There's Something Wrong with My Dates

What kind of old antique has been resurrected from the grave? I told you that this is what you eat, why are you still running away?

After reading more than forty chapters, the writing is okay, but there are a lot of flaws in the details. The biggest problem is that the pace of the story is too slow. It is still the Riddler after more than forty chapters. I still don't know the reason why the female protagonist approaches the male protagonist, and the background setting is still hidden. This is no longer more than ten years ago, and readers really don't have that much patience. Moreover, the golden finger of the protagonist could have been a good point to write a story around, but the subsequent plot was deliberately weakened and there was no point of interest. There was also a very blunt workplace pretense and slap in the face that was too awkward. There was no need to deliberately write it. It lacked a sense of expectation and a strong main line. In the final analysis, the pace was too slow, and it was still written in the same way as more than ten years ago. Come on, show your original strength and let Qidian see how powerful our 17-year-old Lao Deng is.

No wonder it's so popular. Many of the articles are illogical. How dare a small organization dare to take action against employees of a national security organization? So where is the credibility of this country? What is the meaning of existence? It feels like several people are writing it. Some plots are more rigorous, and some plots are perfunctory by the hired writers. They are still the same old-fashioned pretentious and slap-in-the-face writers. Many pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots that do not create a sense of satisfaction are completely unnecessary, but will make readers feel tired and tired.

No, are you so watery? !

The book Fox Fairy Wife hurt me. I have read so many novels that I have forgotten the plot. The main character from Fox Fairy Wife, I Still Remember Them, can't come back. He can only look at those confidante, but he can't come back.

I actually watched The Fox Fairy's Wife in junior high school, and even after I finished watching it, I actually saw the real person at the starting point 😰

The first step in life is an online novel, Beautiful Teacher, and it was even made into an online drama. I always thought that the wealth accumulated by authors like Aries has been spent enough. Every family has its own scriptures that are difficult to recite. Come on Aries, maybe you have to find your own path again.

I went, I was about to leave, and took a look at "Aries in the Dark Night", did it look good?

I started reading it from my beautiful teacher, and Uncle Yang was one of the inspirations for me to start reading novels. At first I watched all the pirated copies, now I have to pay for them.

It reminds me of it, what a wonderful memory, the plot is still fresh in my mind, one person with ten step breasts, sister with S-level superpowers, fox fairy wife, flat-chested senior sister, junior classmate Wang Lele or Liu Lele, rich lady, Ma family brothers and sisters, a girl who cannot speak, a girl who travels through time and space for thousands of years, time The countercurrent was left thousands of years ago, and there are also the teachers mentioned in the beginning, various spirits, and the summoned little loli, the royal sister, and the classic milk stick breakfast, Japanese or Korean young ladies and so on There are also many female protagonists. I feel that the writing is very good. I read the harem novel in my childhood.

Author, I have grown up, and I will scold you if your crotch is rotten at the tragic ending.

What kind of black-hearted capital factory is this official organization? As long as you can't do it, you will do it to death. It's a bit depressing. I guess the male protagonist will have a fight with this investigation bureau in the future. If not, punish me as a legal loli with white silk stockings like Fang Shuyao 😭😭😭😭

No, ancient times have already fallen into this state?

Damn it, I saw the current author resurrected in junior high school. Qin Beast, who has been with me for many years, 61, said nothing and looked forward to it

In the first grade of elementary school, the first time I read an online article was the author's "My Fox Fairy Wife". It took me more than a year to read it, but it ended with a bad ending. I was so angry at the time. 12 Years later, I searched for it today, and I didn't expect to come to Qidian. For the sake of sentiment, I still cast a few monthly votes to support it.

Just like the name of the protagonist Qin Chao, the author was identified as an unearthed cultural relic

As title

Damn it, why did you come to the starting point! ! !

I thought you were retired. When I was in junior high school, my favorite book was The Fox Fairy's Wife written by you. It's really wonderful.

I read your book when I was in high school, now it's fifteen or sixteen years ago

I am a college student. I listened to Beautiful Teacher in junior high school and then to Fox Fairy Wife in high school. Yes, I listened to books. The broadcast of Lie Yan is very good. I regret that I did not live for two more years. It would be more interesting. Lao Yang's books have always been very enjoyable and have a very relaxing feeling. I heard that Laoyang has been studying. I am looking forward to it. Laoyang can rise up and write new things while retaining the previous feeling. The key is to make yourself happy when writing. We read and enjoy. When I make money, I will cheer for Laoyang 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

No, bro, why did you come to the starting point? This is really a childhood author

Me? Aries? The memories of the dead began to attack me again. The trilogy is still fresh in my mind. Did Liu Yi come out of the tower back then? Ha ha ha ha

No? Dude? Memories of the dead started attacking me

After taking a look at the ending, I guess the girl was missed. There was Su Yaqi who was having an affair earlier and I didn't see the ending. If you think it's a surprise, you can quit.

Please support me by making a supplementary vote.

Lonely old sheep, come on👏My book friends at least make you feel that you are not alone. Even if you order the new book, it will be available soon. It will be great after you finish it!

It's true, the first novel I read was Yours, Big Brother 😢😢

I really like this book, and I hope the author can update it more so it doesn't end badly! 🤓

It's over, leaving one last footprint.