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The subject matter is good but the pace is too slow. From the first villain to more than 20 pictures, she didn't even make a single dent.
Why did you enter the palace?
It can be seen that the writing is good and the plot is not too cliché.
A small suggestion, the current image of the protagonist brother is a bit thin. Although this character is used as a stepping stone to allow readers to understand the situation set by the author, if it is stepped on too much, it will make people feel disgusted. You can plan and emphasize this role in the direction that children are stupid but good for you. And it will be more humane for a smart person to give a simple and loyal anchor. Stupidity is not important and is not worth emphasizing. Being arrogant and talented is not very high, but being able to trust the world with all your heart and soul is important.