The Cosmic Mandate of Heaven Begins with Grinding Profession Experience

The plot in the early stage is homogeneous, an ordinary student, awakens to cheats, joins a martial arts gym, practices martial arts, becomes his successor, and later has to participate in various competitions. The advantage is that the plot is smooth and there are no poisonous points. I hope I can write my own style in the future

To be honest, I am really tired of seeing this kind of high martial arts students who start at the age of 18, but the high martial arts area all starts at the age of 18. . . Gives me the feeling of a waste stream opening. . . . I've been looking around and can't find a book that doesn't start with an 18-year-old student. Is it really confusing?

It's uncomfortable to hear. I think it's acceptable when you write about family, but in school, this girl likes you, that girl likes you, this one gives you something, and that one gives you something. It feels like watching a Taiwanese romantic drama or Qiong Yao's novel from decades ago. It's too uncomfortable.

What I hate the most is what kind of materials are needed for this kind of upgrade. Normal people don't write like this.

Tsk! This book is really neither good nor bad. It doesn't have the ability to go up, even if the author realizes it, and can't do anything about it. But it can't let go of the face when it comes down. It follows a template or rushes the word count without thinking. Hey!

The panel is really good at word count, it's too wordy.

How to put it this way, there are a lot of minor problems at the beginning, and it's a lot of tricks, but it has the advantage that the upgrades are not sloppy, and the rhythm is maintained well. It would be good to write less scenes where the villain keeps harassing and advancing the plot.

When the heroine came out, I didn't want to watch it anymore. She immediately seemed retarded.

It looks okay. . The plots are also good. Not so poisonous. . But that panel comes up too often. One chapter appears two or three times. Reduce or simplify it later. There are also too many professions. . It is recommended to combine it. . Otherwise, it's easy to get aesthetic fatigue

One chapter a day, you'd better go into the factory and make screws