Tongchuan: What Do You Mean You Know It at a Glance?

It would be better if it were not unlimited flow, but if it is unlimited flow, you take too much for one person. And it's too rambling. Many times it's a long paragraph that is typed out without segmentation. It hurts my eyes to look at it. In the third golden chapter, you prove that the fight between the protagonist and Feng Baobao is indeed something. Others. . . . Be concise, focus on the theme, and then have a maximum of 100 chapters in a world, about 50 to 60 chapters. Unless you want to bury a lot of foreshadowing in this world, it will be about 50 chapters. Originally, the first world is to lay the foundation, the second world is to determine your own route, and the third and fourth worlds start to have fun or talk about xinxing issues.

Why do almost all the authors of the same genre write about Under One Person? It is really a boring and shitty world.

Under one person, ➕Douluo Continent also 💩hit💩

I feel like readers now have a bad sense of one person, dragon clan, and demon slayer, and they have no desire to read when they see the names.

To be honest, it's made in China, it's made in Japan To be honest, it's a good choice to go to the world of Inuyasha with the protagonist's conditions You can also raise a few monsters, and you can also collect some four soul jade fragments If it's not a domestically produced light novel, if it's a domestically produced anime and the light novel is relatively popular, you need to pay royalties or be sued, but Under One Person, there are a lot of fan fictions written, but because it is not very popular, basically the authors and officials of Under One Person have not complained I actually want to see the time-travel world view of Chinese animation For example, Qin Shimingyue, such as Xia Lan, such as Tico, such as 12 Zodiac Crossing the Jianghu, such as the Magic Soldier Young General, and such as Under One Man, such as the Demon Fox Little Matchmaker, etc.

It is written as if it is omniscient and omnipotent. It wants to forcefully intervene in all kinds of things, and it wants to save everything like a nanny. It is a very ancient way of writing a fan.

This damn thing can also be mixed into a potential new book? Is Qidian becoming more and more misleading?

Personally, I think writing about one person and the dragon clan in the same time is the biggest poison

It seems that many people don't like the first few chapters of the one-person chapter. They think the protagonist is weak and a bit stupid, so I decided to revise it. Sorry for bringing you a bad sensory experience. Red bean puree, fruit TAT Then there is something else I want to ask you. Have you ever played Yu-Gi-Oh!, Naruto Mobile, Honor of Kings, Apex, Triangle, Arknights, Star Rail, Minecraft, CS Go, Touhou Project? Can you take me with you? It's best to have Dongfang Project. I've wanted to join OMO for a long time If you want to play together, you can come and play QQ group: 991848031

I was persuaded to quit by the weak name of the protagonist, what a bad name

I feel that the author is a bit like someone who came from a female pornographic novel. Even though it is a trap, its core is not very logical and has a kind of beauty that makes me think about it 🙂

From the perspective of a one-person story, the protagonist is just a fire captain. The protagonist does not cause trouble or show off his dignity, but instead plays house in a circle of aliens. How can this attract readers to continue reading?

The protagonist's surname is Wumingli. I can't stand this bad name anyway.

This book feels like a eunuch, and I like to write the order of cause and effect in reverse. First you have to pretend to be nice and then you have to do whatever it takes to get it back together. It's just like bragging and not drafting.

If you write about Tongchuan, you should write well, and if you do research on Tongchuan, you should do scientific research well. There are a lot of inexplicable things. I can tell at a glance at this pit that if I don't fill it in, I will probably fail.

What the hell, how could you write about Douluo Continent? ?

The main character's name is too dramatic, can't he have a normal name? Powerless and powerless. If you are not careful, you will regard it as powerless to say and powerless to do.

I feel that the writing is okay. As long as the world I choose is not too biased, it doesn't matter, and the writing is interesting. The more innovative thing is to do scientific research in space. I feel that it is from this time that I started to let myself go and write so fast. To give a more vivid metaphor, it is said that a piece of rocket fuel was picked up in the delta, and then it turned into a rocket engine while talking about it, and finally it became how a Dongfeng missile hit the moon. I'm not saying that writing like this is not good and readers don't write novels, but I just want to talk about the feeling of reading. The writing is quite divergent and seems to be far away from the main line and the branch lines. I am about to start a new main line. Author, if you write in such a divergent way, you will deviate from the topic. Please strengthen the connection or jump directly to the main line. You make me suspect that you do not have a story outline.

Many people say that the one-person chapter is very hooky (●—●) First, you can jump directly to Chapter 22, which is when you enter the foggy space. Doesn't affect the viewing experience at all. _(:з∠)_ This is the first time I started writing, so I wrote this following the original work, and the rest are basically original. The story of the one-person chapter is mainly about acquiring the Eight Magical Skills and some other techniques as raw capital. Then just follow the original plot. That is the section of Luotian Dajiao. Then have some fun. There is also the Douluo chapter, because at that time many people said they didn't like it, so I compressed that chapter a lot. But in fact, some people must still like it. So Sorry, maybe that length is a bit rushed. Skipping those 21 pictures directly will not affect the viewing experience. So you can feel free to skip it. Also, why is the protagonist called powerless? Mainly because I sometimes watch some videos, such as war, poverty and bullying, and when some people use their own privileges to oppress others. I feel very powerless and sad, so I named the protagonist Powerless. But actually on the contrary, I hope he has the ability to solve the sorrow in the world. So he is called powerless, but I hope he is powerful. These are probably the questions that everyone wants to ask right now.

Can anyone tell me why the protagonist of Naruto suddenly becomes so awesome starting from chapter 23? I feel like I missed several chapters.

，，！ With some luck, Lao Shou Dao wrote his own book "Swallowing Everything: I Created a New World in the Cold Land".

It was highly recommended. Other books were more than 100,000 words long, but this one was more than 200,000 words long. I was wondering why it wasn't on the shelves. After reading the content, I found that it does make sense.

Hey, haven't I read this book? Why are the comments missing?

It's quite interesting and not boring to watch.

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research

The development is too fast. In such a short time, we have concept weapons and prototypes.

Did you have an epiphany after it was released? The writing is much better than before it was put on the shelves

Thank you

I feel that the author should be a newcomer or an AI, because reading this book felt like a running book, bland and unremarkable, and I didn't feel any sense of involvement at all.