After Eight Years of Survival in the Apocalyptic World, I Surrendered to the Country

Many readers have said that they have no sense of immersion. Indeed How could the world's number one military power in the main world in 2x23 be so arrogant? Take Dongda as an example: 1. It will not fill holes with human lives, unmanned flamethrowers, and as many robot dogs as you want. The soldiers are already in the second order. 2. The exploration of another world is actually a guinea pig. . . There are no mass spectrometers, air analyzers, or infrared radars. A complex building with current technology. Buildings can be modeled simply by turning on a large ultrasonic detector. 3. The analysis of the enemy was not carried out immediately. To put it simply, the crystal bone beast should be analyzed at the molecular level at the scene. What band of radar can be used to detect it? Infrared radar can see him. The result was that a large number of people rushed in without collecting any intelligence, and there was no action plan for emergencies. Even when peacekeeping troops enter disaster areas, they have action plans on "how to deal with local armed robberies" and "how to deal with children receiving relief food who draw guns."

Unbelievable, eating patriotic food, can it be written well? There is no sense of involvement at all, it is forced to be sensational.

. . . Do you find it awkward and abrupt? Why don't you write a few chapters about your experience in another world first and then come back to it, and rush to shock readers and attract attention at the beginning? You start with a fresh head, shouldn't you be controlled first? The treatment of this patient is wrong, isn't it? Has the jc beside the hospital bed confirmed the protagonist's mental state? As a result, some unlucky guy was attacked, hahaha. Speaking of which, the protagonist suddenly screams that this setting is necessary when nothing happens.

They don't understand the reality at all, as well as the country's organizational structure, various technologies, and military equipment. Proper military illiteracy and technological illiteracy😅

Author, you are in China, not in Africa. I even doubted that you were worth 500,000

There are a lot of pitfalls ahead, which will test my understanding.

In most cases, self-admiration and pretentiousness are fatal poisons for newcomers.

Wolf Warrior 3: I Bear the Abyss Alone

If you want to block the news, you cannot go abroad. If you go abroad, the news will definitely not be blocked.

It is recommended that authors can learn from "Steel Torrent to Open up a Different World"

Okay, why don't you write it? Be persistent!

You are always chattering and following all kinds of rules. That's because you are a common person, buddy, and you are treated by the police. Why don't you go and see how anti-terrorism is fought? How to fight in northern Myanmar? If the state treats you with kindness and reason, then you are an ordinary citizen.

It feels a bit messy and I can't read it. The introduction seems to be of no use at all.

At present, it looks like a monster-fighting and upgrading text disguised as a national text.