Time Traveling at the Same Time: All by Myself

The first twenty chapters feel pretty good right at the beginning. In chapter twenty-two, you write about the next world as if you were exchanging books, and you have already entered space. The dragon clan in front was a bit watery and could tolerate it, but they immediately switched to mixed martial arts. The most important foreshadowing is the shared space, the communication between the protagonists in each world and the gains for newcomers. I can't even mention it, right? There was no Qin Shi next time either! Then why don't you write a story about wearing the same clothes as a chicken? Originally, learning the shared skills by yourself was enough to poison the world, but it was not the same as a split personality. Originally, I thought I had found this novel, which is not the kind of novel where you enter a space and immediately stack attributes like crazy when you exit, making you almost invincible. I also want to see the author's thinking. How can the Wandering Earth use the technology of the Dragon Clan to develop biotechnology? How can the Dragon Clan climb the technology tree? How can one person use refining to develop a new type of weapon refining or Taoism? The plot of Dragon Clan is fast and exciting. I thought it would soon start with one person and you would jump off a cliff and cut into the world! What a great batch! Do you think there are too many people watching? ?

The originator of the simultaneous interpretation stream relied on the complete sharing of power. The left foot stepped on the right foot to soar the combat power and changed the plot. However, the current simultaneous interpretation stream always likes to suppress the combat power 😒

First, you write a hammer that the same flow does not share combat power. Second, Dragon Clan, a one-person book, is not interesting at all. If you write a fanfic, and then there is still a FW protagonist who does not share the power, it will be even more boring. Third, thank you for writing in your introduction that you do not share power, so you are considered a Shennong.

I advise you to change the title of your book as soon as possible. Don't scold you. You can use the gimmick of traveling through time at the same time to attract everyone. The result is that it won't be shared at all. It's the same as a chat group. If no one scolds you, you're good.

Title Simultaneous Time Travel Introducing Readers The introduction is written directly and cannot be shared, thank the author Shen Nong

The author really failed. I have never seen such a blatant attempt to fool Quan Qin into success.

If we can't share our power, wouldn't it just be a chat group?

How dare you, a glass-hearted person, write a novel? If you don't dare to face your mistakes and don't dare to accept the criticism from readers, how can you make progress😏😏

You don't explain anything, just say you're a perfect employee. Don't tell me that you'll be cut off if you have perfect attendance this month, right? If you have been doing this for so many days, I probably don't expect this book to be successful.

What kind of bullshit are you writing? It's messy, confusing, and incomprehensible. I don't understand the key points at all. I leave this comment to tell future readers that it's extremely poisonous, so don't read it! ! ! ! ! !

There is no ability to superimpose attributes, so don't think about making money. If you don't like it, I will spend money to see it.

Without sharing strength, how can we travel simultaneously? It's better to change your name, unless you just want to be a gangster

The author has a bit of a glass heart, but he usually doesn't delete comments. If there is any processing, he will put the record here.

Let me tell you the simplest question. A person who can't get along on earth can become cunning after traveling through time. Can he be a bit more sophisticated?

You can't write about growth in the same time travel. If every world grows from scratch, that would be too fucked up.

If the same costume doesn't share the same strength, then why choose the Dragon Clan? The Dragon Clan itself has several peak human hybrids, such as Anger and Shangyue, but they can't beat the Dragon King. Their upper limit is almost here. If they don't share strength, the Dragon Clan will never be able to survive in their lifetime.

It's hard 😰. I can understand it if I'm working full time, and I'll make it up later, but you've been working three or four times in a row and still haven't paid up what you owed before. You've been asking for leave endlessly, and you're going to wait until it's on the shelves?

Until now, the author has not shown where the protagonist's genius is, he just shows that he has strong learning ability. Genius and strong learning ability are the same as mathematics. Yes, will it, won't it?

1. The protagonist jumps too suddenly. There is no prelude at all, not even the commonly used ones. Use words to speak to both sides, and Zhu Bajie on the other side is in such terrible shape that you can't even see the words. 2. The ones that should be broken are constantly broken, and the ones that shouldn't be broken are rare. It has jumped out of the description of personal force level and turned into Guo Jia level and technical level. The result is another scene where high-tech chips are used as the tip of a spear to stab people to death, which is off-putting. 3. The narrative is unclear. I don't know what you are writing about, about developing forces. However, after reading it for a long time, I didn't see any specific description. Almost equal to - the protagonist has been practicing for half a year and has exceeded the golden elixir breakthrough stage. (How to break through, what difficulties encountered, and what are the benefits of the activity are all not written). 4. Hydrology and water are all in the sky. Don't take the readers for fools. The description of a mountain, a place, or a river in the following chapters can take up half of the page, and there are also descriptions of the same scene repeated, so they are copied and pasted without change.

It turns out that this history has started to poison me again.

After reading the introduction, I can't share the same costume, it's a one-person Douluo mixed martial arts game from the Dragon Clan. . . You are racing like crazy on the road to death. . . I have trampled all the highlights of Shuangwen.

Brothers, if you have any comments or suggestions, you can say them here

Why are people so nagging when writing about wearing the same clothes?

No, my friend's book in September 2025 is still under 300,000 words, so I'll just tell you how I feel after reading it.

It's seventy-seven chapters, but it hasn't been released yet, and the monthly pass only has 13 chapters. This is really frustrating.

Your plot hasn't even started yet, but you've been thinking about falling in love.

The setting is pretty good, but it's inevitably a bit verbose.