Across the Heavens, Starting with The Legendary Siblings!

He's even managed to time-travel, yet he has absolutely no arrogance or sense of responsibility. He doesn't even have the confidence to face a weapon, and he even destroys it. Honestly, while the premise of a novel is important, the protagonist's charisma is even more crucial, and this protagonist has absolutely no charisma whatsoever.

I suggest you understand the relationship and differences between the Three Dantian, the Three Passes and Nine Acupoints, the Twelve Regular Meridians, and the Eight Extraordinary Meridians.

It is suggested that the author adopt the Hong Kong comic book setting for "The Peerless Twins". It is also suggested that the protagonist use the tenth level of the Wedding Dress Divine Skill as a base, fusing it with the Fossil Divine Skill, the Five Ultimate Divine Skills, and the Bright Jade Skill.

Do whatever you want. You've been writing books for so long, you can't possibly be unaware of these kinds of setting issues. But if you insist on creating settings that defy common sense to filter readers, then there's nothing anyone can do. Is being unconventional really that fun?

Why are there so many lunatics in the book review section these days?

This is outrageous! After reading the table of contents, Jiang Xiaoyu, who transmigrated, and Yaoyue and Lianxing, who killed their parents, ended up marrying both of them. Even female-oriented novels wouldn't dare to imagine this.

While writing, you actually took in those sisters—a mortal feud, you're so magnanimous!

It has a bit of the feel of the old-school martial arts adventure, but there's a small problem: the characters' development is too fast, especially their romantic relationships with the three female supporting characters. Furthermore, the protagonist must figure out how to utilize the resources of the world of "The Legendary Twins" to save himself in the main world.

I suggest you clearly distinguish between the powers of body refinement, vital energy, spirit, and Dao heart, so that people can immediately recognize what kind of power it is. Those who read martial arts novels, traditional Chinese martial arts, and those who cultivate immortality know that "" (gangqi) is a form of true qi, either manifested in a hidden or manifested form, or it refers to the…

Author, you are one of the few people I've met who are willing to seriously write martial arts fantasy novels, but your writing style has obvious flaws. 1. The connection between the main world and the secondary world is too weak. The protagonist in the main world is severely injured and has lost a leg.