Ring of Myth

I chose divine body, divine power, and flight, but I didn't choose divinity. Don't know

The protagonist is so awesome, all the forces don't want to win over him, they all want to kill the protagonist, right? Not to mention the forces that have offended the protagonist, the remaining forces that are enemies of the protagonist have not done anything?

The subject matter is good, but the writing style and ideas are too novice. It is suitable for reading without thinking.

I have read dozens of chapters of the author's previous novel. It was all about the villain who was jealous of the protagonist. There was no normal person. I can't make ends meet with this kind of writing.

The subject matter is acceptable, but the author's writing style ruins it.

Now I specialize in writing mindless and entertaining articles, so I should write more logical plots.

There is a beauty in the writing of everything flourishing in the millennium 🌹

The characters are so mindless that I can't believe myself watching it

But the writing has a studio beauty

Why do you have to go against the protagonist? This conflict point is actually a bit too far-fetched.

Provincial flow: God's awakening ability level 1

Like a high school kid's obscenity.

The book is very good. There are two poisonous points, the little fairy villain and the Federation. The little fairy villain protagonist can directly exterminate the clan when his strength increases. The Federation is also a poisonous point. The wanted genius is still such an awesome genius, but no one jumps out to help the protagonist? Instead, we want to kill the protagonist without thinking. I don't believe that there isn't a smart person in the federation to win over the protagonist and invest in the genius.

I really can't watch it anymore What attracted me at first was the author's setting. Everything written at the beginning was acceptable, but the same routine always repeated in the future Passers looked down on the protagonist, the protagonist upgraded, the protagonist slapped the face, passers-by didn't believe it, passers-by looked down on it, repeated over and over again, I feel that the IQ of the supporting characters in the world does not exceed 60. I also gave the author opinions in the comment area. The author is also immersed in his own world. There is no way to save it. I am dying of poison.

If India is Surya, don't write anything that looks down on Lao Yin. Some Indian mythological texts like to criticize Lao Yin, but Surya has a good relationship with Lao Yin. Lao Yin is also an old version of the numerical monster. Without blessing, he is very powerful and can be said to be the first outside the three-phase god system. Lao Yin should not sit in that position. The author should pay attention to the righteousness of the Nordic God of Light who is easy to write off. The Bible, Hebrew, and Greek are all okay. The characters are not too difficult, but the plot is difficult. In fact, South American myths can be written even if they are relatively popular. As for the myths here, there are too many versions if it is not prehistoric. The sun god has Chu Di and Qin Han. It depends on whether it is Dongjun or Jinwu.

It's so long-winded, it gives me a headache when I hear it repeated.

Shennong is Dead. In the first 20 chapters, everyone wanted to kill the protagonist for no reason. Then there was another double shock. I was so embarrassed watching it.

Oh my god, you still have the nerve to post a new book advertisement

I'm really convinced. Every book is full of ideas, but the more I write, the more confusing it becomes.

The update is too slow. After reading the author's last book, I found that as long as the plot of the main world is written, it is all very poisonous. I suggest that this novel give up writing the plot of the main world and only write about the world after time travel.

It's a good beginning, I support it.

The author's writing is becoming more and more perfunctory, and he doesn't even know how to change the formula of this book.

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Update more, and the description of your supporting roles should not be too simplistic. It cannot always be the same old routine. The protagonist of the supporting role team will always be looked down upon, disdainful, and unbelievable.

Okay, okay, I originally wanted to support it, but it ended like this. It's really good.

It's no different from your last book, it's the same genre

As mentioned, this mythical world actually doesn't have that many stories or parts about becoming stronger. After the protagonist has planned his power, he has to follow the same old path as before. After becoming the strongest, it will lead to the following, and then it will be boring after becoming stronger. I feel that the subject matter is not as pretentious as the previous book on primitive people in ancient times. At least it can write many stories that can be written into modern times or connect with other myths. Please hurry up and write about other worlds in this book, otherwise it won't be as good as the completed book before. At least that mythical world is the last world. There is much more plot content than this one

For example, the title first tells what level seven or eight abilities are and what kind of experience they have, and then talks about how to use them. How many levels of experience stones can these abilities be upgraded to? This piece of nonsense adds up to hundreds of words.

"Mellon sounded the siren, Hoover sounded the alarm, Wall Street sent out a signal, and the United States rushed to hell.

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