With the Power of Space, I Am Invincible

When I came in and saw my name, it was so weird, bro.

The protagonist has an awesome ability, but he doesn't have an awesome brain. It's more like he has trained his muscles into his brain because he is also a spatial ability user. As a result, when he fights in close combat, he has a full 2.5 Enlightenment. Even the protagonist is not as smart as 2.5 Enlightenment. The author wants to express that the protagonist is very awesome and can crush everyone, so he is careless in fighting. But what the author expresses in his writing is that the protagonist is a full-brained character. It's really unimaginable that the SB that "fights, it's fun" can burn through several layers of space one after another. The protagonist's space only has hierarchical expressions, no distance expression, and even space slashing and space exile are not fully explained. The author seems to know a time-travel world (still a semi-finished product), storage space, and space barrier (in the author's writing, it is as crispy as a pancake). In short, the protagonist has an awesome ability, but the protagonist doesn't know how to play it.

[If I keep working hard, I will soon surpass everyone, including my father, my friends, and even my old enemies. That is a very wrong thing to do. I don't know what the real "wrongness" is. The only reason that can be explained is that I don't want to go too fast. ] Where does this passage come from?

To be honest, there is one place in this book that I feel is a bit unreasonable. As the only orderly country in the entire world, the Kingdom of Heaven has a population of more than 200 million, and yet there are only four S-level ability users. While the number of people in the outside world is far less than that of the Heavenly Kingdom, there are S-level ability users whose number far exceeds that of the Heavenly Kingdom. This is extremely unreasonable. Logically speaking, the bottom building determines the upper level. There is only a small population in the outside world, how can it be possible that there are more S-class ability users than those in Heaven? Of course, if you say that this world is similar to a magnetic field, which becomes stronger as it gets stronger, then just pretend that I didn't say that.

The climax of the plot at the end of the first volume made my head hurt watching it. Whether it's gold teeth, good or evil, or the main character. The three of them just gave me the feeling of three clowns performing on stage. First, good and evil. After lighting a fire and watching others being burned, I was stunned for four or five seconds. Let the person on the other side crawl to you in front of the fire, until you can grab your thigh. What is this if not a clown? Second, gold teeth. This one is a buffoon among clowns. Third, the protagonist. He kept pushing me there all the time, talking non-stop, even pretending not to understand.

In Chapter 9, the girl named Mengyi came out, and she was a little nervous. She agreed to synchronize after the first meeting, and she was not afraid of control or poisoning point B. Don't talk about the level difference, Aizen will hide the spiritual pressure. Mainly, there are not many benefits if you do this kind of thing. If you are really an old coin, you will be a clown.

Now I'm just writing tens of thousands of words, and I'm rushing to the street

It can be regarded as an optimized version combined with the first two books, Zhutianliu, the main world is a supernatural world Starting with S-class superpowers, the protagonist in the first volume is estimated to be invincible, and then single-handedly conquers the whole world and forces the world to become a paradise. The next step is to travel through various worlds and describe different power systems and social forms According to the author's writing, it should not be the kind of person who pretends to be a slap in the face, but With the local world as the core, train the Iron-blooded Corps and conquer the multiverse. Interspersed with some indigenous resistance and tug-of-war, the protagonist appears in the stalemate and uses personal force to crush and suppress all dissatisfaction. By the way, I write about the psychology of the enemy's soldiers, which reflects the protagonist's invincibility, terror, and invincibility ... If it is really written like this, then it is designated to be a street fight.

I want to design a superpower called "beating", which can control everything through beating. It can defeat diseases and allow the body to heal. It can beat the body and make it strong. Naou takes the time to turn back time. Can beat the space and make yourself teleport in space. Beat others to make them loyal to you. The effectiveness of the "beating" depends on the amount of force exerted. But you can also make your body stronger by beating yourself. This kind of power is truly "invincible". Anyone who disobeys me can be beaten

How should space-based superpowers fight against mind control or hypnosis-based superpowers?

There is a bug in the author's power system. Since the awakening of superpowers is related to one's own wishes, similar powerful abilities in time and space cannot be rare. The high-level officials can do the same as the wife I posted, with targeted training and instilling relevant knowledge from an early age. Even if the talent is not enough, it is always possible to specialize in one aspect, such as creating storage space or specializing in offense.

In what age is it that you still have to wait and talk nonsense to fight an enemy?

The author's narration is too fast and too ruthless, and the style changes too frequently, which will lead to a consequence, that is, a sense of incoherence, just like drinking fried rice and eating Coke. It does not prevent you from understanding, just changing the words, but you always feel a bit awkward. The first volume is still a super power battle, and the second volume becomes the power of spiritual stones. The key is that the story is fragmented. After the devouring power in the first volume, the world is changed directly without any relaxation. In short, there is a way of clinging to small things and not letting go of big things. I feel that this problem is very serious. For example, in the first volume, you are immersed in it, but in the second volume, the world is changed, and there is no sense of immersion. In this case, there are only free chapters. I will read it, and I will not want to read it if I pay for it later. Reading a book is a kind of relationship from stranger to familiarity. You can see how the protagonist grows and know why it has this character. But when you come to the second volume, it is like a different style and people have changed. In short, the author, please deal with the continuity of the story first.

Is the power system of the second world useful for the male protagonist? The armor is not as strong as the male protagonist's own physical body. If the male protagonist has this time to play with armor, he might as well find a world where the power system involves space, or go to the hell organization to fight and fight in the main world to improve himself. I feel that deleting the second volume will have no impact on the book. It is a meaningless volume.

I feel that your writing is quite confusing. In fact, it is very simple. You can't make all readers like your novel, so you can only choose some readers to read it. The protagonist in the front is very stubborn and can accept this part of the readers. All readers like this type, while the protagonist written in the back is more sloppy. Readers who like to be stubborn will definitely leave. This is a basic common sense in writing novels. When writing a novel, it is not only the readers who choose the novel, but also the author who chooses the readers.

The second volume is really bad. If you want to write this kind of thing, just read the book "Get Out" and learn how to write "Change Map". Although it is easy to collapse after rolling away, it is much stronger than what you have now.

I feel that the protagonist is just like the Sentinel. His self-awareness hinders his true ability. I feel that the protagonist's superpower should be called infinite. It can become infinitely stronger. It will not stop if there is no bottleneck, and it will grow exponentially due to certain crises.

The protagonist is mindlessly pretending to be the protagonist, always trying to pretend but pretending not to understand. Turns out it was pretending to be sb

The protagonist is too arrogant. If it were not for the support of the author, he would have died a long time ago. It does not feel any better. Moreover, it is said to be an invincible style, but the protagonist has encountered many powerful opponents.

Settings: The undisclosed settings of the outside world [Hell] are as follows. The super power war that lasted for countless years has completely turned the world into ruins and doomsday. Desert, Gobi, residual radiation from ability users, restricted areas, the world is no longer suitable for life. [The Doomsday of Fist of the North Star] In such an environment, a certain ability user, the second-generation leader of the Kingdom of Heaven, was born. He created life for the world, eliminating ability radiation and restricted areas. Reawaken water veins, forests, and grasslands. The difficulty of childbirth for the few human beings has been greatly reduced. Pregnancy in ten months has been changed into pregnancy in ten days, and the population has increased greatly. Walking around every corner of the planet for a lifetime has brought life back to this doomsday planet But his abilities have an end, and the creatures in hell are ungrateful. Various superpower wars are still taking place in the world after the death of this superpower, and they are once again rushing towards the doomsday. In the 133rd year of the Kingdom of Heaven, large areas of the world have once again become deserts and doomsday. Life dries up and food cannot be grown. The still intact "oasis" is also occupied by various powerful ability users and is constantly disappearing. So what kind of experience will people born in this kind of hell have and what kind of super powers will they awaken? Interested readers can write about the ability setting, growth experience, character name, character, etc. Of the ability user based on this setting about the outside world that has not been written in the main text [may be changed]. Thank you boss for your support!

The battles written by Wudi Wenguang are really boring, and the more you watch it, the more boring it becomes - you can't always let the protagonist fight stronger opponents, and there is no freshness at all after the cycle. In fact, you can write less about battles and more about the daily life of the protagonist. For example, write about what senior sisters and classmates think of him, how he didn't understand him at first and then admired him; and then write about how he lives his daily life, drinking tea, helping others, etc. Occasionally interspersed with a battle as a seasoning, the protagonist can easily solve the problem, but it can better reflect his invincibility. This way it is loose and tight, making it more interesting to read. There is another key point. The narrative perspective must be fixed on the protagonist. Don't always write stories in which the protagonist watches others, otherwise I will really think: Whose story is this? Are others invincible? What kind of invincible novel is that? The protagonist's "sense of invincibility" is diluted, and the core selling point is lost. I think it is a well-written invincible novel. Immortals just want to lie down. This book also describes the protagonist from other people's perspectives. In the final analysis, it is to describe the invincibility of the protagonist. Don't just watch other people's stories all the time. It's really boring. If you say the protagonist pushes it, does that mean it's the protagonist's story?

The style has changed so much that both the first and second volumes can be regarded as two novels, and the plots are extremely incoherent. It would have no effect to skip the second volume and go directly to the third volume. So what is the point of writing the second volume? There is also the so-called Lang and Invincible, because all the problems reflected in it are just like a clown villain who talks too much. After watching it, I was afraid that the plot would continue to be poisonous in the future, and I had no interest in subscribing.

1: Gravity control. Gravity is essentially caused by the distortion of space by massive celestial bodies. Modifying the degree of space distortion is the control of gravity. This ability can also be expanded: 1. Star Breath, which smoothes the space in an area and causes gravity to offset. For the earth's core pressure, the resistance in this direction becomes smaller and forms an optimal path. High-temperature material jets measuring trillions of tons per second will break through the earth's surface and eject into the starry sky, forming an extremely bright breath of stars. 2: Time manipulation, according to the principle of Lorentz transformation, as long as the reference frame is changed, space becomes time. The specific performance is as follows: converting the spatial ability of infinitely increasing distances at the end of the world into the time amber of a thousand years in a flash, that is, the movement of an object completed in one second from the subjective perspective is slowed down to a thousand years from the objective perspective, and the object is as if it is sealed in the amber of time.

Once this book is finished, update Elf Girl as soon as possible!

The writing is a bit dull, like a two-dimensional author

A protagonist who talks a lot when facing the villain.

Look at the author's imagination, world fusion, and then find a general rule, a general cultivation law, directly devour the fused world, and then understand the rules and laws in the conflict and fusion of the world, and transform into ten thousand. For reference, the one in Infinite Barrier, directly become a god, directly increase the dimension. You can also refer to the super power development in Super Riot. In fact, super power completely depends on the imagination and development. Yes, there is also a time-travel in the fantasy world, Dr. Chen's kind, a direct physical law training system, neutron combat body, cyber seventy-two transformations of matter transformation, heart, body, god, mind, Qi, all have a training system, it depends on whether the author's imagination is big enough to unify the training and fusion system, God can transcend the world, roam freely in the chaos, the place of thought, omniscience and omnipotence, refer to Armed Witch

It always feels like Japanese comics.