A Person in a Different World Is a Cool-Hearted Entrepreneur

It's surprisingly well written, but there are too few updates. In fact, one of my main worries is that the protagonist's self-protection ability is too low. I hope it can be strengthened later. Also, as a city lord, why do I feel that I don't have any people under my command? The city defense guards, lord guards, family stewards, etc. Are not written down. It's too hands-on. I hope to get on the right track in the future, but I still need to enrich it.

The creativity is okay, but the plot rhythm is a bit average and the writing is dry. It would be better to slow down the pace a little and describe the characters more. But rushing to the rhythm is also a common problem for novices.

With so many people investing, there is only one comment🙂

The pace is too slow. There is not even an industrial chain established in the first 100 chapters. Even taking into account the preliminary work and the time-travel encounter, it is too slow.

There are several books, including this one, not like those studio articles that are all the same, somewhat interesting, at least above the grain level, as a result, one of them has not been recommended yet and has only been read by a few thousand people. This book has only a dozen reviews, and it has over 100 photos. It's all a bunch of boring studio articles, and nothing new can be seen.

Excellent work. Is this the reincarnation of an old man?

The first project turned out to be selling insurance

Is the author not updating this time? 😭 I don't understand why the traffic is so poor

The data is indeed too bad. This book is not that bad.

The work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch's Strategy Guide" visited and used the treasure to promote it. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.

The creativity is good, but the pace is a bit slow and there are many typos. It is recommended to correct the typos with AI before uploading.

Will there be updates after the Chinese New Year?😭