Mortal: a Diagram of Ten Thousand Dharma at the Beginning, One Thought Creates Ten Thousand Dharma

How should I put it? It doesn't matter if it's not good-looking, and it doesn't matter if it's good-looking. There is a gap between the early stage and the original work, but not much. I changed some of the plots of Dr. Mo's seizure of the body and added some details. Author, it's not good for you to write like this. Also, the section about Mo Mansion is not very different from the original work. You want to reflect Lin Xiao's positioning, but you reflect It's not obvious but it's still three-dimensional, and there won't be any problems later. By Chapter 45, Lin Xiao has started to exert his strength, and he has also begun to have some cool points that fan fiction should have Evaluation: Let's look at the follow-up, it is not too big and not too toxic in the early stage, the logic is smooth, and it is biased towards the mortal flow. It has a trend of cool writing, and blind guessing is semi-invincible.