I Will Become Immortal on the Seventh Day

Let's do this, you post 200,000 words tonight, and I'll help you find out what the problem is 🙂

One glance at the first-level author, and then another look at it. Tell me which demon you are reincarnated from and let me read your old book!

The Navy bought quite a lot of them, and I didn't even look at them all because of their praise.

This kind of narrative with different timelines tests the author's narrative skills The plot is a bit dull after reading it now Purely personal opinion, welcome to discuss and exchange

After looking at the introduction for a long time, the sentences didn't make any sense 😄, and then I looked at the comment area, and it turned out to be an LJ novel 😄

The comments section is all about good things, aren't we reading the same book?

It's a bit poisonous. You want a young lady to meet you in a nightclub? Can't you change the place?

I ran away, and the writing became more and more confusing. There was a feeling of suspense for the sake of suspense. It kept reversing and reversing. It was very tiring to read. Starting from the plot of destroying the world, the rhythm of the novel was chaotic, as if it was out of the outline, and I didn't know what was written next.

First of all, the protagonist's previous identity is easy to find. Why does an ordinary person suddenly have so much knowledge and achievements? Do you think those big guys can't find out anything? Or do you think a rich man who wants to get rich will not cooperate with local governments or even the central government? If wealth cannot be tied to politics, then his wealth will be lost quickly. If politics has no funds, then they will not get votes. So if wealth is tied to politics, they will not be able to find out anything about an extremely unreasonable guy like the protagonist? Are you not suspicious? And Jiang Ran's father, how could such a big entrepreneur be written like 🐷? He doesn't know anything about capital's tactics? Don't know anything about a guy who suddenly appears? Do you really regard the accumulation of capital as a fairy tale? If they take the initiative to get to know the protagonist, they will find that there are too many unreasonable things in the protagonist. Unreasonableness means trouble, or it doesn't matter if it is unreasonable to make money in the eyes of other bosses, but this is the daughter of a family, one has an ordinary status, the other has a mediocre university, the other has an average job content, a guy who has not shown any mathematical ability, or even any financial support, suddenly comes into contact with your relatives, and soon and mysteriously possesses extremely high knowledge. Wouldn't you be suspicious? If you become suspicious after so much, so many aspects confirm the protagonist's past ordinaryness, and he has come into contact with so many political figures and tycoons in the capital world for so many years of business, will you feel mysterious? No matter whether you are afraid or continue to investigate, there will be a reaction, right? Why write him as 🐷? There are also things in the computer eight years ago. The protagonist just memorized the above content. Do you really think that without systematic knowledge learning, the protagonist can have a series of knowledge and understand these things? This is equivalent to throwing calculus and Templer's formula to Archimedes. They don't even have a simple knowledge system, let alone understand it. At the very least, you have to arrange for someone to help the protagonist understand it, right? If the protagonist does not have systematic knowledge, how can the protagonist answer other people's questions with so many academicians? Not arousing suspicion at all? … In short, there are too many places that are unreasonable. The only advantage is that the imagination is good, but that's it. Because the logic is not coherent, this kind of imagination is of little use. At most, you can read it when you are in a book shortage and like to not use your brain.

A historical conspiracy theory novel, the plot is a bit like a genius club. In short, the protagonist inexplicably has an extra dream world, and then slowly explores and discovers that it is related to a high-dimensional organization that messes with time. The difference is that the protagonist of this book cannot directly affect reality through dreams, but uses higher-dimensional life to help him indirectly affect reality. It is more like downloading a copy in a dream to find clues to solve riddles. The level of brain-burning is a little lower than that of Genius Club, but it can still be read. What is a bit lacking is that the nightclub plot in the thirty-odd chapters is a bit urban Dragon King style. The scenes about the reunion of old classmates are a bit long-winded, and there are a lot of unnecessary urban stories written to pretend to be slap-in-the-face. It is understandable that you want to write the rich and stupid eldest daughter as the heroine, but there is no need to spend too much writing on such boring plots as silly Baitian. If you want to imitate Mystery and create a mysterious prophet character, you should design some ideas for the heroine. Whether it is the Mysterious heroine or the heroine of the Genius Club, the eldest lady admires the mysterious protagonist, and I have never seen them so silly and sweet.