Duzhen Wujun

I don't quite understand. There are a lot of conflicts. You are so good at martial arts, but you are bullied all the time? ? ?

The title of your book does not match the content. The title of the book is "Jun", "Great Emperor", etc. When you open the first chapter, the protagonist is a useless beggar, which does not match your title at all. You might change it to "So-and-so Tianjun starts from a useless beggar", so that readers will not have a big psychological gap.

Don't catch a cold 👿

The protagonist is so useless, it's all in vain

You don't write about picking up ashes. What's the point of writing such an opening? You also point out that the daughter-in-law is used to create conflicts to start the plot. It's not pleasing.

The pace is too slow. When will this speed become the Supreme Elder?

Why don't the officials kill him? . Stay and feel mom. . . Isn't it nonsense that the world of high martial arts relies on status rather than strength?

I don't understand why this old man Le Wen is so popular?

Father-in-law and daughter-in-law, new track?

I can't stand it anymore, feel good but can't feel good anymore

I always thought he was called Duwu Zhenjun, but I didn't expect that there would be something wrong with my eyes and brain. After all, the name Zhenjun is relatively common, and it also makes me laugh.

Hello, author, come on, author.