I Can Go to the Past and Future

Unknowingly, I came across this "new book" of nearly 1.2 Million words from the book written by the author before the update. Qiao Yuan's story also started from the previous cyber world, where he wanted to become the master of the multiverse, and in this book, he can travel to the past and future. Qiao Yuan's story continues, and it can even be said that the protagonist of every book is named Qiao Yuan. In fact, the author's hard work can be seen in every book. Take this book as an example. Qiao Yuan accidentally entered the timeline after being kidnapped. Starting from the Devil's Hotel three years ago, every time he explores an anchor point in the past and future, it can be seen as a complete world that is independent but connected through details and clues. You can even view the stories at different anchor points as copies of complete designs, and you can feel the author's intention in the design. However, after there are too many anchors, my memory is indeed a little confusing and I can't remember the name of the person and what he did before. This is probably caused by my automatic subscription and then intermittently following updates every two weeks. But it should be said that Qiao Yuan has experienced so many stories, and the one that impressed me the most in retrospect was not the latest plot, but the scene in Chapter 148, when Charles was interrogating, the previous plots and characters were connected together, and he was officially exposed to the recent plot. However, it is also possible that he was impressed by the vampire Viscount Asak in that chapter simply because of the recent movie "Twilight". I typed so many words without realizing it. In short, the author just stick to your ideas and write. I will always automatically subscribe to support you. ~(¯▽¯~)

Not to mention, look at my reading data 👇🏻

Excuse me, dear ones, if you like this book, you can read the last page of the latest chapter every day. It's up to you, dear ones, to show your appreciation. —— It is the first time for a female author to come to Qidian to write a book. The theme is daily love + passionate adventure. The setting is a fantasy future background, and the sublimation potion sequence is overall relaxed and unconventional. I also dubbed a few paragraphs in the first chapter, haha, but no one has read it, and I have no favorites. If it offended you, I am very sorry, and I would like to apologize to you.

I saw the author's advertisement in the comment section of other books, which shows that advertising is useful. The author does not need to be embarrassed. It was very difficult for the author before he became famous. Come on ^0＾~

Has anyone tried Shennong? How to say?

When I first read this book, I clicked on it because the advertisement said it had a lolita sound. But I didn't stick with it for long the first time I watched it. There were a lot of settings thrown out at once in the first few chapters, so I put it down without reading it at the time. I came across this book again recently, and actually read it straight into it. I spent more than two days catching up on the latest chapter. While pursuing the book, I found that the score of this book was indeed a bit poor, as if I could not predict which day it would be cut. It can be seen from the various settings and details that the author has put a lot of thought into it, but if there are too many settings, it is easy to be dismissed before entering the plot. The overall plot is relatively comfortable. There is no particularly long copy, and there is no plot that forces the protagonist to suffer. The plot of the battle of wits is very interesting, there are many plots against each other, and the villain is also very clever. The daily love story in the middle is also quite sweet, and I quite like it. The author likes to write details such as scenes or the clothing of the main and supporting characters, which may make it more graphic. However, if you just want to quickly read the main story, it may feel a bit cumbersome. In general, this book cannot be said to have no shortcomings. It may be a little discouraging at the beginning, but after the first few chapters, I still like it quite a lot. The setting is very serious, and the plot is not too sinister. It is considered a good book. The author must keep writing 🙂

🙂The author advertised himself🤓

Why is the author's data so poor? I have also reviewed the author's previous books, but the data is not good. Why is this?

I saw the advertisement and haven't started watching it yet, but I took a look and the reviews said it was good, so I'll do it if I continue 😏

Don't expect one book to rise because it is unrealistic. There are many people who write novels, and there are also many people who commit suicide. This is an objective reality. I can see that you are under a lot of pressure, which is understandable. Personal suggestion: What you have to do is to update 4k words steadily every day. You can have perfect attendance for the next three months, which can be regarded as a gain. After you have perfect attendance for three months, you can continue writing if you want to. If you don't want to write, then you can do what you want to do in advance, whether it is to find a class or something else. Remember, don't take any irrelevant remarks to heart, including those of your loved ones, because these are consuming your own energy. The most important thing when writing novels is to persist, keep writing, and then study excellent novels and improve yourself. This is the key to success. Some thoughts, I hope it can help you.

After reading some chapters, I feel that the author's paragraphing is a bit dense. Some of it affects the reading experience. You can adjust this aspect according to the situation. (The following should generally not be more than three rows, which can improve the perception of many mobile phone users.) Writing a book is about adjusting your mood. Read the book reviews every few days and don't think too much. The pressure will be lower and your insomnia may be better. Parental pressure, from another perspective, at least she is paying attention to your sleep health and your body. Although in the eyes of parents, adequate sleep is not as good as the correct sleep time. Individual differences are often ignored (personal physical factors require more time to rest and adjust the body), so don't get too carried away. From a personal perspective, let me share my thoughts on the few chapters I read. The biggest pleasure in going back to the past is to change history, especially tragedy. The second is the author's secret knowledge of history, but some secrets. After returning, someone suddenly mentioned something weird (they didn't know the specific situation and could only guess), but you alone know the inside story of that matter, which is cool. And I intuitively feel that the effect will be much worse after a few chapters. There are also some explanations of the environment style. If there are too many narrations, there will be a lack of sense of substitution. I feel that occasionally mentioning one or two sentences, not too long, and then showing the details as the plot advances, makes the reading smoother and more comfortable. Well, there is also the execution of White Rose, which feels like a shortcoming. Imitation, hoping to provide some new ideas for the author: " Qiao Yuan walked as fast as flying, and threw the green flame magic sword in his hand fiercely. The sharp blade tore open the clothes, through the flesh and blood, bringing out a "red line" and scattering to the ground. White Rose snorted, her eyes full of fear: "Spare, spare my life!" The voice was sharp. Sharp and harsh. The salty liquid coming out of the corner of her mouth made her lips more beautiful. The pain of her soul being burned made her endure the severe pain in her hand, and she knelt on the ground to support herself and tried to draw the sword. Qiao Yuan approached her angrily, holding the demon bone hand without saying a word. Rose's delicate neck, with a slight exertion, the snow-white skin gradually turned red and purple. Finally... It broke completely with a click. " (Refer to the author's original text, my wording is not refined enough. I personally feel that some similar words are richer than the scientific name of the object (picture information). For example, just using "mouth" to describe mouth is a bit monotonous, while cherry lips contain hidden information about color and shape. I think the author can use it as appropriate. Of course, straightforward description can also create a picture, but it will be better to use it interspersed.) In my humble opinion, I wish the author better success in writing books.

The update is too slow, it should be 10 chapters a day; how can an author of this age sleep well 😍

{"NickName":"Light Years of Dreams","UserId":448961725} I'm a little bit annoyed, why do you always read the book with colored glasses? You said that the various things I wrote at the beginning were awkward, especially the relics and the plot. Let me give you an example, the 4.2 Million-word Four Star Fire Book "Then Let Them Show Their Loyalty!" ", It also opens with a crisis plot, and in the third chapter the system suddenly rewards the protagonist with an Aurora Stone (the protagonist is a time traveler, so he doesn't know about it) and then the system introduces it as a catastrophic item. Before the system reward, without any foreshadowing, something suddenly popped up and was called a disaster. No one in this chapter said anything unexpected. And my opening. From the beginning of the introduction to the Death Hotel, I specifically mentioned that there are often gang members doing pornography, smuggling, relics and other transactions in the hotel, which is very chaotic. This is the first time the relic is mentioned, but not introduced. The second mention of relics is the core of the opening plot of White Rose. The other party came to the hotel to find the relics. I clearly introduced the relics in a plot way, and introduced the power of the relics through White Rose's dialogue. I even used the relics as the core to promote the plot. It was not a rigid description or forced insertion. Why did it become abrupt? There are also relics in the Apocalypse Forecast, which begins when the cultists first create pollution, and then the heroine in the wheelchair mentions that it is a relic and needs to be handled with caution. Isn't it all introduced through the plot? These special settings appear for the first time. How can I write them without introducing them? Is it awkward once they are introduced? And my third narration introduction is still based on the first two foreshadowings. What's wrong with that? I wrote more about the same content than those great masters prepared, but why did it become abrupt? Just because I am the little Karami that no one cares about. Just because my grades are not good, your first impression is that I am not good at writing. Is this reasonable?

Can anyone comment on Shen Nong?

It seems like female authors write more female protagonists, tsk tsk tsk. This reminds me of a lot of not-so-good memories.

Hello, I'm still a lv1 little lolita after writing 400,000 words.

Support every dream chaser😡

The author writes so well. After reading dozens of chapters, I really want to send a monthly pass but I don't have it yet. I have subscribed to some in bulk and I will give it to you when I get the monthly pass. Please keep writing🥺

Come on

The advertisement said there is a loli dubbing, do you have the coordinates? I felt good after reading the first chapter.

Come on, I'm from another book club, let's have a taste first.

Nine sublimation methods, this is quite interesting, thirty sequence paths, ang, it seems a bit much, I don't know if the author is a complete newcomer or an outsider.

I voted for 3 monthly votes. Not much though.

The novel is a type of fantasy future, love adventure, the first few chapters explain the background, and then there is a series of growth of the protagonist, and a series of challenges corresponding to the survival crisis. It is enough to be refreshing, exciting but not boring, and there are also small desserts in daily life such as love, so it is not a loss at all.

What state of power is the Eternal Great Luo equivalent to? Is it a transcendent state? A concept based on the Tao Fruit of He Yi and the Sacrificial Tao of the Trilogy?

Stay healthy, write slowly, believe in yourself I can only support meagerly and cast 5 votes

Capture the author and follow the follow-up 😊

I like the comfortable writing style, and the story is also very interesting. I will order all the books directly in two days, keep it up.

I haven't read the latest chapter yet, but I feel that the author still writes very well. Please support it by voting for it. Come on.

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