China Entertainment: This Actor Comes from the Fairy World

The setting is very interesting, but I need to practice my writing skills. The plot is a little bit toxic. If you read a lot of books, I probably won't be able to read it. I don't like this book.

The protagonist is simply treated like a black slave. The protagonist is indeed a pure person. The character of the protagonist does not care about this aspect of interests, but the reader's perspective cannot see this. The protagonist may not need it, but you must give him a supporting role.

This setting is so interesting, but I was a little confused at the beginning. If it is related to a character like Xianqi, then don't slap yourself in the face and add more heroines or multiple emotional lines. Either there is a single heroine with no other ambiguities, or there is no heroine at all and the focus is on the career line. Otherwise, the front foot is still talking about the dirty desires, and the back foot is pulling on this and that, which completely conflicts with the setting. Keeping the character of cultivating immortals, it is this kind of amazing purity of words, without meal replacement 🤓

I couldn't hold back after reading the first three chapters. The protagonist, an immortal, reincarnated and came to the earth. He was adopted as a baby by an old Taoist priest and grew up. After going down the mountain for the first time at the age of 6, he felt that the desire in the world was full of turbidity, so he never went down the mountain again. I met people from the crew when I was 20 years old. I don't have a concept of money, I don't know the capital, I don't know what an actor is. Isn't this immortal's intelligence too low? I have lived for 20 years. Although I live in the mountains, I am not a savage in a Taoist temple with an old Taoist priest. Don't you have any contact with modern things in your life? Even if the protagonist doesn't bother to learn some common sense, he should understand it, right? Or rather, the old man raised him like a pig, not allowing him to participate in any labor or contact with the outside world, and not arranging compulsory education or carrying out basic education by himself. This was too inconsistent with the character of the kind-hearted Taoist priest who adopted him. To say that the master and apprentice are really isolated from the world is inconsistent with the situation where the protagonist can produce his ID card.

What kind of retarded plot, I can't hold on to the second chapter. This is not a person who has lived for thousands of years, but a mentally retarded person who has lived for thousands of years.

The An family and Liu family helped Chen Jinfei a lot when he started his business, so he paid for the investment to find resources as a favor. Of course, this person was not able to help much later, but he must not be written as a villain. Cai Yinong, a Tang Dynasty person, was born in Hong Kong and was a paparazzi. He couldn't make it in Hong Kong by starting a small business. I don't know who he fell in love with and came to the mainland to open a company. He brought in the dirty skills of the Hong Kong and Taiwan media, including Liu Yifei.

Taking the current 33 chapters as an example, the protagonist has been established in 2003. The entry point of "The Condor and the Immortal Sword" is 100% that the heroine is Lao Liu. If you like this book but have no feelings for Lao Liu, you can leave directly. I will go first.

I was attracted by the novel subject matter and perspective of the author, and continued reading while the protagonist was praised and praised along the way and the settings were stacked with buffs. There were many novel angles that were not found in other Huayu books, but there was not enough plot to take over the setting of the protagonist. Often a small behavior of the protagonist or a sentence of dialogue between the protagonist and the protagonist will be praised by the power of narration for a whole page or even half a chapter. From the actions of the protagonist, to the thoughts of the supporting character, to the thoughts of the protagonist, then the actions of the main character, then the thoughts of the supporting character, and finally the reasons and circumstances for the thoughts of the supporting character. Such a complete set of flowing water is touted, and then matched with many protagonist backgrounds, supporting role backgrounds, and even the backgrounds of the shooting locations. I can only say that this pot of cold porridge is too thin. A bowl of instant noodles that only contains vegetable packets but is filled with cold water. The ever-increasing number of settings is like a lump of seasoning that cannot be melted. You can see and smell it but cannot soak it or stir it. I hope the author can add more hot water and stir it up in the future.

When the saint of heaven comes to Huayu, he has to be a fat licking dog

Is all the waste flowing into entertainment literature?

This title is about an actor from the fairy world, so he must at least have some ability to cultivate the fairy world. I didn't see any supernatural elements, so it's just a ghost.

No, are you going astray now? In each chapter, the protagonist can act however he wants. The other actors ask the protagonist, the director asks the protagonist, the screenwriter asks the protagonist, and finally he is convinced. What a bunch of truths? ? ?

I don't know what the point of going down like this is. Your grades won't get better if you keep writing like this. You will definitely become a eunuch in the end.

All kinds of dialogues and emotional scenes feel very awkward. The protagonist does not look like a normal person from the beginning to the end. Even if he is a cultivator, he will not have lost his brain. In addition, there are various places about ethnicity, religion, etc. That he likes to stuff private goods. You yourself only have a partial understanding of these things. Many of your opinions feel ridiculous, and you like to use them to improve the protagonist's personality. This feeling is really disgusting.

It's a bit fancy. There are too many characters for water.

The most talented person in the immortal world, failed to survive the tribulation and was reincarnated on earth? If the first genius of all time cannot become an immortal, are there any immortals in the immortal world? If so, why should a loser like the protagonist, who failed to survive the catastrophe, deserve to be called the first genius of all time?

I keep chewing words and talking nonsense. Most of the chapter is meaningless. I feel like I have lost my money.

When I wrote about going to Hong Kong to make a movie with Jackie Chan, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was written in such detail that it was really boring to watch ヽ(ー_ー)ノ

At the beginning of this book, it is a good setting that the protagonist is a cultivator of immortality. Later, the author completely molded the protagonist into a wordsmith, just like the protagonist of a book who understands all the words but does not understand the meaning behind the words. Every move is completely rigid

There are too many roles for the agent, and he intervened in the male protagonist's relationship twice, which feels like he's too much involved.

It's too slow, start raising 🙄

The last book was too high-minded and failed to write, and it seems to be the same this time.

The waste stream has the nerve to call itself a fairy

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What are these things written about the rebirth of the Immortal God Emperor in the previous life? Even if the means of cultivation are gone, the vision, city, cognition, and pursuit of the previous life cannot be lost! If anything, it would be a dimensionality-reducing blow to mortals. How come every one of them is written like a native of the earth, and most of them are even as funny as a country bumpkin.

Looking good lately, come on

It's too verbose and too much nonsense. Even if you're good at numbers, it's not like this. What we're looking at is not Baidu Encyclopedia.

It's good to read, but there are only two chapters per day, which is too few. I'll finish it by accident. It's really torture to follow through. 😭