shameful shame). I finished reading "Chapter 680: This is the Legendary Bad Start" for the first time, and I was eager to read the follow-up (scratching my heart is not enough to describe it, and the food and tea are not delicious, that's for sure), but when I heard the bad news about Xueda, I lamented in my heart, no matter what, I didn't want to end it. 🙇

Xueda, do you know that there is a foreign movie "Obsession" that plagiarized your book? It just came out a few days 🤭

I re-read Suo today, and I found that the writing is indeed more detailed. The martial arts and urban harem are both of a decent level. The main highlight is the writing about women. To be honest, I think it is average in other aspects. I really can't stand this single female protagonist, I hope the next one will be a harem. To be honest, since we have come to the starting point, don't make mistakes if you want to achieve results. Abuse of women and single female protagonists are destined to have no achievements. After all, the truth about women is at a high-quality level. Compared to the real masters at the starting point, they are still far behind.

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But the way the spell is implemented is much darker than what Snow says. The male protagonist only used the spell on the female protagonist and it was directly made into a horror movie In the end, of course, it was the same blood ending