A Netizen of Ten Years Is a Cool School Beauty

Overall, it's okay. From the more than twenty chapters I've read, the character creation is a bit mediocre but not bad. But it won't always be this mediocre in the future. Based on the data in the author's previous book, I reasonably doubt whether his writing skills can support daily descriptions. If not, he will inevitably write about the problems the two of them face. Whether it is internal conflicts or external unexpected situations, it is easy to get into trouble. , Although I invested, the author had better keep the quality, and the foreshadowing laid now: why Yuzi likes Bai Zhou so much that he takes the initiative to tease, and why Bai Zhou can also take the initiative to accept the teasing of his "brother" for ten years. These are all made up by memories. If it is done well, it will be an excellent character creation. If not, I can think of girls who don't love themselves and are charming. (It's really best not to show up directly with your ex-girlfriend. I'm afraid the author got too excited and turned it into a slap-in-the-face article.) More than forty chapters have been updated, but I have only read about twenty. If the following chapters deal with my above-mentioned problems, please don't worry about it, and I sincerely hope that the author will get better and better.

The introduction gave me some dissuasion. Now I hate this kind of breakup/divorce/cheating plot at the beginning. In my opinion, this kind of plot has no effect on the subsequent plot development and is purely to distract people. (I would like to express my personal views and discuss the beginning of the breakup written in the introduction. It does not represent the main text, because you have lost the previous chapters 🙂)

The plot and characters are exactly the same as the one next door 🍅 Lu Yibei Qingqian, and the little senior sister and the vice-president are also opposite each other.

Due to personal reasons, this book will be temporarily suspended for a day or two to let me think about it. I'm sorry everyone, and I bow! If you still want to see it, don't remove it from favorites yet, because we will notify you when there are updates.

Okay, very good, buddy, the plot conflict didn't come and the author started to fight with his left and right brains. Did you hear that it was a conflict with the plot? In fact, you are okay as a first-timer. If you conflict with the plot, don't worry about it and change the back. Do you know that the front is prone to bugs? You need to re-imagine it yourself, conceive the characters, conceive the plot, conflicts, and make many changes after writing. What will we do if you run away? The top priority is to find a suitable plot point first, and change the plot after that, but don't change the previous ones, otherwise it will be difficult to maintain updates, and you are afraid of conflicting with the novels in your memory. Then you can take the time to read a few more books and learn some new routines. You can fill in some unfilled pits in a different way and create different characters. In short, you can't stop updating for no reason. More than 40 people have invested, and everyone is optimistic about you. Why don't you give us a stab in the middle?

I just love watching the little chef man's fantasies.

In other words, you are netizens in second grade?

It was even the first kiss with the heroine, so what is the significance of this breakup plot? Is the author just yy after the breakup?

At the beginning, the ex-girlfriend identified the author as a novice and did not avoid any poisonous points.

It's well written. You need to take insulin to read it. If you get red and warm while playing games, you can read two to heal yourself. The plot is smooth and doesn't look like a newcomer. It should be an external author or an old user reborn.

Has the author ever been in love? On your birthday, you will take your girlfriend to eat in Shaxian County, where the average per capita is more than 20 yuan. Can you not afford to eat a beautiful meal with an average per capita of more than 100 yuan just once a year? No matter how poor the male protagonist is, a normal person would have to break up with the male protagonist.

Why did I get banned for so many chapters

So is it my problem or your profile? Your profile gave me the impression that we are the same girl, but when I looked inside, I realized that they are not the same girl in the first chapter.

It's so beautiful😍😍😍It's too sweet

Why does the heroine write so much about the supporting actress?