Full-Time Hunter: Starting Contract Xiaojie Goes to Pirates

There are two problems. The first is that the protagonist and his group have done nothing. It is impossible for others to offer a bounty to him just because he said he is a pirate. The second thing is that the plot shouldn't be like this when he fights with Sanji, Luffy and the others. At that time, Nami should have already sailed away. Luffy and the others had a fight with Creek and the others. I simply don't have the energy to continue fighting.

I read five chapters and read them OOC three times, once with Gon, once with Killua, and once with Zoro. The author's writing is good, but he really needs to revamp the original settings. First of all, Gon does not judge people by their appearance, nor does he judge people by their profession. What's more, the original work can also see that Gon has extraordinary perception. Even if his personality is not mentioned, relying on his perception, because he is a pirate, there is basically no possibility of fighting with Luffy. Secondly, no one in the Da Di Ke family has revealed the existence of qi to Killua, and before the emergence of the ability of Kulu, the Hunter World did not have a setting to calculate qi in hundreds, thousands, ten thousand or millions. Some only had two settings: manifested qi and potential qi, and these two settings did not have specific numerical calculations. Thirdly, Zoro's original novel basically doesn't have the habit of sneak-attacking the enemy from behind. What's more, Luffy and Gon are competing openly, and Gon doesn't look like he's going to kill him, so Zoro has no reason to sneak-attack Gon. A very good subject matter and the author's writing style is also good. Author, what you need to do now is to go back and read all of Hunters and Pirates, and then write down the settings and personalities of the key characters. The second setting is not impossible, but the second setting is to supplement the unreasonable or unwritten aspects of the original work. The most feared thing in fan fiction is OOC. Come on, the subject matter is quite good. There have been very few people writing about this subject in recent years. This is an opportunity.

Personally, I suggest adding a time proportional mechanism. Due to the old thief's personal reasons, the plot of the hunter is actually very short after removing the moisture. Now that the time of the hunter world and the pirate world flows synchronously, the hunter as the main world can write less and less plots. In the future, you can only create original ones, and originality represents a great risk. Very few people can create original hunter plots without collapse. Therefore, it is recommended that the author develop a time proportional mechanism to delay the appearance of the original plot of the hunter and write more about other worlds.

It's a pretty bad start, as if it was skipped directly. The plot of dozens or hundreds of chapters has a very poor sense of immersion, and the protagonist is written like a tool. The sense of immersion is further worsened. The protagonist is not so much the protagonist, but more of a supporting role. The developed telekinesis ability is also incomprehensible. It was developed purely to connect the two worlds. However, the combat effectiveness is extremely poor and he can't perform cool operations, so he can only be a tool. It's like reading a novel with a supporting character as the main protagonist. The main characters are Gon and Killua.

His combat power collapsed very quickly. Why did Xiaojie learn to use weapons so quickly?

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Shennong, who has been reading for more than 12 years, can conclude that this novel is a rare fairy grass. If the plot continues to be stable, it can become a masterpiece.

Traveling through time multiple times is not a good look. It shows that the protagonist is a bit stupid, but he can still change it now

It's very interesting. The author writes well, but it's still a bit rough in some places. Please use more caution and don't use the stream of consciousness writing method.

I haven't read it yet. I personally don't think the introduction is very good. It's no longer popular to ask questions to catch readers these days. [Thinking] What's more, your hook is still a straight hook. Why don't you consider changing it?

I still don't know what the main character's fruit is. I don't want it to be superhuman. The strongest choice is fantasy beast > nature > superman.

The poisonous point at the beginning is that the ability is exposed to the hunter Yungu. You said that the ability is stronger in the secret realm than in another world.

I think it's good-looking. Why don't so many people like this article?

To be honest, if a pig like you doesn't eat a Phantom Beast Fruit, then awaken the three-color Haki, and banish those who are highly talented in the Hunter World to the Pirate World, it will be easy to die, but once you have the opportunity to eat the Devil Fruit and awaken the Three-color Haki, it will be a bit like a tiger.

As we all know, the Hunter Association banned exploration of the Dark Continent before Nitro's death. In Chapter 4, Yun Gu already knew that the protagonist could go to another world. Aren't you afraid that V5 and the Hunter Association would arrest you? Don't tell me that Yungu will keep secrets. In their eyes, your exploration of another world is as scary as the ant king's ability to learn telekinesis.

The protagonist has the ability to kill the queen ant, why did he choose to be exiled?

Across generations? Just like the Hunter World has flying dragons so it can't fly a plane, the Pirate World with space-based weapons will not be able to build the cross-era ship you call it. A swordsman can cut iron, so how powerful can your advanced ship be!

It's too fast, now Chapter 49, the plot of Hunter World is almost over, and the Dark Continent will follow. What you are writing is not a novel anymore, it is an outline. In recent chapters, you have directly given the plot of Hunter World. Do you want to focus the plot on the pirates and Naruto?

Dear author, when will the update be released?

Seeing the expulsion of the queen ants, something feels wrong! I always feel that the protagonist is a bitch (egoistic). Do you treat One Piece World as a trash can? Everything goes over there! It is not natural for Kurapika to kill the brigade in revenge! Banish this guy! To put it bluntly, it is just coveting 1% to 10% of experience! Extreme egoist!

I feel that the telekinesis ability is very strong. The death contract is not as good as the normal contract. The death contract requires you to kill the other party, but you can get 1% to 10%. This is completely high risk and low return. The normal contract is to share the cultivation results, which is low risk and high reward. Finally, it is said to be the cultivation results in that world. This is not the case. There are detailed explanations, and there are many aspects of training, such as the general aspect: physical skills, swordsmanship, shooting, etc., Such as the pirate aspect: domineering, devil fruit, etc., Such as the hunter aspect: telekinesis, telekinesis ability, etc. There is no detailed explanation. If devil fruit and telekinesis ability are included, then the protagonist is the ultimate intention of a multi-fruit ability user and a disguised version of a thief.

Regarding Zoro's poisonous point, Zoro will never take the initiative to help Luffy fight. At most, Zoro will delay me for three minutes, but look at who he hit when he said this.

It felt like there was a lot less in the beginning. Just because the opening is not long-winded doesn't mean that we don't have to explain the reasons clearly.

Didn't the Queen Ant exile to the pirate world earlier? Why does another ant queen appear in the latest chapter? Did the author forget?

Gon from the Sky Arena Chapter didn't even learn the full power of Nian, so any combatant from the brigade could easily defeat him. At this time, Luffy was already able to defeat masters such as Crowe, Crick, and Dragons head-on, and he had explosive performance when fighting against Dragons. How can Gon defeat Luffy at this stage? Just relying on Xiaojie's just beginning Nian ability? Is this reasonable?

A newborn Catwoman can kill Garp, but it's impossible for the other four emperors and generals to cooperate fully to kill the king and the three guards? Separating means giving up a life, and Im can't appear. The protagonist can only cheat and come back to kill the king in the six paths of Naruto, and his combat power collapses.

Sure enough, it collapsed. The author actually cut it.

The writing is okay, but the span is too big. I originally thought that the protagonist group was slowly getting stronger, but suddenly it became a bunch of people traveling invincibly. It's not interesting.

I have thought about writing a novel about telekinesis and domineering.

I haven't read it yet and read the comments. They say that the Ant King is too strong and is afraid of destroying the world of pirates. Which version of One Piece is it, the theatrical version, the manga version or the anime version? Theatrical version has a population of 300 trillion, and its combat power is normal The comic version of the Golden Lion has a cutting range of more than a thousand nautical miles. Each island of the founding of the country is as big as a continent, and crushing the island is breaking the continent The anime version of the island is an ordinary island, and the most intuitive expression of the general is the Aokiji's frozen sea. It can be said that the combat effectiveness is not strong. The comic version of Akainu can punch a Rocks, and can penetrate the entire world by himself, which is more destructive than ancient weapons. The anime Pluto can destroy an island with one shot. It is not certain whether he can destroy an island as big as Japan The manga Pluto can destroy a continent with one shot In the comic version of One Piece, even the Dark Continent cannot come over, and any emperor can destroy the entire continent. The anime version is really possible to destroy it.