Age of Eclipse: Journey to the Flame
黯蚀纪元：薪火之旅
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 441k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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15Recommends
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188Chapters
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The writing is good, I hope you can sign the contract soon!
After a brief look, we also learned from each other. I think the biggest reason why I didn't sign the contract is that the first three chapters didn't create a sense of expectation. There is neither the novelty of exploring a fantasy world nor a sense of crisis, and there are also some redundancies in some places. For example, removing the last paragraph of this screenshot seems to have no impact on the plot. Of course, this may just be my humble opinion
It's already 180,000 words, and the writing is very good. It's not easy on the creative journey. Even if it's not signed and approved, we still have to finish the book, sum up and accumulate experience, and look at the writing methods in today's market.
Happy National Day. May you enjoy the scenery, gain relaxation, and always be surrounded by happiness during this wonderful holiday!
Will anyone really watch it?(´••`)