Director 2008: Starting with the Editing Room

I just finished reading this book from the beginning, and I have some thoughts. This book has obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the writing style is excellent and it doesn't look like a drama, which already defeats half of the novice writers of entertainment articles. Compared with the monotonous narratives on the market today about big things and small things that happen over time, at least the author really understands the professional knowledge of the industry of editing and even directing and actors. Of course, there are many shortcomings. Personally, I feel that the author rarely or has not read current entertainment novels for a long time. First of all, the pacing is not very good. Generally, readers who read entertainment articles prefer a faster pace. Generally, a movie will be completed within thirty chapters and has even sold out at the box office. The author's pace is a bit too slow in this regard. It took him only 100 chapters to complete a short film and then hold a school award ceremony. This is a bit strange... It is a bit difficult to accept an award for a work that is similar to a final assignment. Moreover, it is a bit too delayed to complete the shooting of two short films after catching up with the latest chapter. Secondly, most readers who read entertainment articles pursue the book for a sense of immersion. When the future stars and works in the article are mentioned, they look confused and don't know anything, which really makes people lack a sense of immersion. If you really want to be completely imaginative, you need to use more sophisticated writing, such as deepening the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters so that readers can have a deeper understanding of the charm of the author's characters. For example, the character descriptions in the article are too scattered. For example, the protagonist's fat friend and Yundu, who doesn't even know if he is the heroine, are a little too under-described and a bit facial. , The only relatively successful description of the supporting character is (possibly) the chapter in which the heroine's best friend questions the protagonist as a scumbag, which successfully aroused my emotions and made me resent the role of the heroine's best friend. The author needs to work harder on this point, please come on. Most of the currently successful Chinese entertainment articles or entertainment articles have abandoned scenes of pretending to slap people in the face. This aspect needs to be greatly downplayed by the author. After watching it, I was deeply impressed that about 30 chapters have already described about five or six plots of pretending to slap people in the face or being inexplicably shocked. In addition, the most unacceptable poisonous point for me is that the ring that recognizes people and has a marrow-cleansing and quenching body similar to a fairy novel is a bit too dramatic, and the functions and roles of the subsequent rings are a bit too much. The ring that recognizes people, changes in size, materializes, and is used as a weapon is a bit too fantasy. In the end, I feel that the focus of this book is wrong. There are too many descriptions of professional knowledge in the article, which makes the novel a bit unbalanced. Of course, some readers may like to read such professional novels, so they need to balance this aspect. The rest are some of my personal suggestions. If you have time, the author can take a look at the current entertainment articles and understand the rhythm of the current mainstream and successful entertainment articles. After setting the outline clearly, the protagonist in the article is obviously a full-level account and does not need any other assistance. The golden finger can be appropriately downplayed later. Nowadays, there are very few novels with golden fingers from Rebirth Entertainment. In other words, even if there are golden fingers at the beginning, the description will be downplayed or not described at all in the middle and later stages. After all, novels need to distinguish priorities. In this regard, I suggest you read some of Sister Baoer's earlier novels. Overall, this novel is a well-written work by the author. It is a good novel that is uniquely described from the perspective of an editor and director. Any successful author makes progress little by little. I wish the author more efforts in the future and strive to become a god as soon as possible😁😁😁

I don't know since when, every rebirth article must have a golden finger, and this book is no exception. But unlike ordinary entertainment protagonists whose gold fingers usually come with a built-in upgrade system, since the protagonist's skills before rebirth in this book are close to the top, the first gold finger assigned to the protagonist in the book is actually a ring, and it is a ring with self-exploration functions. Let's take a look at the functions of this ring. 1. The name of this ring is the Ring of Knowing People, so its biggest function is to provide the protagonist with everyone's life history. Needless to say, this function is still necessary because the protagonist has a previous life. The biggest shortcoming is that you don't know people well. With this feature, you will never be cheated again in your life. 2. This ring can be as big or small as you like. At the current peak, it almost broke the ceiling of the dormitory. When I saw this, I observed half a second of silence for the ceiling and one minute of silence for the classmates upstairs. When it was the smallest, it turned into a ring and put it on the protagonist's hand. The biggest use of this function at present is to facilitate trapping people, which is needed when identifying people and attacking. 3. This ring can help the owner reborn and has a beauty function. It's just that the process is more painful and a little bloody. Of course, in an era where appearance is justice, this pain is still bearable. However, there are many bugs in the book when describing this function. First of all, after the protagonist was reborn, the floor tiles in the dormitory were stained red, and he walked away without taking care of it. He was not afraid of being discovered. What's even more strange is that no one noticed. Secondly. After being reborn, the protagonist's appearance became almost unrecognizable, but none of his classmates or friends around him expressed surprise, which seemed unreasonable. 4. This ring can actually be used as a weapon. The current attack method is to encircle any part of the human body and then tighten it to increase damage. For example, roping the neck can suffocate people, roping the wrist can cause fractures, etc. Alas, it's all because the entertainment industry is too deep. Boys also need to protect themselves, which forced the author to assign such a high force value to the protagonist. But it's a bit outrageous for him to trap a person and then make him disappear. This hole has not been filled yet. I hope the author can explain it more reasonably. Okay, these are the functions of the Person-Knowing Ring that I have discovered so far. If there are other functions, readers are welcome to add them below.

It was named after an entertainment novel, but the editor didn't talk about movies, there was no movie, and he didn't talk about the editing methods of a movie from the inside out. Instead, he used various dramatic conflicts and used "editing" as a means of competition. It reminded me of that TV series about street dancing and fighting, "Don't Fight Anymore."

In rebirth domestic entertainment, most dreams are to make a lot of money and do a big business. The male protagonist of this book said at the beginning that he wanted to make his own stuff. This style suddenly became full, aiming at self-worth, jumping from Maslow's physiological needs, respect needs, to the most advanced "self-realization". It is a pity that the article introduces the huge black box system of Lin Nan in the dream as a cheat. Why do I say it's a pity? Because the article has a very high intention, which makes me feel that it is not conventional. The essence of rebirth writing is to resonate with the readers' deep regrets in the past, and to make up for the regrets on behalf of the readers in the world of the book. Therefore, the huge bug of rebirth is enough to have a chance to reverse the regret. The system's cheats, which constantly provide powerful props such as rings and glasses, will weaken the reader's sense of immersion and make them feel that they may not be able to possess these powerful weapons even if they are reborn. But in the dream, Lin Nan is the author's main line. It is impossible to remove it. The only option is to introduce conspiracy settings and break with the system, or to follow the Shuangwen route to speed up Lin Nan's rise. The author's promotion of scenes and stories in the article is very good. I look forward to more good articles from you.

The plot is so cliche! The protagonist wants to film a work! I found a girl I had "peeped" at twice before (what a coincidence). The girl's best friend thinks that this director is also lying to girls, and it is also a lie to say that he used old-fashioned machines to shoot! Later I saw the protagonist with another girl (the protagonist was editing to help others make money)! This best friend hit him with her schoolbag (this kind of thing should be beaten back directly, at most it's just a blow, otherwise the sentence will be more severe if you encounter a bad guy, beating him back is cost-effective)! The protagonist explained again and told her why he used an old-fashioned machine to shoot! That's all I've seen for now. So why don't this girl and her best friend go to the place where they borrow the equipment and ask the teacher? Go to their class and find out! Is it harder? Didn't you open your mouth?

You can read the first three chapters, but in the end it's all about pretending to be a slap in the face, applying for equipment, pretending to be a slap in the face, making a short film, asking actors, the actors question, pretending to be a slap in the face, going to make movies for others to make money, then pretending to be a slap in the face, going to Internet cafes, pretending to be a slap in the face, I met a new female classmate, and then the actresses I worked with were all questioning me. The actress classmates were all questioning me, as if the male protagonist was a heinous person, and one of his classmates from the fucking school was just looking for you to act in a short film. I haven't watched it since. Either I'm pretending to be B or I'm on the way to pretending to be B. The key is to pretend I don't understand. The onlookers either questioned the protagonist's ability or character, and then there were various proofs from the protagonist. The protagonist really has no B character at all.

The first three chapters are pretty good. The scenes and techniques are all written out, and the characters are also unfolding. At first, I thought it was a bit nonsensical when I saw overhead entertainment. Isn't this a lack of sense of immersion? But if you think about it carefully, it doesn't hurt to be a beginner in entertainment industry writing. People who have no idea about the real entertainment industry can read it and get a feel for the author's original entertainment industry and works. At a glance, you can tell that the author has put a lot of thought into these works. It is obvious whether he is careful or not. Sometimes I regret that some works cannot be shown in reality, and I can only imagine these scenes in my mind. And it can be seen that the author's outline is very complete. The plot from beginning to end, as well as the foreshadowing should have been thought out from the beginning. It is quite complete, but there seems to be a problem with the detailed distribution. Some places are too detailed and look like a running account, and some places are too fast and are gone in one stroke. But does the author want to write too many things? It should have been a cool article. With the protagonist's super editing skills, he passed five levels and defeated six generals. From winning awards in school to showing off his skills as a blockbuster director after graduation, he won numerous awards and later influenced an industry. It's enough to become a generational legend. Just let everyone be happy if you and I are happy. Although those powers, artifacts, puzzles, and dreams can enrich the content, they will inevitably feel like a déjà vu. After reading the article, there are daily campus life, supernatural powers, decryption, and sharing of editing knowledge. Recently, there is also daily life on the set. It is both necessary and difficult to write well. I don't see what the author wants to write most. The campus fight at the beginning is a bit too long, and the characters are not particularly impressive. They are all tools of the plot... Oh no, there is one thing that impressed me deeply. The scenes where Wang Xiaoling appeared in chapters 18, 19, and 20 were so poisonous that he almost died from the poison. It was so disconnected! There's something wrong with the portrayal of this female supporting role, what's going on? She could be a sun-kissed best friend who makes the heroine feel extremely safe, but she ended up being like this? Or is this actually a villain? It's understandable to worry about the heroine, she can have a strong personality, but she can't be like a lunatic, hitting people indiscriminately? Is the male protagonist still smiling helplessly to disgust the readers? I read the latest chapter and I feel the same. The emotions of the supporting characters are too repetitive and one-sided. They are angry and humiliated at one time and happy and happy at the other. It is a bit uncomfortable to read. It should be that the conflict and emotional interaction are not very well written, but it looks pretty good when I am single-playing through various works on a daily basis. So in fact, this is not Huayuwen, nor is it a simple rebirth. Let's not call it Director 2008. Let's just call me a great director who traveled to another world. With a fantasy worldview and various racial conflicts, it will definitely be more interesting than it is now, and superpowers and artifacts will appear very harmonious. Compared with the current parallel time and space, most of them are the same but some are different, slightly the same, which is better... Although I realized later that this is also one of the foreshadowings... Then, some classics that are now well-known in the world can be photographed with alien faces, giving a little shock to the other world. Wouldn't it be wonderful? Generally speaking, you can read it when passing the time. The island battle royale and desert island survival mentioned in the preface are not there yet. I am looking forward to it. Come on, author.

Personally, I feel that it is very difficult to write well about entertainment. There are too many people writing about this subject, it takes a long time, and the routines are relatively fixed. The structure of the rest of the articles is very different. In terms of more details, writing about entertainment well will test the author's writing skills. He must handle the relationship between the characters and the interesting settings between the works, write appropriately, be coherent and not abrupt, and it is best to have some whimsical jokes to attract readers' interest and continue to read. I feel like the author didn't handle the plot very well. The transitions between plots were a little awkward, and there were few interesting points and they were not very coherent.

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