The Abyss of Heaven, I Really Am Not a Prophet

The front is fine. Even for no reason. The enemy was forced down, and there was no big problem in the first copy. After you returned to reality, your sister was taken in by the higher-ups. Send out an errand boy. Dare you talk to the protagonist like this. If his sister becomes a high-level executive, won't she have to take care of him in the future? It's pushed to advance the plot, and it's easy to kill the protagonist. He looks down on the protagonist because he is an employee of the company. That girl later became a senior executive in the company. As an employee, doesn't he think about whether he will be killed?

After reading a few chapters, I practiced Tathagata Divine Palm, strengthened it into Yang Yan, and then practiced sword practice. The burst is strengthened into continuous burns. Didn't you understand that it was strengthened? You can just strengthen the Modern Tathagata Palm into the Hong Kong Comic Tathagata Palm!

The settings are explained too much, and the protagonist is less like a human being and more like a programmed robot with no characteristics of his own.

In fact, the writing was okay, but Chapter 41 poisoned me to death. Returning to reality, the younger sister has been kidnapped for no apparent reason and has joined the organization. The protagonist is bullied by an employee sent to arrange for relatives. The employee even plans to kill someone to seize the treasure. The protagonist also wants to run away, pretending to agree, and then plans a counterattack in the copy. The key point is here, the poison is here. The protagonist challenges the employees, but cannot beat them and is choked. However, the protagonist still holds the pearl of wisdom. At this time, time pauses to explain his plan to the employees, and he does not feel that he will die at all. As for the employees, hey, they didn't kill the protagonist, they grabbed the protagonist's neck without making a move, listened to the protagonist's explanation, and confronted him seriously with a look of disbelief. Ma De pointed to the seal.

Yi Tathagata Divine Palm was upgraded to Yang Yan, and the name and pattern were lowered Two high-level martial arts were broken down, and he turned around to learn a low-level sword technique.

It comes from "Abyss of All Heavens: XXXX"

The introduction has a formulaic feel

Can the protagonist be upgraded instead of writing about your retarded passerby villain?

More than 50 chapters and 30 chapters are devoted to passerby villains. If you are not the author, have you figured out what you are writing? It is an infinite flow, not an urban flow. Don't say that I don't speak well and I will definitely be disappointed if I write like this later.

Brain: It's shit💩 Eyes👀: Let me see how big it is💩

It's a bit like this book, you will be harmed by games in your life.

It's the type where the dungeon world resets, which is not my cup of tea. I still like to continue the world line and create a chain reaction, so that the writing method is not fixed.

There is insufficient tension, insufficient psychological thinking, and the conflict cannot be described in a chapter with quick thinking.

Love to watch, looks so platinum!