Peninsula 2013, They Rely Heavily on Me

I am not a person who writes seriously about Korean entertainment. I am the only son of a chaebol, a native, and I work as a gamer to work as an agent. I fell in love with 17-year-old Xiujing in 11 years and then broke up. He said Introduction to Architecture is a TV series. Pani is called Sikaoni in daily life... The settings and poisonous points, tsk tsk.

Chapter 5 Are you serious? Goodbye

Park Ji-yeon

Can the author add Hyomin and Eunjung? 😭😭There is no other way. Since reality cannot capture it, then novels can capture it.

Cat Queen

Although everyone is Meng Nan, you are going too far_(:з∠)_

Bae Joo Hyun

Bae Suzy

Little Deer

Sapphire Blue

There are no big problems, but many small ones. For example, there are posts about title issues, film and television work issues, etc. There is also a huge change in the character of the male protagonist in the early and later stages. If you look at the description of the male protagonist's character in the first five chapters, in my opinion, the male protagonist's character at this time is a bit out of touch. If you look at the character description of the male protagonist after Chapter 70, it is completely different from the first 5 chapters. He matured and became an elite all of a sudden... This transition is too fast. There is basically no description of the character change in the middle, it just became like this all of a sudden. These are the minor issues I'm talking about, they basically have little impact, they're just a bit out of the ordinary. There is also a problem with the smoothness of the writing. I like that you focused on Suzy and didn't write a cookie-cutter character. This is good, it has a novel angle and a sense of freshness The plot progression is also good. In summary, it's still the same sentence, there are no big problems, but there are many small problems. I hope the author can address those minor issues, and the plot rhythm and character design won't be a big problem.

YoonA

WTF The chaebol mother comes to the kitchen to cook for you. I'm so touched.

Bae Joo Hyun

Is there any Zhou Ziyu's stinky dog ​​Ming Jingnan who can reply? Please accept it! Cultivate and develop first. Anyway, I've written it all. Reply to my brother Favorite