Lu Mingfei: It's Time for Me to Destroy the World

The follow-up to Dragon Four is better than most of the Dragon clan dramas I've seen, but it's just that Zhao Menghua has too many scenes during the escape. Why does an ordinary person with a thin bloodline have so many scenes? I suggest changing the emphasis later. I don't think Chen Wenwen was promoted by Lu? She is still pregnant with Zhao's child, so I suggest that Zhao be made the mistress and the scenes be deleted. That's a little more interesting. The neighbor next door can conquer Su Xiaoyan, so Chen, a married woman with children, wakes up and then falls back to the old ways, which is also a selling point, right? If Zhao still has so many scenes in the subsequent daily routines, I think this book will be overdue. I hope he won't die. After reducing Zhao's role, I think this book can be compared with The Dusk of the Wind.

I couldn't read the first three chapters. Isn't Lu Mingfei such a waste? I thought those wastes in the fandom were already enough waste.

The plot of the finale of "Eating Dragon Four" can be considered a second creation by a fan, which is understandable. The description of the original characters is mysterious, and the magic spells are nonsense. They are on par with the animated dragons. Some of the underlying logic is not clear. It can be said that it is written out of ideas. Finally, it's cheap, it's not extremely poisonous, and you can eat it if you tolerate it.

I couldn't stand the first chapter after reading several paragraphs. Not to mention comparing with the original works and some high-quality dragon fan fiction, Tomato has many books with better writing than this 😅

No, what does the introduction mean to kill Constantine? Then kill the Diwang brothers and sisters?

Dragon King 2: The world restarts?

The sauce is here, bubbling + tasting!

This is the Dragon Five I want to see.

If you change your name, your grades will be better.

It is written with great feeling because of its broadness.

It's quite good, and it feels very interesting, but the character arc becomes a bit abrupt. Secondly, the title and introduction of the book are completely inconsistent with your content. Those who are attracted by the title will leave after just two glances. Please change your introduction. You are the continuation of the Dragon Clan, not Lu Mingfei, a foreign student who relies on jokes to attract people. You can describe it in the same narrative tone as the Dragon Clan.

Where is Shennong? ? ?