Traveling Through Time at the Same Time, None of the Clones Are Human!

Sharing the power bonus in multiple worlds, being robbed of his origin, being violently beaten into a younger brother by Tushan Honghong, and being licked backwards, he is a typical turtle-eating man.

The author is awesome. He wrote Douluo before it was released on the shelves. A few chapters after Douluo, he picked up Demon Slayer 👍👍👍👍, which scared away all those who wanted to read the book 👍👍

Look at the introduction. Kyubey appeared too early. According to the original work, Kyubey is the overlord civilization in the universe.

Douluo's writing is too exaggerated. With only five Lockes, the plane can't accommodate it? Just tear apart space? You don't know how to do anything, even Naruto Locke doesn't have a serious way of refining chakra, so you just used the Four Symbols Seal? Is the advanced sealing technique so worthless?

The beginning of the fox demon chapter was not written well. As a tree spirit, you are supposed to be the father, but it turns out that you have to be a turtle man, which is too dissuasive. The latter part is a bit b-grade, but I am too lazy to read it. I will read it in the next chapter.

He is just a bitch who is a doormat. He always fights first and then becomes a nanny. He flirts with women. He seems to have a high level of b-level, but in fact he is hard to describe. Currently, he has been beaten to death several times and then joined the protagonist group. The genre of cool writing does not have a harem, and it is not cool at all. It is embarrassing.

I wrote down all the disgusting things about Japanese anime, and even added Douluo at the end, which is rubbish.

I was very discouraged in the first few chapters. I don't know how I died when I was involved in Konoha and Uchiha affairs when I was not able to protect myself. Also, did I have to go to Konoha to find food? Do all people in Konoha think they are savages?

In the latest chapters, the protagonist has become a weakling, looking like he can't be beaten and can be bullied by anyone.

Naruto at the beginning was a bit interesting, but Douluo and Demon Slayer were written in a way that discouraged them.

If you look down on Douluo, don't add it. If you don't have any opinions of your own, it's just cliche anti-three arguments. There's no need to add it to this level. Look back and see for yourself, what is written in this world, it is a mess, and it will directly destroy your early advantages. Then pick up Demon Slayer 😟. I really understand that it is absolutely correct to rely on popularity, and popularity is traffic. But it was so out of character. It would be great to have a comment before. What do you want, author? To wear the same thing is to step on the left foot and the right foot and slowly ascend to the sky. Now that you have taken off, in this already invincible world, what do you want to get? Change the fate of the plot? Shape the entire world? Or do multiple systems coexist? Even if it's a stud collecting a girl, as the author you at least have a purpose. Sea of ​​Dead Fire is a classic, easy to write, and has a large audience, so you can definitely practice it. Either the classic route, or find a new way, instead of chewing on others' feet 10 years ago.

What are you writing about? The fox demon has not finished for so long. He is playing with a few idiots in Tushan and still acts as his little brother.

Authors should not listen to readers. They must stick to their own ideas and have their own style to target the audience. By the way, I will delete it first.

Chapter 32, Douluo wrote 12 chapters🤔

What a disgusting thing to write, a waste of my time

If you don't put some restrictions, it's too inflated. Why don't you put some restrictions? How many are here? Although Douluo is a fantasy floor, if you have only integrated a few of them, the world will not be able to bear it. The cracks in space have appeared, as well as those ninjutsu. Why don't you localize it, study it, and learn it when you see it? You can use it ❓ I feel like you won't be able to write long. It expanded too quickly.

Don't tell me I'm still a fox demon now

The author has watched a lot of female videos, or is a fan of female videos.

I became more and more bored as I wrote and became invincible, leading a leisurely and slow life in retirement. A piece of stinking shit.

A very powerful novel, Shi Yituo

Everyone in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba survived, and they all met the people they most wanted to see.

At a certain point in New World's "The Same Mistakes of the Sun and the Moon", only fans can be found. When I finished reading this book, I saw the world of this work for the first time.

The demon fox is not interested and still writes so much. 😮‍💨

This book is really not a ninety-nine-level book (or just a skin). Each world is independent. It is serial rather than parallel. The abilities are inherited and remain intact. The combat power increases too fast.

The author thinks his writing is very cool

The fox demon chapter is stinky, long and boring. The sun and moon chapter is the same as the fox demon chapter. Get off my bookshelf.

Did the author stop writing? Or are you starting a new novel?

Borrow the precious place to recommend the book "Douluo: Martial Soul Essence, I am the Master" The original Martial Soul is full of soul power, not brainless, reasonable and refreshing, exploring the Martial Soul Soul Ring is half original, half research