Hawk Hound of the Immortal Court

Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. There are obvious steps on the protagonist's promotion path, which allows readers to predict and look forward to the protagonist's future development. Based on the book title introduction and content, the protagonist will become a member of the Nine Heavens, one of the Nine Heavens, the leader of the Nine Heavens, or have a higher status in the future. 2. The plot has enough unexpected but reasonable reversals. For example, President Qu in the opening plot, while watching it, I did not expect that he was a member of the devil's path, nor did I expect that Lin Xiangwen was gay. This also highlighted the role of the protagonist's "clairvoyance". Writing this way can also make reading more interesting. 3. There are many memes, and the dialogue between the characters is interesting. There are many memes, but not too many, and the look and feel is ok. The character dialogue does not make people feel cliche, but also conveys certain information and background. 4. The characters are not smart. From Kong Ningyuan to President Qu, to Qi Tanhua and "Tianjian", we can more or less feel their way of survival in this world. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. 1. The character's driving force is not enough, or it can be said that the driving rationality is not enough. Joining the Nine Heavens "Chosen" lineage seems to me like risking one's life. I don't feel the need for the protagonist to risk one's life. The protagonist's family has no worries about food and clothing, and has not suffered any disasters. He can live well in this world by letting it develop naturally. If the protagonist is involved in some big event, and the lives of the protagonist and his family are in danger, would it be better to write about the protagonist risking his life? As for the hidden illness of the protagonist's mother, if this is the only reason why the protagonist needs to risk his life, I don't think it is convincing enough, because before he raided President Qu's house, he had no idea that he would get the Thousand-Year Snow Lotus, and even the prince did not get the Thousand-Year Snow Lotus. Why did the protagonist get it so easily? As for the conflict with the Qu family... Emm, depending on President Qu's performance, this small conflict will not affect the personal safety of the protagonist and the protagonist's family. The author mentioned in the third chapter that the protagonist is insecure, but if this is the only thing that makes the protagonist insecure, I don't think it is convincing enough. Moreover, without affecting the personal safety of the protagonist and the protagonist's family, isn't it a bit rash to risk one's life? The author writes that "Thousand-Year Snow Lotus" can cure his mother's hidden illness, so that the protagonist seems to have to make a deal with Qi Tanhua, thereby joining the plot of Jiutian's Chosen Lineage. I personally feel that the plot is a bit stiff. For example, for the dish of jealousy that says "the protagonist can only join the Chosen One to bind each other", the dumplings "Thousand-year-old snow lotus heals the mother" are made. Of course, if the author has other foreshadowing and foreshadowing, just ignore it. In addition, I didn't feel the need for the protagonist to become stronger. The opening chapter only mentioned the "martial arts dream" and the so-called "security". It's okay to become stronger, but I think it's a bit unreasonable to risk one's life in order to become stronger. 2. The rhythm is slightly slower. Two-thirds of many chapters are lines, and there are a lot of background introductions and world views in the lines, which makes it a bit boring to read, but the plot does not advance much. For example, in chapters 18-19, it is written that Dai Yueying, a demon godwoman, deliberately approached the protagonist, but the protagonist discovered the clues and refused to approach. It took 2 chapters. Dai Yueying must be one of the key figures in the subsequent plot, but I did not see the need to write 2 chapters for this incident. There are too many lines and too many explanations and explanations. 3. Is daily life too much? As mentioned in the advantages, jokes and humorous dialogues can increase the interest of reading, but may there be too much written, especially some dialogues with parents, which I feel can be omitted. All in all, it looks good. I have no other intention, nor do I mean to teach the author how to write a book, I just want to express my own opinions. Book friends, please don't criticize.

Only now can I realize that the author relied entirely on the relationship and pull between the characters to write more than 700,000 words, and there are only a few fighting scenes (referring to literal fighting scenes). It is too strong😭😭

Masters of Dayu, Lian Shanxin is not a smiling tiger, AKA, but a black dogfish. In the blink of an eye, the old hen turns into a duck. Hmph (chuckle), U Know I'm say, I won't be polite to the natives of other worlds... let's go! It doesn't matter what basic sword it is or the Sword of Heaven If I don't have the talent for martial arts, I will just practice immortality Report my neighbor for sneaking into Jiutian The registered disciple hangs on the Heavenly Sword Studying medicine can't save Dayu in the world My mother, who is suspected of being the king of hell, said I should read more books BO OK Becoming a demon fetus, I said it would be better to study the cooking skills of steamed babies COOK White Deer Academy Princess has a grudge Poor Thousand Faces Three Encounters with the Eye of Heaven Reunion of mother and daughter by sending blood to Guanyin Killing the royal family can help you get promoted quickly Include Tian Ji by the way Be my partner This is not a joke, let alone nonsense Please read if you don't believe me Chapter 300: Rising to the Peak of the Hidden Dragon He never neglects to let me break through the realm~ Yun Conglong, Feng Conghu~I make the final decision in Jiangzhou Yun Conglong Feng Conghu~The bosses are all my father Yun Conglong Feng Conghu~Thousand-faced master becomes a high disciple Yun From the dragon to the wind and from the tiger ~ crazy things and the road to immortality Yesterday, today and tomorrow, I misjudged my Ashin The Wanxiang Sutra gave me an extra stack of characters The Divine Foot Tong made my position elusive It is said in the world that I, Ashin, have two wives No more nonsense! Whoever provokes the relationship between Shuishui and Tanhua again I will prick the deaf ears Feng Conghu Yuncong~ Kuangshan Qi Ling is really a coward Feng Conghu Yuncong~ Improving strength depends on children Feng Conghu Yuncong Dragon~ the emperor and the rebels all value him Wind Conghuhu Cloud Conglong~ Kill the enemy's family of five and rush Jiuzhenzhen is the first organ of Dayu's royal family Yongchang Laoden only loves to have fun with the chivalrous ladies in the rivers and lakes The relationship between husband and wife of Bone Scraper My mind is twisted I am a cricket, and all the ten great nobles are righteous and loyal Looking back~ The prince, prince, princess, and ministers are all in the demon sect That's not surprising~ The most fake seems to be true, and the most traitorous seems to be loyal Emperor Everyone is charging at the demon sect Everyone wants to have sex with the bone scraper Who knows her/his true identity She is actually the number one person in Jiujiang Palace Axin's real father is Doctor Lianshan Axin thinks Both parents have some charm Mom looks more and more like the lifeless old mother Dad also looks more and more like the abandoned disciple of the Heavenly Doctor Axin's plan has always been simple and crude He just rushes to the door and kills the person Use it after it's done Qian Mian changed his identity No more righteous words~ Confused black and white~ Everyone who had offended me, Ashin, is dead~ The drastic changes that led to Dayu began~ Three people together I feel so comfortable having a baby~ I heard that the Illuminati had a big plan, and I ruined it~ I heard that the Taoist sect split the two brothers, and I merged~ The demon sect held a job fair for elders, and I was so beautiful Follow the tiger and the cloud and follow the dragon, my grandpa, the Ming King of the Demon Sect The wind follows the tiger and the cloud follow the dragon, the nine heavens are all my allies The wind follows the tiger and the cloud follow the dragon, both positive and negative are my lord The wind follows the tiger and the cloud follow the dragon, if there is any benefit I will rush The three armies obey orders! Kill yourself and die! Look at the Immortal Eagle Dog~ The legend is still unfolding~ The degree of perversion is incredible~ The quality of readers is top-notch~

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Both the protagonist and the enemy king have had their hands blown to pieces many times.

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