Undead Natural Disaster? No, It's a Halo Disaster!

At least it's a guaranteed supply of food and grass, and it can still be considered a small boutique product. It would be better to polish it.

After entering the small garden, there is no numerical growth and no benefits. It is very boring. As of today, it has taken up more than a quarter of the space.

It's okay if the author wants to make jokes, but there's a problem if he plays too much and affects the normal writing. In addition, the writing style is not very good. There are many places where you can still watch comfortably without using gags. For example, Lava Spider Lord is full of gags. How did the author think that adding gags here and there during the battle would disrupt the coherence of the plot?

What did you write starting from Chapter 56? Why are you going to delete the previous part and rewrite the doomsday text? I was really speechless after watching a copy of the trial. Has the plot progressed a bit since Chapter 56?

I can feel the author's passion when writing, but it's still too stream-of-consciousness.

The range of the halo is outrageous. Let's not say the radius is 1000 at level 1, it must be at least 100, right? Give you 10m. I can't remember whether level 2 is 110 or 120m. According to this calculation, 10 means the radius is 1000+. Do you want to adopt the lord combat flow + cultivating hero units as the mainstream? Except for +0 after each level, or +0 for every 3 levels of range. Otherwise, this is the range, let alone the later stage. Based on the mid-term combat power, one or two kilometers is too slow for you to run for a few breaths. In addition, when the aura is turned on in the dungeon, it is fully visible. How many rounds can an AOE similar to a large-scale bombardment withstand? You can't help but make a copy, right? I don't know why I fill in this value. Others can see it when I turn on the aura. The numerical combat power starts to suppress the protagonist before it starts to increase. If you don't know how to fill in the numerical values, please give me some advice from the editor. The parallel world copy is just a trial for a newbie. I just want to know how long you want to write it? From chapter 46 to chapter 69 now, I don't think I've even written a third of the copy, but your article takes up half of the first half. The writing is so procrastinating. If you come here to see the length of this copy, you will have to read it on your subway phone.

Let's take a look at the results of the Lord's article. After reading the Doomsday article for almost half a month, I don't understand that if I don't write about the territory, am I planning to cede it?

This book is very innovative, but the updates are ridiculously slow. The slower you update, when the same model comes out, it will probably be a eunuch. It doesn't even have an explosive period. It will be gone after a while. It will be updated once a day.

What is the purpose of describing the life of the indigenous people in the world of Tingxiang? Although it is a parallel world, hasn't it been destroyed? The ending is already determined. The Tingxiang can be reset at any time. The key protagonist has not gained much yet.

A lot of people gave it good reviews. When I came in and took a look, wow, who did this?

The writing is very experienced, not like a novice at all, and it is updated twice a day. It is definitely the reincarnation of that father-in-law.

A very thoughtful author, his writing style is green, and some parts are overly blunt. It is obvious that he wants to make his writing more interesting, but the funny parts have already affected the main text. For example, before entering the second copy, people said that if you don't enter, I will kill you all. N, the author is still writing what the protagonist is thinking, and the protagonist is still waiting and watching. Such things will not make people think that the protagonist is stable, but will only think that he is an NPC, a maverick NPC. I hope the author will consider the behavioral logic of normal people when writing next

Is this how you put it on the shelves?

It's too little. If you write so few updates in one day, no one in the production team would dare to be lazy like you. Write more. If you dare to write, I will order. The brothers behind come up.

Laughing to death, is it really a eunuch?

There is no sense of immersion in the plot. The plot develops too slowly. If you don't advance, you will talk about trivial matters with the hero and you will not be able to see the direction of your development. Set up the nearby map. Aren't you going to fight with the empire later? Make some preparations. Set a checkpoint. The protagonist restores the halo to 10 meters. You don't dig tunnels or build high-rise buildings. How many people can stand on the ground? When the time comes to restore it, just recruit troops to guard the pass. The protagonist will get up in one wave. Don't be afraid of upgrading too fast. Now the upgrade is too slow. The background can cross the world line. Now a restore aura is a secret that can't be told. How about you play the plot? Is it necessary to write about daily routines in your new copy? The apocalyptic dungeon is decided by the Necromancer. Two words: Kill. I want to see rivers of blood. The dungeon is set to not drop anything. Is it really necessary for you to write this dungeon? Everyone sees you chatting about home affairs.

Very interesting, very few, only 20k on the shelf, boring, the copies are divided, it seems that it can be shortened by half, the plot development is slow, maybe the main reason is not updated enough, it is not exciting enough, it will probably take a long time to read it once, this mode is actually not good for the survival of new books

The writing is also getting better and better, 1. Starting from the middle and late chapters (the current number of chapters), the world view has been greatly updated, from the original one game, one main world, to the multiverse (I may write about the multiverse in the future, and now I have mentioned it and there will be a copy (although it may sound a bit magical to those who have not read it, but in fact, according to the article, it is very reasonable)) 2. The writing style is considered average. , Normal level (my standard is that the writing style of some platinum authors may not reach the top level and can only be above average, and average is mediocre) 3. I have also been a bookworm for almost ten years. From the original fantasy, games, and light novels to the current fantasy, (I don't read the famous books), this world view is combined quite a lot. This is the first time I have seen this book, but many of the features are very familiar, and I have seen them before. 4. Then many people think that the protagonist's value may be a little too low (many people are worried that it will not be enough in the later stage (for example, the halo range is too small). In fact, if it is not enough, the author himself will give it. Even if the previous article is not changed later, the current bonus for each level of the halo is just waiting. Definitely, maybe the value will increase exponentially with each level when needed later), and now I have the ability to push the current plot, (then I have read the book, so I will say, hey, didn't some mysterious people not fight? This should be a special event later, the current number of chapters At least I'm just a novice. Let's go through it first. As long as the author's rewards are reasonable, the protagonist will level up very quickly.) Now the protagonist is farming and fighting monsters. In reality, there can be some upgrades. The combination of meat and vegetables 5. So it's very strange that it includes reviews of other books. I feel I feel that compared to the past, people are more anxious when reading books now. The numerical value is just a part of the plot. Some people say that some books are slow to upgrade in the early stage, but even those books by great masters are popular.

The order is mixed up. If you want to become the top lord, you must have more rare units and heroes, so that you can become stronger. Instead of you becoming stronger, winning battles and battles, and then saying that you don't rely on rare units and heroic units. It is putting the cart before the horse. It is correct to express the view that in a protracted war, the main force is ordinary arms. But more attention should be paid to the value of rare units and heroes. Like the Abyss Chamber Trial that the protagonist participates in, it cannot be completed without the protection of Hate Fengxian and the super arrow of the outstanding elf. As for daily monster spawning, it would not be possible without Fengxian's leadership. In the end, whether it is the war in Abyss and Eternity or other novels, it is never the largest number of soldiers that determines the outcome. What can determine the direction of a war is always the top combat power.

I just want to know if the author added a halo range

Why did you pull it out from the bookshelf and see that it has been dead for five months?

Let's continue updating after the new year is over.

Speaking of the author of this book, I am quite speechless. It took me five months to write, 500,000 words. As a result, when it comes to the eunuch, the protagonist still has not started the official lord trial. In other words, after writing for so long, the protagonist's experience lasted less than a month, only about ten days.

Why don't you write it? Author, what are you thinking about?

Hey, the settings are pretty good. I quite like it and plan to keep it again.

One seat in the cleaning room! ! !

Grass a plant

I went, and it turned out to be a real eunuch. I thought it was just a two-day break?