There Is No Limit to My Swordsmanship

The setting of the sword cultivator is a bit too outrageous. Whose sword cultivator consumes a lot of money, has to fight, cannot lose, and in the end the combat power is not too strong? According to the author's setting, this kind of profession should have been eliminated long ago. It is unproductive and extremely cost-effective. What does the sect want?

You've already achieved proficiency, what's the next step? ! Author, are you crazy?

The skills are perfect, but the realm is in a mess

At the beginning, there are a lot of supporting characters who do nothing and just stare at the protagonist every day.

It should not be a small success after perfecting one's skills. I suggest changing it to: (The following is for reference only) First level·First glimpse of the door Second level·Small success Third level·Entering the hall Fourth level ·Perfection Five realms·Superior perfection Six realms·reaching the pinnacle Seven realms·transcendence into the holy Eight realms·returning to nature Nine realms·unity of man and nature Ten realms·skills close to the Tao

Brother, your idea is really good, but can you please stop those embarrassing face-slapping plots?

The character of the protagonist is really awkward The supporting character... The supporting character is also very strange... The supporting characters in this book generally have this attitude towards the protagonist: Hate for no reason Love for no reason The content and plot are all bad things written by previous people, nothing new... The character creation is like a paper man...

. It's not good, it's too verbose, it's too watery, The serious problem is that you don't understand the Golden Finger properly. I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 16. I can produce sword energy, but I can't do it later. Are you kidding me?

It should feel good, the protagonist can be regarded as a genius, but without the feeling of genius, the protagonist is always stuck and suppressed every time, which is not fun at all. The conflict is also every time the opponent's younger brother looks down on the protagonist. Anyway, he just belittles the protagonist without thinking, and then the protagonist breaks through. The opponent sees that the protagonist has potential, but I just don't invest, and I just insist on trying to figure it out. There is no end to it. It's not much, there's still a lot of water

According to this process, there is no sect competition that cannot be completed with 100,000 words.

I saved 63 chapters and finished reading it in 21 minutes. . . . The kind that floods Jinshan Mountain and floods the sky. . . That is to say, the setting theme of the book and the writing style are really good for a short person. . . .

The author should ignore those people, updates are the way to go.

It is written like a novice, and the whole story shows the talent, shock, investment entanglement, regret, and the cultivation in the early stage of Qi training that seems to be invincible in the finale.

After reading books for more than ten years, it is rare to see something so watery. If it is not watery, it would be okay, but now it is too watery, and a lot of pen and ink are often spent in unnecessary places. The same thing, which can be finished in a few paragraphs, has to be written in seven or eight different ways to write half a chapter. Sometimes after reading a few chapters, there is no impact at all. It is completely divorced from the main plot and branch plots, and has nothing to do with the relationship between the characters. The key is that these contents did not make me feel happy, relaxed, happy, or feel any of these emotions. It can be said that it has no meaning and is just a word count. The free chapters are okay, but after charging, the feeling becomes more serious. If you don't change it, you can only give up reluctantly. It's a heart-wrenching money to spend.

Those data give me a headache. Each chapter has a lot of panel data to reduce the word count. And I know you really want everyone to see how awesome the protagonist is, but it's not like there is one character in every chapter who is shocked. Besides being shocked, the standard configuration of each chapter is to show a bunch of panel data, and then pull out a group of people to slap him in the face 😅

What about the protagonist? Passers-by come and tell the protagonist that they can accept it, but the protagonist can't not show up for a few chapters, right? There are only a few sentences in it, and they are all about the little jerk who comes from nowhere, and the psychological activities. You can write some, but the whole thing is a bit speechless😑. Am I here to see the protagonist, or am I here to see the psychological activities of passers-by? Can you figure out the priority? I accept the slow progress, but I can't accept the lack of plot advancement and hard water.

How about changing the name to "Ninety-nine Ways to Invest in Geniuses". The overall plot has not advanced much. There are already a lot of supporting roles in investment. So far, no management has appeared in the entire Longxi Peak except the senior sister. The elder peak leader, etc., And the power structure of the entire sect has not been clearly described.

Brother saw Chapter 80. To be honest, with your hydrographic skills, I doubt whether you have expanded it. You don't look like a human head. The writing is smooth, but the flow is unnatural. If you are trying to write 1,000 or 2,000 pictures, for your skill, changing the map is enough. In terms of the story itself, you quite disrespect yourself. Your human brain may be intelligence. If you have the ability or conditions, write a better and higher-grade novel with many details, like computer generation. Don't deny that many key turning points are deliberately inhumane in order to cause conflict. And based on the real protagonist's character, the genre you wrote. A very rigid flow of upgrading and killing monsters. If it weren't for your water character, it would look smooth and smooth. The first 30 cards were discarded. Your intelligence or human brain is not incapable of defeating you, but you are deliberately delaying it.

Once you practice Qi to build the foundation, you will come into contact with time and space. I don't even know how you are going to write about the subsequent realms. I saw the previous article about building a foundation. He was already a eunuch.

The suspected author's new book looks similar

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Don't finish the novel. The upgrade flow is very interesting. Keep it up. There are still people. You can take one chapter for a few days if you are under great pressure. It's like a novel, Immortality begins with the Sword of Ignorance. You should be the author or refer to that book. I like your subject matter very much.

How can I still be on the best-selling selection 🤔

As for people, you really have to find the book and read it. It's the least risky 😰

Mouth melon! Not enough to read! ! !

I remember there was a book similar to this book a few years ago. The protagonist realized the artistic conception and joined the sect. The second generation female in the sect turned against the protagonist. The cover of the book was the same as this book. It was written less than this book and ended up being a eunuch like this book. He was probably the same person.

Another book of food and grass is missing😒😒😒😒

Audience +1😆 quick update

I personally think it's very interesting. It's true that there are too many descriptions in some places, resulting in a chapter that doesn't have much content, so I hope the author can grasp it well.

I think it suits my taste, so vote directly for the monthly ticket! ! !