A Journey to the Heavens Starting from a Pirate

He is not smart, has poor physical skills, and even started life and death COP 9, selected by a 6-year-old child

What I saw was your rewrite. First of all, how did the protagonist come to the world of pirates, and why did he have to get the Gate Fruit? Why does the protagonist know that killing Bruno can get the Gate Fruit? When a person with abilities dies, the fruit will be randomly reborn on a certain fruit in the sea. Unless you have special means like Blackbeard's Dark Fruit, you killed Bruno and the fruit appeared out of thin air. Why? Author, you don't explain anything. You don't explain the setting of the protagonist clearly. What you write is messy. Also, the pirates you describe don't look like pirates. To put it bluntly, pirates don't have that high IQ. My evaluation is to switch accounts and try again.

From being a pirate to being a CP, it can be said that you had no choice but to live in hardship. However, when you went to Hokage, you had already gained a certain level of strength and had many good choices. However, you took the initiative to join the cesspit of the Root Organization and continued to live like a tool. After reading dozens of chapters, it didn't feel any better at all. If you don't read a book like yours, who will?

There are too many settings that are inconsistent with the world, and the espionage organizations in the world of Pirates and Naruto are raised too high. A single person can see the fluctuations in space, and is the research in Naruto and Pirates so detailed?

There are more than ten chapters and there is not much to read. Although it is not the same as the same thing, it is not much better.

You can't even eat well and you're still training yourself. You don't have any common sense. It's highly toxic.

In the extraordinary world, it is impossible for ordinary people to outplay the talents. If you don't have talent, or if you have average talent, you can't compare to someone else's three days of hard work even if you practice for a lifetime. . . . This is the cruelty of the extraordinary world. You can't experience it in the ordinary world, but you just haven't encountered it. The top scorer in the college entrance examination, who you think is a genius, may not be able to compare to a real genius who spends a lifetime of research just playing tricks in a week. Qian Xuesen is such a talented person. You can check it out and see it. You are too naive

To be honest, you are unlucky in the world of pirates because it is your first time traveling and you have no experience. You have some strength and you can still get caught by running to Hokage. No one likes to read pornographic stories these days

A door fruit can lead to the background of a dimensional war, and the world government cannot go to heaven.

The Pirates chapter is so baffling, why does the protagonist want the Gate Fruit? How did he know this could travel through time? Write down the reasons anyway, and don't think that readers will understand Xiao Jiujiu if you don't write them. Moreover, this chapter is long and boring, and not many people are willing to take on the role of the sufferer, especially when the story progression is confusing.

A good work does need a plot as an introduction, but if the beginning is too long and ugly, who will read the rest of the story? If you eat noodles and eat rat heads, will you still eat the next noodles?

There is a clown character in the original work, and the author writes that he wants to conquer all worlds! Awesome

The key is that he has no talent or ability. The author prides himself on his intelligence and his portrayal of human nature, and is pleased with himself. . . .

Opening the Door Fruit consumes a lot of physical energy. Bruno is not weak in CP9. His strength is ranked fourth in CP9 and is weaker than the three monsters that eat animal fruits. He opened the door with air a few times and was exhausted. If he wanted to open the Eight Doors Escape or the Door to Another Dimension, he would probably die of exhaustion before the door could be opened.

Give it up, give it up, it was originally based on your ability to develop your ability after eating the fruit later. This fruit has been developed by the clown chief. There is really no need for you to write this follow-up.

Use mindless hot-blooded comics as the background to write conspiracies and conspiracies? If you look at the data in this book, will you know if there is a future? Except those who were deceived by the title of the book, who would click in under normal circumstances?

What's the point of the dozen or so foreshadowings you did? If others can't hold on, you'll be behind

The description is too hard. I want to describe the cruel struggle between the inner conscience and survival power of a low-class person with high IQ. The description is too hard. It is a bit inconsistent.

Inexplicable🙂

This is my first time writing a novel. When I saw everyone's criticism in the comment section, I humbly accepted it. I admit that the first copy of One Piece was not that good. After reading everyone's comments, I accepted them all. The good news is that the author has gone through a lot of mental struggles, physical and will training, and I have updated all the plots of One Piece. I personally think it is much better than what I wrote before. I apologize to everyone again. I know that being a newcomer is not the reason for bad writing, but I also hope that everyone will be a little more tolerant. If any book friends who have left can read these words, I hope that everyone can change their minds and come back to read the plot. At least you have a comparison to see if the newly written One Piece plot is still unpalatable, and it also gives me a chance to learn. The original One Piece plot, chapters 1-8, has been partially modified in Chapter 5, adding some background introduction and settings of the World Government. The rest, starting from Chapter 9 to Chapter 46, have all been rewritten. It should have a more fan-like feel, rather than being entirely original. Finally, I would like to apologize to everyone and bow! Ps: I would be very grateful if any book friends come back! !

Why does the protagonist have to be the fruit of the door? It's not explained.

Write quickly, I will skip Xiangyang first. It feels to me like it's a forced whitewash

The Naruto arc seems much better and the author has improved, but the overall plot is still too depressing and hard to like.

The weather has obviously gotten colder recently. Book friends, please put on extra clothes to avoid catching a cold. Turn on the air conditioner when it's time to turn it on at night, don't save on electricity bills, it's not worth it if you catch a cold. I wish you all good health!

When I saw the Divine Condor series, I felt something was wrong. The protagonist was so awesome but he didn't go back to show off. He was so strong in vain. After suffering so much in the early stage, just forget it? The protagonist is so generous.

Devil Fruit, up to 10,000! The World Government doesn't have 2,000 people, it mainly relies on six types and weapon packs, and the pirates can't afford 7,000 people to have it! The navy also has a maximum of one thousand people! The same goes for the Navy! Normally, he would almost kill Devil Fruit owners at will! Few can resist! Pirates are the most numerous and their power is chaotic, and demon owners are the most numerous and chaotic! There are many swordsmen and the like, it's messy! Not many people in the New World have the complete six styles! The Navy is mass-produced and stable! The pirates can't be pulled out, there are tens of thousands of them who have the complete six styles, they can't learn them, and they have no chance to learn them!

What's going on with Qidian's ecology now? I've read a lot of books and the comments are mostly negative. Some of the books I read are okay.

Okay, I've been asked to say a few words, but it's very unfair for a newcomer to write like this, so do your best.

The writing style is very good, but I thought it was the main line of relying on the world to improve the pirate CP system step by step. I didn't expect that pirates are just the beginning, but it's cool that a newcomer can write like this.

This subject matter is relatively rare for me. I look forward to the follow-up. So far, it is very good.