I Am a Divine Hunter in the Ancient Dragon World

I thought it was an invincible suppression novel, and I understood its weaknesses at first, but who knew it was a plagiarism of the original novel? What's the point of playing plot stream if you know the plot well and cheat on it? This is not the era of martial arts novels, and a novel must be enjoyable.

The writing is a mess, the plot setting is off-putting, and the pacing is poorly controlled. . . . Can't stand it

I don't even know what kind of character the author wants to create and what kind of person he wants the protagonist to be. He has started to identify the famous arresters and is familiar with the plot, but I can't understand what he has written so far. When he met a flower picker and asked him to take him to Shenshui Palace, it would be better to just destroy him. Control, a flower picker is afraid that he is a person who is not afraid of death. Later, he is asked to watch the flower picker living with other women, and even saves the flower picker. I am afraid that you can directly control the woman and tap her acupoints. How long does it take for the protagonist to achieve his goal? A few hours is enough. Wow, I am speechless at this plot design. Since this is the case, there is no need to set up a famous arrest. Seeing that the most shameful flower picker is still well protected in front of him, it is useless to use it. The protagonist's martial arts can be safely retreated. Now that he has been brought here, it is still like this. Writing martial arts Xia can't be more rigorous in the design and conception. The outline echoes the personalities of each character. The protagonist's father is also a policeman and has taught the protagonist. The protagonist also inherited his father's ambition and became a policeman. I don't know what to say when I write it. I'll leave it aside for later.

Are martial arts warriors so lonely? Chapter 20 is less than 20 chapters and it's recommended by category?

Is there any difference between what you wrote and the original work? It's nothing more than forcing a protagonist to follow the plot.

It vividly portrays a standard Gulong Jianghu NPC in which a 21st century young man is systematically assimilated into a brain-sick NPC in the Gulong worldview wearing the skin of a god hunter.

I feel like the characters in it are all crazy. Things that can obviously be solved by martial arts are resorting to intrigues, but in the end, they still have to rely on martial arts to solve the problem 🙂

Some of them seem to have been written by AI, and some of them seem to have been modified by people. Nowadays, technology is advanced, but there are also many opportunistic people.

With all kinds of awkwardness and 10,000 taels of silver at hand, has communism been realized in Gulong's world?

The protagonist's martial arts skills are several times better than the villain's, and he can actually make the villain run away.

. Stop doing this business. Not suitable

He is so powerful in martial arts that he can't kill him directly. He forced the plot to investigate the case. I was really speechless and slipped away.

There is no distinction between grudges and grudges, the plot is always watery, and the cheating is not active.

After reading Chapter 22, I felt that the writing was too confusing and the protagonist had no distinctive features. They have traveled through time, and they know the plot, but they don't show their bravery and diligence, nor do they show their wisdom. On the contrary, it seems like a bystander, especially when describing the hostile forces as being brainless. This is ancient times. Even in modern times, doesn't it take time to inform people to assemble? Even if they each have a homing pigeon, how can they still fly a plane? Wherever the protagonist goes, the enemy will be there, right? According to your plot schedule, Qiu Lingsu has already been given the wish of the White Jade Demon. When it is the protagonist's turn to reach the cliff, he can still hear the White Jade Demon talking nonsense. It feels like the enemies are all gods and the protagonist is like a pig.

The more I write, the more boring it becomes. The protagonist has no characteristics and is always being led around.

Since Gu Long Zongwu has many unrelated people or things intersecting, the plot should change or change drastically, which would be interesting. As a result, the author was confused by saying that he was active in different regions. After watching the original novel or watching the TV show, I feel that the plot has an extra protagonist. If you haven't seen it, it would have been a foggy detective story. As a result, the protagonist took the initiative to spoil the book. His spoiler was not for the characters in the book, but for the readers through the protagonist's casual thoughts 😐.

The story is still readable, but the writing is too ordinary.

The work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch's Strategy Guide" visited and used the treasure to promote it. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.

I hope you can teach me a lot

It seems that the plot characters in Gu Long's novels all have serious illnesses. The more mentally abnormal they are, the higher their martial arts skills are, which makes them difficult to appreciate.