Douluo: the Martial Soul Evolves, I Use the Golden Crow to Rule Qian

No, bro, your introduction said you won't lick San, but it's too outrageous to be embarrassing, and the part where the pig's foot awakens the fire spirit and then drops out of school and burns down Tang San's house is too stupid😅

I've read it, but I don't like it. I couldn't stand it in the first chapter. According to this plot, the protagonist dies in the first chapter.

It's disgusting. I have nothing to say. I'm already in the 5th ring and I still have to go to Shi Lake. Why, I can't write? You've killed Yin, and you still lean on Tang Hao. You're crazy. You're speechless. It's really ugly to leave.

If you open it, just open it. You have to sweat and work hard to complete the whole thing, and the plot is not at all appreciable. Brother, why don't we find a factory to do it?

Brother, why did you need to use a crystal ball to know the level after you achieved a breakthrough? After reading so many fans, I saw you write like this.

Half level of innate... I'm afraid I won't be able to cultivate to level 30

When I met Qian Renxue, during the period of thieves and poison, others threatened the protagonist with his life. This would not be possible if he was killed and poisoned later.

Zhu Zhuqing, who was rescued by the forest, is really very stiff. Zhu Zhuqing was not raised normally by the family. He was raised by PUA from childhood to adulthood. He was not guided by a person with normal views. He was completely PUA and became the daughter-in-law of the Dai family. Dai Mubai did all kinds of things, and can be forgiven. It is not something that you can fix alone. Moreover, she is really big-breasted and brainless. Her sister really loves her but she is stupid and can't figure it out. This kind of person can be a heroine and just control the big head.

After reading Chapter 5, I can only say that it is constantly poisoning. 1. Write that the protagonist accidentally ends up at the Canglan Silver Emperor's place while collecting medicine, is thrown into the river by Tang Hao, and returns to the village alive. I really regard Tang Hao as a good person. As a person who came from the killing city, how can he be so kind? 2. Deliberately remind Tang San and tell him that Yu Xiaogang is not good. They are opposites in the first place, but I also want to remind Tang San that he would be honest if he really allowed Tang San to absorb all the life attribute soul rings and awaken the Blue Silver Emperor. 3. In the chapter of Qishe, it is said that the protagonist has been practicing martial arts since childhood. As long as Tang San does not use hidden weapons, he can beat Tang San in frontal combat. As a modern person, where did you get your martial arts skills? Even if the Tang Sect was a master of concealed weapons, and even if Tang San was an otaku in his previous life, he would not be able to defeat the male protagonist Summary: In just 5 chapters, he kept poisoning, which is really awesome I am Shennong, just say "Thank you Shennong" to thank me.

Nowadays, the Douluo theme has become a diode. The protagonist's martial spirit is either a useless martial spirit or a god-level martial spirit. I really don't catch a cold after watching too much...

My problem is that I know that Douluo novels are all about poison, but I am asking for trouble. There is no problem with working hard. The problem is that the author just went to Tang San for a little inspiration. He can't write without following the main line, right? As far as I can see the problem, the protagonist accidentally met Tang San near Tang San for five days. The author assumes that Tang Hao has killed the protagonist a long time ago, but he hasn't found the protagonist yet. The protagonist stole the Blue Silver Emperor's soul bone and fused it with him before touching Tang San. I really don't know how he died. He kept saying how cautious he was, not to mention other poisonous points. It insulted my IQ.

I really think it was well written, especially the plot of arranging the heroine's encounter and joining Shrek. It was boring and boring, and the left and right brains were fighting each other in terms of behavior. I really couldn't figure out why Mao wanted to join Shrek, why did he want to join Shrek? Go find Dugu Yan yourself for the soul master competition? Going to Lanba Academy or Tiandou Royal Academy is no better than being here being paid attention to by PUA and Tang Hao every day. His logic is a mess and he can't write emotional scenes. When in danger, he relies solely on the evil and the enemy's fleeting thoughts without taking action. What a mess.

Poison, poisoning people is not worth their lives. The front is okay, but the back absorbs the soul ring and lets Qian Renxue see it. It is extremely poisonous. The author is really talented. I have ten thousand tons of water in my head and I can't think of it. Is fire just fire? You have evolved into a little bird and you are still intelligent. Yu Xiaogang is the only one in the whole continent. You have evolved directly and you are invincible.

Poison! We all take it for granted. Two thousand years of whale gum only costs a few thousand gold coins. How much does it cost to fight for one? Furthermore, Dou Er Wang Dong said that he ate a lot of thousand-year whale glue before he got a thousand-year-old second ring. If the protagonist eats one piece, he will get the first thousand-year ring? The lifting effect of thousand-year-old whale glue should be around 100 years

Who said that stacked soul rings with the same attributes and martial souls would evolve? I wonder which one has not been mentioned?

Going to Shrek is too shitty. It requires resources but no resources, experts but no masters, teaching experience but no experience, and is not even qualified to participate in competitions. If it is not a top-notch school, why go to it? ? ?

After reading a few chapters at the beginning, I found that the author particularly likes to be clever and superfluous. It feels like the product of a close relative. Forcibly creating a conflict is irrelevant in the first place. You have to force confrontation and don't study how to improve yourself. A half-level innate waste thinks that he is very smart. When he "matches wits and courage" with Tang San, he thinks he is an imaginary enemy. The real situation is that a half-level innate waste is too lazy to fight with you. No matter the behavior or performance, it insults the reader's intelligence and disgusts the reader.

Seeing that I can't stand it now, the fairy grass is given away for free, and the soul ring is given out for a certain period of time, just because others follow you and want to become stronger, I am speechless, just go and lick your ass for free, slip away, it is extremely poisonous

It's so speechless. It's so well written. The author may not be an alternative internet writer at heart, Tang San.

Sun → red supergiant → supernova explosion → black hole! If the mass of the sun is large enough, it is not impossible for it to evolve into a singularity in the end! As long as it is a singularity, it can evolve into the First Ancestral Qi, and then evolve into the Five Innate Tai Tais, embarking on a cultivation system. The difference is that orthodox cultivation uses the human body as the small universe, but here, the martial soul is the small universe! When the time comes, will there be any protagonist in the Douluo God or Great God Circle who is awesome? 😏

12 Years old, level 58 soul king, five ten thousand year soul rings, combat power reaching Contra level. With this configuration, are you going to Shrek? Tell me what's the point of this? Is it because you don't know how to write if you don't go to Shrek?

He died from the poison. For those who have never eaten shit, you can see that there is a problem with the author's brain circuit. He was born with half-level soul power and asked the master to accept him as his disciple, but he was humiliated.

It's so poisonous, how can everyone continue to read it?

I don't really care about some combat power or setting issues. I just think the scene where Qian Renxue was caught was really disgusting. Everything was seen by Qian Renxue and the three of them. My life was also at stake. My IQ fluctuated. I was forced to reveal my secrets.

Licking Yu Xiaogang, I can't stand it anymore. In what age are there still people who want to take Yu Xiaogang as their teacher?

In just a dozen chapters, there are poisonous points one after another. The first is the innate level of 0.5. This is actually not bad on its own, but compared with the protagonist's subsequent behavior, it is poisonous. The second is that the protagonist knew that he was going to travel through time, so he learned how to make a pistol in advance. I think your cheating is better than this. Just say that you have a better memory, even if you are a military enthusiast, you can accept it. The third one is to ask a restaurant in Notting City to provide some recipes. Then he can open restaurants all over the world. The fourth is that the protagonist takes it for granted that he can absorb a thousand-year soul ring. He is sure that he can absorb a thousand-year soul ring just based on the description in the original work. But brother, you are just a "waste" soul master with an innate level 0.5. There is no high-level soul master or equipment that can determine your physical strength, so you just directly assert that you can absorb it. Isn't this asking for death? And you have no background. You also wrote in the previous article that Tang Hao killed the guard because he insulted Tang San, so you are an innate level 0.5 Soul master. Not only did you quickly break through level 10, but you also got a thousand-year soul ring (not sure about this, it seems to be the year 900. It was too boring to read, so I skipped a few chapters), but you also had a feud with Tang Hao and the others (the author wrote that the protagonist's grandson dug medicine near my A Yin, and was thrown into the river by Tang Hao.). Are you really not afraid that he will come to your door? The fifth one is that the first soul ring absorbed by the protagonist seems to be a sunflower. And then there are sunflower seeds in it. Eating it will not only increase the protagonist's fire attribute. It can also increase soul power. As a result, in less than three months, the protagonist reached level 17. (After the protagonist hunted the soul beast, he also obtained an attached soul bone. Then he returned home and lived for a while. Later, the soul power was measured to be level 12, and then he directly said that it would become level 17 in two months). I just want to say, can ordinary people get such a useful sunflower seed wheel? But I am really bored and have no books to read. At least this book is finished. I feel bad about taking a look but not commenting on it. Sorry author.

Dear readers, please forgive me. Nothing in this world is perfect, just like no one is perfect. And this work is naturally the same. It was generated in my mind and then typed out by my hands. The whole process was done by me alone. And a person's thoughts are definitely limited, and it is impossible to control every detail perfectly. In addition, people have different ideas. Even if it is the same person, he will think differently at every point in time, so some mistakes will inevitably occur. Just like the protagonists and martial spirits in Douluo Dalu, even if they can eventually become gods and transcend the original world, there will be stumbling blocks in the process. If some readers want to criticize this as fan fiction, that's okay. After all, the original data is here, and you still write it in a messy way. That's definitely wrong. So I also admit my mistakes and try not to make them in the future, but I can't guarantee that there will be no flaws at all. It is said that it is difficult to agree with everyone, and writing is nothing more than making a big pot of rice, but it is impossible to guarantee that everyone will like to eat it. So hope you understand. Another point is that although the work is fan fiction, it is also a second creation. It is not a copy of everything. That would be exactly the same as the original work, and I believe it would be boring for you to read. So if some of my ideas were not so good at the time, please give me your opinions and don't scold me... If there are many people who support me to change the original text, then it will be no problem for me to change it... I'm sorry and grateful for wasting everyone's time watching my nonsense. The code word went 🙂🙂🙂

A classic argumentative essay with no plot and full of emotions.

1. When she was in Qishe, after Xiao Wu accidentally ate a meal brought by the protagonist once, she would like to ask the protagonist to treat her to dinner from time to time. The protagonist thought silently in his heart and thought it was his last meal. 2. During the Star Dou Soul Hunting, Qian Renxue used banditry to force the protagonist to reveal the secret of his martial soul's evolution. The protagonist later falls in love with Qian Renxue. Seeing this, is the protagonist a double standard, bullying the weak and afraid of the strong, or simply greedy for soul bones and soul rings, to be pure and pure? On the one hand, you are forcing me to treat you to dinner, you have a right to die; on the other hand, you are threatening the robber, Xueer is so strong, white, and fond of her?

I bought it, whatever comes to mind, I awakened a bird spirit and it comes with its own storage space... He died from poison.