Douluo Dalu: The Legend of the Dragon King: I Am the Holy Sword Wielder, Slaying All Evil

The character of the protagonist is not suitable for the Holy Sword 🗡️. His character does not look like an adult but looks like a child or an ordinary person who has gained power and is about to be taken away. I hope that the character of the protagonist can match Guangming, otherwise he will be the second Yan Shaozhe, and Na'er's role is easy to play. People are silver dragons who are not attracted to the golden dragon but are attracted to you. Tang Hao is also there, and the martial spirit is also fake. The silver dragon has a golden dragon martial spirit.

No, if you increase the combat power of the original work, wouldn't it be equivalent to suppressing the combat power in disguise? Originally, the protagonist can become invincible when he reaches a certain combat power, but if you have to improve the original combat power, the protagonist still needs to further improve his combat power to become invincible.

The protagonist's personality doesn't match well. It looks very awkward. Wouldn't the author change it? This book feels like it will cut off the protagonist's personality. It's too weird to match the Holy Sword. It would be much better if the protagonist's personality is directly matched with the old sword. And the Holy Spear is also weird as the second martial spirit. You can use the Holy Spear as an artifact. Avalon is the second martial spirit but you can't attach a soul ring. There will be some passive skills and it will be better to unlock all the abilities in the later stage. For example, abilities such as Dragon's Furnace Intuition can be used as additional abilities of Avalon. When a certain level is reached, a holy spear can be used as an artifact. When the protagonist encounters difficult opponents in the middle and late stages of the spiritual sea, it can be used as a trump card. However, some restrictions must be added, otherwise it will be too strong. The protagonist can be made mature and stable. A protagonist with a too out-of-the-box personality will give people a bad impression 😒

Even if Naer awakened her martial soul when she was six years old, she still awakened the golden dragon 😅

Then where can I make up for the Avalon I'm missing? This thing is the most over-the-top.

Let's deal with Tang Hao on the other side of the holy spear. Even if the sun turns into a martial spirit, it's just a fireball. Even if the holy spear and holy sword turn into a martial spirit, it's impossible to go through so many levels.

I remember that when the protagonist joined Shrek at the beginning, he said that he wanted to protect the ordinary people of Shrek City, saying that those people should not die so he wanted to stop the Holy Spirit Cult. But now the Holy Spirit Cult still bombed Shrek City, and the protagonist originally resisted the explosion and protected half of the city, but in the end he chose to give up the lives of half the city to protect Shrek's teachers and students. Did I miss something?

6. It's time to create your own world of gods. The protagonist is still 13 years old.

I have an idea. The protagonist's personality is changed (really into Saber) so that Dou Yi and Qian Renxue become sisters, and they are assimilated by Qian Renxue. They are both twin martial souls, and both have stupid hair. It would be perfect to find a few more who are both orange and orange.

Some authors just have a problem. They write so well for the protagonist that they can't write it later.