Controlling the Beast: Predicting the Future

If you want to read it, you can read Chapter 5. The protagonist was dissatisfied with the free pets provided by the state and planned to buy them by himself. Later, he saw an abandoned low-potential pet on the roadside. The protagonist immediately remembered the white moonlight dog from before and did not despise the lack of potential. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been stressing that his parents are controlled by a dragon standing at the top of time. The protagonist has always wanted to become stronger and save his parents. How do you save them like this? I would rather see a classic plot where the protagonist buys a pet and finds something wrong than a plot like this.

In fact, it doesn't look good. Others simplify the levels and settings, but this book is so full of settings that it slaps it in the face. And if you keep re-reading top-level Order 0 and other Shar-pi words, you can't slowly expand after leveling up? It feels like the outline is being slapped in the face. Moreover, the writing of beast control tends to be Pokémon-style and cute, but can you defeat Pokémon? Just write randomly

I haven't read it yet, but there are typos in the introduction. It's rare. Oh, 99%, it's a rare thing~

The protagonist's parents fell into the water and drowned. The protagonist should fish for his parents first or choose appearance. Author: It must be appearance. Those who agree with this can watch it

How do you think that a senior high school student can be poached from 300 students? You can't write such a plot with your feet. . . . This is no longer a problem for Xiaobaiwen.

Emotional scenes are not very good. In fact, beast-control novels don't really need emotional scenes, and as a reader, I don't feel that the character of Chu Tianling is charming at all.

You already have a plug-in. It's understandable if you use a slot to satisfy your old wish and force the plug-in to fly. If you're not sure about the type of plug-in, just put poison in it.

I feel like there are too many settings. The protagonist's skills are so buggy, but he can't defeat Chu Tianling.

Picked up a dog contract, poisonous. You haven't confirmed how strong your plug-in is yet. I don't understand why I wrote a dog.

It can't be a conspiracy, it feels like Chu Tianling has taken away half of the protagonist's inspiration and talent

If it really doesn't work, just take a day off to sort out your ideas and stock up on manuscripts. Every update is paid in advance, which is very annoying. You can't unsee it after it's updated.

This protagonist wants both, but his character design is not good, and he doesn't look very smart.

The general environment of the world is too dark, full of conspiracies and the like, and it makes me tired just looking at it.

There is a high probability that this book will enter the palace. After all, after losing my passion and not writing for a long time, I gradually became slack. Send an advance and IOU, and the status bar will be updated every day. You can not only show full attendance, but also trick new people into subscribing, killing two birds with one stone.

After reading the new chapter, I suddenly felt very emotional. The author is quite right. Poison is indeed not very popular, but it is undeniable that he is powerful and has a low threshold. If I travel to the extraordinary world, and I am a small person, and I am still the kind of person with three no talents (no talent, no background, no luck), in this case, if I still want to go up, I want to become a master. Then I will definitely choose drug trafficking if I have the chance, because this is the best way for the weak to defeat the strong. And his threshold is relatively the lowest. As long as a person is ruthless enough and lives hard enough, he can definitely achieve something. This is absolutely impossible in other ways!

The protagonist's attack skills are actually very average. I think those skills obtained from various plants and animals are more interesting. It mainly talks about upgrading the secret realm in combat training and competition. It's not that the routines are not good, it's just that the specifics are very general. The wrong skills, the anti-inflammatory beast-burning talent, etc. Are all very creative. It is better to focus on this and focus on farming. Anyway, the protagonist awakens to the wood element.

It turns out that evolution and atavistic bloodline have nothing to do with each other.

There are too many poisonous points, the logic is illogical, and the author slaps himself in the face too quickly... I still give up, goodbye

Author, who is this Gu Wumian? Isn't he your lover? Are you from Chengdu? The introduction of this character is vague, and the positioning of the character is not clearly explained, but the appearance rate is extremely high, and he is simply more of a protagonist than the protagonist.

Poisonous Points 1: The fantasy novels written in the real world are like those in online game novels. Other professions can be inexplicably weakened. You may say that there are not enough resources or lack of training methods, but one profession is directly weakened, and the one who chooses a mage automatically becomes a waste 2: The protagonist knows that he is the protagonist at the beginning and will not die.

I owe you 5 chapters. If this continues, will I watch your trailer later?

Advantages: 1. The protagonist does have a brain and is relatively cautious. After getting the exotic treasure in the exam, he doubted whether he had been tricked. (Most people really don't think so much, they just think it's the newcomer king's bonus) 2. The description of the dog is also okay, quite emotional. Disadvantages: 1. Other paths have almost no sense of existence and only appear in the background board. It is better to write only one beast control path, or just add another one. Now there are five ways, and it feels like no other way exists. 2. The most important part of the beast-control style is the basic values ​​​​and different characteristics of different races. To put it bluntly, I don't feel the difference in the basic numerical values ​​of each race in the author's writing. I just accept that dogs have blood. As for cats, their bloodline is average. Why is the gap between it and the pure-blood dragons so small if it has not evolved many times or has particularly awesome skills? (Whether it is an Eastern or Western dragon) Under normal circumstances, it should evolve at least two or three times, and its skill proficiency is particularly high, so that it can stand on the same starting line as the pure-blood dragons. There are also the Four Holy Beasts, which are even more humorous. Generally speaking, the level of the Four Holy Beasts is one or two levels higher than that of ordinary dragons. In other beast-controlling streams, they are almost the final form of evolution. It is a veritable mythical creature, the four spirits of heaven and earth. Invulnerable to water and fire, basic immunity to negative states are all basic skills. What's the result? The green dragon poison will knock you out instantly. Although its poison is stronger than the ordinary green dragon, you won't be knocked down instantly. How? Is your toxin a conceptual toxin like the poison of time or the poison of law? 😰 It is hard to imagine that without conceptual level toxins, a mythical creature like the Azure Dragon would be knocked down in a second by a mixed toxin such as neurotoxin released by a Green Dragon of the same level. 😥 3. The contrast before and after evolution is not obvious, giving people a poor impression. Without the huge racial gap, evolution will seem useless and people will not be able to appreciate the charm of evolution. It feels like a pet beast can sneak around with a pure-blooded dragon. I really can't observe the defensive capabilities of the dragon scales, the physical strength and flying ability of the dragon, and the physical strength of the dragon. 4. Cats still have feelings in the beginning. After becoming twin cats, the personality difference between them and ordinary cats is almost invisible. Just an ordinary cat, without any strong emotions or bonds.

Not to mention the four spirits of heaven and earth, even if they are ordinary five-color dragons, the poison of the green dragon won't make them fall instantly, right? The strongest of the five colored dragons should be the green dragon. The protagonist's green dragon toxin is stronger, but it's not as big as the difference between the ordinary five-color dragon and the four holy beasts, right?

Did you forget to update 333? Everything at the back is normal, but you can't see it in the middle.

I believe you are evil, bad books and eunuchs are the norm. There are chapters in arrears, chapters in advance, and now there is a trailer for the ending of the new book, 6. The people who will be chasing after the next book are all gods.

Are you sincere and make advances every day?

To be honest, the two beast-controlling novels didn't evolve much. Although I didn't see the golden finger of the evolutionary route, I didn't see much evolution overall.

Or delete the IOU, as in the title

The author's ambition is greater than his writing power. He wants to capture everything and writes nothing well. The worldview settings are piled up, but they are full of loopholes and logical contradictions. The whole process cannot withstand scrutiny. The plot is loose and confusing, the rhythm is poor, and the narrative skills are completely lacking. The whole article only contains the cheapest routines of ancient novels: mindless flattery, deliberate underestimation, forced pretentiousness and slap in the face, the plot is clichéd and embarrassing, and the screen is full of deliberately refreshing points, but the more you watch it, the more it makes you laugh. The whole book has neither a rigorous setting nor a qualified plot, only a pile of clichéd plots, which makes the book look very poor.

The beast-controlling style always likes to use dogs to start the game or the first beast, which is very cliché and not good-looking.